OS - Mohabbatein - Part One - New - 1/8/11

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1 -

Aham tells Gopi that he will give her dictation. Gopi is sad. Aham tells her to write the 1st word 'door' in hindi.Gopi who has tears in her eyes, closes the book and runs out of the room. Aham is worried. He wondered what has happened to her?

She has never been like that before. H knew Rashi and Urmila must have said something to her. Something was up. He knew this day Janamashtmi was special to Gopi but didn't know why? He stood up and went after her. It was only 12pm. It was nearly lunch.

The men weren't away office so they sat down and and chatted in the main hall.

Gopi runs to the terrace and broke down. She simply didn't know what to do. She was fed up with Rashi and Urmila. Her life was messed up and felt like telling the whole family about their cheap idiotic kalakarnis and how she been through.

She knew she had to tell Aham. He being supportive nowadays.

Aham runs upstairs to the terrace, and stops. He thinks that why is he being too supportive towards her. Why he is too caring ? For the 1st time he has gone against his mothers wish, but why he thought. Why is he melting?

He walks towards Gopi and calls her from behind in a cold shudder voice. Gopi froze. She thought this was the time to tell him everything. She turns around and starts to speak.

Aham stood there listening to her, all in shock and teary eyes. While downstairs everyone was busy chatting.

Aham goes downstairs and told Koki everything in her room. Koki was amazed. She had to do something. Aham decided to leave this house with Gopi for a few months so that Gopi can get back to normal and be relaxed. He infact didn't want her to get tension from Rashi and wanted her to stay away from Gopi so he booked the tickets to Ludhiana for 3 months.

Koki agrees to this, and lets them start packing for the trip in 3 days.

How will Rashi react to this? Will she be able to stop her?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww adaa...it was awesome...
I love it...too cute ya...😳
superb...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely Os ayesha loved it.
Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww..

what a fabulous OS...i love it ssoo much..

i hope Rashi wont be able to stop their trip as AHem n koki mummy knows abt Rashi n Urmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A really great start, looking forward to the next part.

So glad that Gopi went to the terrace and not to her kanaji and so glad she told Ahem everything.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really lovely OS

cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A very nice update.awesome .
please, update soon.
loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow! it really amazing very nice os plz do contioun soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely OS Ayesha! Ahem is so cute and kind. I can't wait for the next part 😃
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start dear... plzz continue

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