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MEGICAL LOVE

Hi, Friends, this is a small attempt to creat FF hope u will encourage my attempt.

This is the story of war between love and hatred. There is another world than our, the world of magic iss duniya ko bachane ke liye pyar zaroori hai. Magic ki iss duniya ko nafrat ne iss tarah barbaad kar rakha hai k logo ko bas kisi pyar ke farishte ki zaroorat haiii...


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MEGICAL LOVE


Characters...


GEET- A bubly girl and the only child of her parents... she is 10 years old and in 5th standerd... very lively and unaware of the whole world... will she be ready for upcoming events...????



Prince MAAN- He is the son of King JAY SINH KHURANA, king of the Megic World... Maan's father was killed by fraud... so he wants to take revenge for that...



KAVITA KHURANA- Maan's Mother.



RAJ HANDA- GEET's father, a doctor...




JAYA HANDA- Geet's mother, and she is also a doctor...


other characters will be introduced as per the story...


LINKS

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part 1

part 2

part 3

part 4

part 5

part 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9

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part 1

IN MEGICAL PALACE

The king JAY SINGH KHURANA is taking last breaths of his life'. He wants to meet his wife Kavita for the last time, and offcourse his child who is eager to come in the megical world from his mother's womb'. Jay wants to tell kavita about a serious thing'. Which will change her life and the wholw megical world'

Jay: Kavita, brij'. Wo brij will ruin our world'. He is evil' muje abhi pata chala'. Usne apni nafraat ki takat se mujhe itna kamjor kar diya hai k main aab kuch hi samay tak iss duniya main rahunga' tum hamare bachhe ko sambhal ke rakhna' use kehna ke main uss se bahut pyar karta hun'

Kavita: ye aap kya keh rahe ho'. Main aap ko kuch nahi hone dungi' main aapne jadu se aap ko bilkul thik kar dungi' aap ko kuch nahi hoga'.

JAY: nahi tum meri baat suno' brij ne aapni nafrat ki taakat se hamari duniya par kabza karna suru kar diya hai' magar hamare mahal par rakshak jaadu kiya hai jo mere khoon se bana hai, mera pyar tumari aur hamare bache ki raksha karega'

Jay has called Aakash, his best friend for an imp announcement'. Aakash came the palace in hurry'

Aakash: kya hua tumhe jay??? Bhabhi' aap thik to hain na..???

Jay: aab meri saanse puri hone ko hai' Aakash, tum meri bhavishyavani (prediction) ka record rakh ke use kahin sambhal kar rakhna' use brij ke haathon main mat aane dena'. Aur Kavita ka khayal rakhna'.

(Each king of the megical world can do a prediction at the time of death' which will come true')

Precap- THE PREDICTION'.

next- part 2

Plz guys, tell me wether I should write further or not' plz do comments'.

Edited by tulip_91 - 13 years ago
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Part 2

Jay's eyes rolled down'. His voice changed'. All stars of the sky are witnessing this moment'. Time is stopped'.. Bas ek aavaz hi palace main gunj rahi thi'.

" 1 mahine aur 11 din baad, poonam ki raat ko do nanhe farishte janm lenge iss duniya main jo pyar ki taakat ko badhayenge'. Hamari ujadti hui duniya ko aapne pyar ke rang se sawaarenge'. Who dono nafraat ki duniya ko kamzor karenge aapne pyar se'. jab puri duniya nafraat ke andhere main hogi tab woh dono pyar ki ek kiran leke aayenge'., 1mahine aur 11 din ke baad unka janm hoga, ek hi samay par, ek saath, duniya kea lag alag kone main'"

Aur tabhi jay ki sanse ruk jaati hai' his body turns into golden statue'. Kavita is totally broken down'. Aakash help her to get up and prepare her to do final rituals for Jay'.

Kavita half heartedly stood up and lifts the statue of jay with the help of Aakash and comes to the main mandap of the palace' the mandap is full of statues of other kings and queens who were proudly stood there'. Kavita called all the people of the empire of the magic and told them about the death of their king'. All are sad' they do final pooja of the statue and prayed for good of entire world's happiness'. Then they place Jay's golden statue in highest place of the mandap as he was the kindest king of theirs'..

On othe hand, Brij, the black magician got more powers by killing the king Jay, the whitw magician'. Brij startrd to take over the megical empire one by one'. People were scared of him'.. even the silver and the golden flowers of the gardens become black'. The strength of black magicians started to increase'. It has been a month , after the death of Jay. Kavita left to the unknown place with her unborne child, and aakash used to help her in every situation as he has promised to Jay' people of the megical world are praying god to send some farishta to ease their lives'.

In Our World'.

Dr. Raj Handa and his wife are very excited as a small angel is going to come to their lives'. They both pray god to give them a small little angel, a cute baby girl'. Dr. Jaya Handa has 9th month of pregnancy'. They are unaware of the other world besides their door'.!!!

After 1month and 11days of the death of King Jay'..

Kavita dard se tadap rahi thi'. Aakash has arranged a doctor from the ordinary world as Kavita is hinding herself and her child from the magical world'. The doctor is trying to deliver the baby at Kavita's house'.. on other hand, in Mumbai, Dr. jaya is also in labour room, in pain'.. at midnight, Kavita heard a cry of a small baby in the world' she relived form the pain and her eyes are filled with joy'. It was a baby boy'. Like his father JAY'. Where doctor give a cute little angel, a baby girl into the hands of Jaya'.. Raj jumped to see his little pari' he can listen to the melodius cry of his daughter'.

At this time, the stars of the sky were twinkling in joy and clouds were dancing'. The full moon come closer to see both the childs and the whole world blessed both of them'.


next part- scroll down

PREVIOUS- PART 1

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sorry guys, meri exams chal rahi hai...

Part 3

Dr. raj and jaya ne apni nanhi pari ko GEET bulaya... jisne unki zindagi main sangeet bhar diya... ye nanhi pari jahan bhi jaati, sabka dil jeet leti... kabhi aapni baato se to kabhi apni aankho se... pata nahi kya khas tha us nanhi jaan main jo sabko khushnuma bana deti thi...

Kavita was filling the emptyness of her life by his small prince MAAN.. uske aane se vo aapna sara gum bhul gai... aab uski zindagi ka sirf ek hi maksad tha - MAAN ko us layak banana ki vo Brij ki takat ke samne na sirf tik paye , usko maat (defeat) bhi de paye...

Maan and geet are of 10years now but never eachother yet... As geet is from ordinary world, she doesnt know anything about the megical world... where maan also dont know about truth of himself being son of king of megical world as aakash and kavita decided to not telling the truth to him till the right time for the sake of his safety... geet and maan's lives were running peacefully in different places... they are unaware of wat fortune had decided for both of them...

@Handa's

jaya- geet, uto mere bacha, deko 7 baj gaye... tume aaj school nahi jaana kya..?

geet- mama, sone do na plz... 2 min...

jaya- nahi... (taking her to bathroom, giving her toothbrush...) chalo aab a6ii bachi ki tarah ready ho javo... muje aur daddy ko clinic bhi to jaana hai na...

geet- mumma, i wl take aaloo ke parathe in breakfast today... ok..

jaya- thik hai my lil angel bt u get ready fast...

@khurana's

Maan- maa mera breakfast kidhar hai... muje school jaana hai...

kavita- tu itni jaldi kyun taiyaar hoke baitha hai?? abhi to time hai na school ke liye... aur rahi baat breakfast ki to voh maine dining table par rakh diya hai... main abhi aati hun...

Maan- thik hai.. main khud le leta hu... tum kab aa rahi ho table pe...?

phone rang..

Kavita- (from kitchen) maan zara phone uthana...

Maan- (receiving phone) hello, oh! aakash chachu... kaise ho aap...

aakash - thik hun... zara kavitabhabhi ko phone dena...

Maan- ok. maa, chachu ka phone hai aap ke liye...

kavita - (on phone) haan aakash, bolo.. aaj subha subha...

aakash tells her sumthing that terrifies kavita... maan was looking at her...he got worried and asked her wats the prob...

Kavita- thik hai hum aaj hi shift karenge... aakash tum saari taiyari kar lo... hum yahan packing karte hain...
(looking at Maan) maan, Hume aaj hi yeh city chhod ke kahin aur shift karna hai... do your packing as fast as u can...

maan- but why maa???

kavita- u trust me na??? he noded in yes.. then dont ask me any question now... just do as i say.. i will tell u later...

maan starts packing... they are ready to leave... aakash came and drive them towards another city...

precap- maaneet meet 😊

plz comment...i m waiting...

new precap- Handa's new neighbours... guess who??

next part-4
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Guys, my exams are going on... so i will update a package of parts after a month...😔
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