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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Amazing update as always!!👏

Now u hooked me up with dis FF even more😳

Esp. the precap, i cant wait u gotta update Abhi! Its an order 🤓🤣🤣

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

I was shivering while reading update, n last line, dnt knw wat to say bt vry nyc part.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

uff...this will be dreadfull magic...im already scred to read further...but scary part...with true n sort of protector...

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

This captain...ugghh!! itna ghussa aaya mujhe uspar...

And i cant even imagine what Nupur's father will go through if they take Nupur with them...i know Mayank will keep her safe but such risk??!!!

And somehow something tells me this story will have a sad ending :( :( :( Please prove me wrong if you can, Angel...

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Extremely beautiful piece of writing dear

Father's fear ,Mayank as protector , Nupur's as responsible sister all emotions were perfectly portrayed.

So they wanna take Nupur with them as shield .But No fear when mayank is there

Superb part dear

thanks for Pm

cont soon

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

very nice FF.

awesome start.

like mayank ...he was save nupur from them.

bt who is mayank??

they wrnt thief...then who they r???

some kind of anti-social????

nice update.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

interesting concept!

both updates r amazing

the way u have portrayed everything...its perfect 👏

urghh this caption...he is getting on my nerves 😡

i hope Mayank protects Nupur from them

update the next part soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

kinzu the part was a fab really!!!!!!!!!!!!

urgh! hate that f**** caption who was seeing girls with such venom filled eyes!b******😡

(oops for using such language its just that i m a bit of feminist that's y ladki k against kuch bhi hota hai especially something u know what i mean to bahut gussa aata hai!!!!!!!)

nyways overall i loved the part hope mayank is able 2 save nupz which he will i m sure

just a req. as i can c its not some lovey dovey ff till now plz don't include any ra** scenes of nupz or anyone its painful 2 read n imagine!

love nuckts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Pradnya

@Prada_176

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Intriguing update Kinzu

You made Mayank terrorist 🥺 but with good heart, as long as he is with Nupur nothing wrong will happen

Whole tense atmosphere scared me…….. beautifully written

Thanks of PM

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

wow...interestin and amazing part...
then mayank is also one of them..n the protector among them was mayank!!
now they r gonna take nupur with them!!
continue soon