woah, awesome parts and a totally unexpected end! i'm so sorry for the late comment, was busy with tests n stuff.
nupur had come to mayank's room because she was scared of the rain. he was shocked that she came to him, because she had never trusted him.
she told him the truth about how she felt. she trusted him now, and wanted him to be close to her. he did'nt expect it, but he was happy that she was finally trusting him.
he told her that it was'nt his fault, but destiny's fault that he was a criminal, and he never wanted to take her away from her family.
when nupur woke up the next day, she started imagining her family, thats weird! she started speaking to them n stuff..
mayank realized that she knew they were dead. he did'nt know what to do. he tried talking to her, but she had totally lost her mind, and yes, she was trapped!
i totally did'nt expect it to end this way, with nupur going mad, but its a shocking end!
thanks for the pm