Maaneet FF- MAGICAL LOVE - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nice update...

Loved it...

Do contiue soon...
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Part 5

Maan- by the way, yeh tumhari cycle hai??? Nice cycle haan'.


Geet-(smiling) yah, maine aaj hi li hai'. Tum ride karoge???


Maan- main tumhari cycle kaise chala sakta hoon???


Geet- Arrey, aise kaise nahi chala sakte??? Yeh tumhari bi to cycle hai abse'


Maan-meri cycle'?


Geet- aur nahi to kya? Tum tum mere friend ho na to yeh tumhari bi cycle hui na??


Maan- friend????


Geet- ohooo.. tum question bahut karte ho yaar'. Aaj tumne meri help ki aur tumne mera majak bi nahi udaya to hue na mere friend'!!!

(tears in her eyes) tum banoge na mere dost??? All laugh at my chubbiness so I have only few friends aur who bi meri school main'


Maan- tum itni sweet aur cute ho.. kaun nahi karega tumse dosti??

Aaj se hum dono best friend hai' mera bi koi dost nahi' aab se u r my only one and dearest friend'. Thik hai' now give me ur smile'

Geet smiles at him then hugs him' maan was very much excited for having such a lovely friend'

Both took ride on Geet's cycle'then maan and geet go towards their homes'

Geet- maan tum mere ghar chalo na, main tumhe apna room dikhati hoon aur toys bi'


Maan- geet, tum ghar jao, main baad main aata hoon' ma ko batana hai' shayad vo chinta kar rahi hogi'


Geet-par aana jaldi' I m waiting..(then she goes to her home almost jumping..)

Maan goes to his home and told Kavita the whole incident' Kavita can see that he is extreamly happy to have his first friend in his life' he told Kavita that he is going to geet's place and not to worry.. then headed towards next block'

Here at Handa's, Geet ordered maid to prepare chocolate cake, French fries and some soft drinks also as her best friend is coming to her place for the first time'

Maan reaches to geet's place. Geet runs to him, hugs him and took him toward her room.. maan was amused by seeing her room. It was totally girly- pink walls, pink curtains, pink bed shits, pink pillows' lots of teddies on her bed' a small study table on one corner with pink chair' there are various colour pincils and crayons ans paper shits on the table' And a small dressing table on other side which is full of tiny colourful hair clips and her other stuffs'


She hold his hand, and made him sit on her bed. They talk for a long time' she also showed him her painting' then maid took the cake and other food stuffsto her room'


At the same time MR. & Mrs. Handa entered the home. They ame early today as it was Saturday, half day at clinic. They were surprised to see the arrangement for a small party at their angel's room' they saw geet very happy with a boy of same age as her' geet introduced maan to her parents'


Geet- papa, mumma, meet my best friend MAAN' she told about morning incident to her parents and then the reason for the party'


Both geet and maan cut the cake together and feed cake to eachother' all of them had their lunch together' MR. and Mrs. Handa were surprised as they noticed that Maan was very much matured as compared to the children of his age' then again geet took maan to her room and started to show him the photos of her childhood'. Her birthdays' school functions' etc' maan was silent and looking at geet's small small gastures and her sweet innocent talks' she was the second person after his maa ti shower her love on him without any expectations'


Both geet and maan played with each other the whole day.. Lateron, maan bids good bye to geet and her parents in evening and returned to his home' He was jmping in happiness in the whole house and telling about his new friend GEET to kavita' he was constantly telling about geet and her cute talks till Kavita closed his mouth with Paratha on the dinner and then took him to his bed' today maan slept with a wide smile on his face' By seeing her son's happiness , Kavita had tears in her eyes. She thanked god for her son's happiness and went to sleep'

Next day morning at Khurana's'

Maan gets ready for going to meet Geet.. he had his breakfast and about to go out' Doorbell rung' he opens the door and saw geet at the door..


Maan- Geet, tum?? Main tumhare paas hi aa raha tha abhi'


Geet-pata hai.. but that's not fair na' maine tumhara ghar to dekha hi nahi' hato na , muje andar bhi aane do'( and she enters the house)


Kavita- Maan beta, kaun hai??


Maan-Maa, meri best friend'


Geet- (to maan) tumhato raste se, muje aunty se milne do.. (to kavita) hi aunty, main Geet hoon, maan ki best friend' (and gives a small kiss on Kavita's cheek, kavita smiles at her gesture') dekho na aunty, I m here to see him and wo muje apna room bi nahi dikhane le jaa raha'(geet complaints and maan was taken aback by her dominance)


Maan- aab maine kya kiya'??


Geet- uffooo, baat baat par sawal karta rehta hai' lagta hai aab muje hi use khinch ke uske kamre main le jana padega'(to kavita) uska room kidhar hai aunty..??


Maan was now smiling at her innocence and kavita was loving geet's cute talk'.


Kavita(self talk)- sirf ye hi maan se apni baat manva sakti hai'

Kavita (to geet)-who to aisa hi hai' tum log upar wale kamre main jao.. main aap dono ke liye snakes leke aati hoon'


Geet happily holds maan's hand and drags him to his room'

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Edited by tulip_91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very cute beautiful update...thanx for pm...

Maan and Geet become friends...but they don't know that they are soul mates who have to conquer the magical world with their love...

waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really nice
so party bhi ho gayi
now i want to see first sign of maan powers
waiting dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update dear 😛

keep writing 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsmmm...pls update soon d nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
very lovely ff...
please add me to ur pm list...

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