Maaneet FF- MAGICAL LOVE - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

108

Views

34.1k

Users

42

Likes

472

Frequent Posters

saam123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#31
WOW VERY NICE STORY
CAN'T WAIT 4 WHEN THEY
GROW UP.MAAN IN WHOLE
DIFFERENT WORLD
SO NICE STARTING
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
--Ratna-- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Thank u for the sweet and cute update 🤗...loved it ..Maaneet scenes were so cute😍 ...glad they became friends...plz continue...TC 😊



tulip_91 thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#33
IMP note... Guys i have to go to my village due to my uncle's severe illness...😭 will back as soon as possible... nd then give update... till then take care... have a nice life... and ya, HAPPY DIWALI and HAPPY NEW YEAR...
TanuDDian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#34
hey y ur saying happy new year nw itself...
u be back next year...????
tulip_91 thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: geetsweet

hey y ur saying happy new year nw itself...

u be back next year...????


may be... my uncle is ill and i have to b with him now... will try to give an update from my cell wenever i get chance...
seemamary thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Loved it, do add me in your PM list and plsss and do PM the next updates. continue soon.
tulip_91 thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#37

note-sorry guys i couldnt update before as i have to go to my village as my uncle was ill... nw i m back... i need ur support and love...


MEGICAL LOVE

Part '6

Geet drags maan to his room and started chatting with him while roaming around his room. She herslf checked every corner of his room- bathroom, bed, cupboards, dressing table, each drawers'.she was continuously talking and commenting on his stuffs and he just silently followed her and was observing each and every movement of his newly found angel'


Geet-(opening his cupboard and searching for albums')Maan, where are your photographs..??? I want to see them' How you celebrate your birthday??? Do you participate in dance competition during your annual functions??? Show me your each and every pic, I want to see how you looked wen u were a small child'Plz show me na..


Maan becomes teary and remains silent' geet again asks about his childhood pics and other memories but Maan remains silent'he was near bursting out' now Geet faces maan and sees him really sad' she goes nearer to him and starts crying...


Geet- I m sorry maan.. have I hurt you??? Why r u so sad? R u mad at me??? I m really sorry maan, I shouldn't have touched ur things without ur permission'plz don't b mad at me' I wont do it again.. if you will say, I will leave and never come to your room without ur permission..sorry na.. mumma says it is bad manner to do this and look how stupid I m, I have done exactly done wat mumma said not to do' and made u sad' sorryyy'(and started crying more loudly..)

Maan's heart ached seeing his angel crying bitterly because of him. He hugged her tightly nd said- geet, don't cry plz, its not ur fault at all' I m not mad at u' and u can come and touch each and every particle present here whenever u want' whenever' my each belonging now belongs to u.. how can I b mad at u??? stop crying na' now ur tears r hurting me'.

Listening to this, geet becomes somewhat silent and asked maan making baby face- if u r not mad at me then why r u so sad???


Maan- bcoz I have not any pic of mine to show u..(and tears starts rolling down his eyes)


Geet-why??? Don't u celebrate ur birthdays???

Maan becomes more sad and takes geet's hand in his hand , made her sut besides him on the bed.


Maan- I have never celebrated my birthday' my dad never comes to us, not even on my birthdays' he is working abroad since I have born'. I don't like to celebrate my birthday alone' I didn't have any friend before to make my memories'.

Geet sits in maan's lap and cups his face , removes his tears from his cheeks by her tiny fingers')- ohoo' Don't worry, now I m here with u na' so how u will be alone' we will celebrate ur birthday this time' me and u will capture each and every special moment of our lives and treasure them .. I will make sure that u have enough collection of our memories.. ok?? Now be happy and come with me to the bicycle ride' (maan smiles at her and accompanied her')

MONDAY @ Maan's School'

It was maan's first day at school and was quite nervios thinking that he doesn't know anyone here, how he will manage in this new place.. he was with Aakash in the principle's office. Principle told him that he will join his classes after the lunch break and he himself will introduce maan to the class and assured Aakash about maan' then aaksah leaved.

After lunch break, principle guides maan to his class. It was activity period. All the studens were busy with somw activity.. some were painting.. some were making toys from clay, some were making scraps.. principle entered class with maan who seemed quite nervous'


Principle- attention everyone, I have a new friend of yours with me, MAAN SINGH KHURANA, ur new classmate. I m sure u all will befriend with him and also help him to adjust here' and leaves the class.

Some boys came to maan and welcomed him.. but Rohan and his gang didn't like the new boy at the first sight.. they came to maan.


Rohan- (pointing towards Maan) look at this boy' naam to itna bada hai jaise koi PRINCE ho' 'MAAN SINGH KHURANA' aur shakal (face) se to bilkul 'fatoo' lag raha hai' (all starts laughing at maan, maan didn't utter a word but a loud roar comes from behind maan)


" HOW DARE U CALL HIM FATOO , U MORON??"

Rohan and maan turn to the person who roared and both shocked' all were looking at Geet who was fuming with anger. She came nearer to Rohan and pointed a warning finger to him-


"DON'T U EVER DARE CALL HIM FATOO' OR ELSE U WILL HAVE TO FACE BAD SIDE OF GEET HANDA' IT'S THE FIRST AND LAST WARNING TO U' STAY AWAY FROM HIM'"

Rohan laughs at her- yeh to kamala ho gaya'. Kal ki chuhiya (rat) aaj sherni kaise ban gyi? Jo aaj tak mere samne muh kholne to kya khadi bhi nahi rah pati thi aaj sherni bani fir rahi hai aur who bhi iss fatoo ke liye' Jo khud chup khada hai' gunga hai kya?? interesting'! Waise nice como- FATSO and FATOO' what say guys??? And all started laughing'

SLAP!!!!

Everyone in the class heared the sound of a tight slap given by Geet to Rohan on his face' rohan's cheek becomes red and his eyes teary'


Geet- I warned you not to call him 'FATTOO'. He is MAAN SINGH KHURANA , GEET HANDA's best friend' remember this' and he is quite bcoz he is a prince' my prince' he usually doesn't talk to cheap person like u' and ya, also remember this slap for neglecting my warning' now leave our way' she held Maan's hand tight and dragged maan with her leaving everyone shocked by showing her new angry girl avatar'

It took some time to Rohan for understanding what had happened few minutes before'


Rohan(self talk)- geet, you and maan both will surely pay for insulting me infront of whole class' I will make sure that both of u will pay for wat u have done to me'

Precap- first sign of megic

Guess if u can'

previous- part 5

next- part 7

Plz press the LIKE button and leave ur sweet comments'.


please add tulip_91_pm to receive PMs of my ff

Edited by tulip_91 - 13 years ago
6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#38


very cute update...

Maan-Geet become friends and Maan is already can't see her tears...Geet changed into sherni avtaar for her Maan...wow...

precap is interesting---first sign of his powers will be visible...

continue soon...thanx for pm
seemamary thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Amazing, loved it and I liked the way our sherni geet slapped Rohan he deserves it. I' am confused with the precap.😍 update soon.
tulip_91 thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: seemamary

Amazing, loved it and I liked the way our sherni geet slapped Rohan he deserves it. I' am confused with the precap.😍 update soon.


first sign of magic...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Mridzy

1 years ago

Maaneet NEW SS - Contractually Yours - UPDATE: Part 3 - Page 14 - 3/3

Hello again everyone! Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for reading and loving my OS - Elevator Encounters. Motivated by that, here I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 45~02.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

8 months ago

Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25 Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25

This story is about teenage Maan and Geet who met at a marriage. Whoever is interested in reading pls responds to this post. Ignore if not...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

4 years ago

Maaneet Dreamworld

due to inactivity my previous thread closed,so opening new one here Maaneet magical couple Maaneet Dreamworld bookmark the update thread or join...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".