Maaneet FF-KASHMAKASH- WHEN REALITY STRUCK - Page 7

Awesome update yaar :D
Oopd bechari geet. Bhala karne ki koshish mein. Khud hi phass gayi :(. Hope Maan will save her :)

PART-8

One among those boys inches towards her'..."Ohh Really!!!"...achha uunhko chod dete hain'...tumko pakadte hain'...what say guys'...!! Maal achha hai'...he gives a weird look to Geet. It seems all of them are hugely drunk. Arohi tries to pull Geet out from there, but she can't even reach to her as that place is hugely crowded. Those creepiest bloods leave that old man & are moving now towards Geet. She clearly understands their intention & tries to escape from there, but one of them holds her dupatta & tears it up. Geet shouts out for help. A huge gathering presents over there, still all remains immovable, silently watching a girl being molested openly in public. Arohi yells at people for requesting to help her friend. But no one comes forward to save them. That wild bunch of entities thrusts Geet straight down on the platform. First few minutes Geet tries hard to protect herself from those human-creatures, but her tiny-weak protest couldn't last for long. Before being senseless, Geet can realize that a strong hand is there trying to stop those blood-suckers from ruining down her virginity.

Geet opens up her eyes, watching herself lying down on her bed. Rano sits nearby, caressing her hair. Their family Doctor is also there, checking Geet's BP. After a while, Brij enters there & asks him how is she. Doctor tells him to come outside the room. Both walk out to the hall area. Daarji & Papaji are also present there.

Daarji: Dr. Sahab , sab thik toh hai naa ?

Doctor: Dekhiye thik hai bhi aur nahi bhi...

Brij: Matlab?

Doctor: Matlab aisa kuch nahi huya jishka aapko darr tha, bas kuch mamuli se zakhm hai'...jo bhar jaayenge'...par uushke saath kal raat jo bhi kuch huya, unh saree wardaaton ki wajahse uuske dil ko bahut bada shock laga hai'.

All remains silent. Doctor continues, aap sab bas iitna khayal rakhiye key usshe koi bhi tarha ki stress naa ho'...aur hain, koi bhi Geet ko uush incident ke bare mein yaad dilane ki koshish na kare , iishka ussh par galat asar padh sakta hai. Suddenly Rano runs there in.

Rano: Doctor sahab , Geet kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai'...maine kitni koshish ki uusse baat karne ki'...magar lagta hai jaise meri awaz uushke kaan o tak pahaunch hi nahi rahi hai.

Doctor again enters into Geet's room.

Now Geet sits on her bed, having a totally vacant look. There are very prominent signs of bruises all over her face, neck, hands. Although she doesn't care for anything or anyone else inside the room. Doctor tries to call her name many more times, but she doesn't respond at all. There is no expression, no tear in her eyes, just a blank look.

Rano: Kaya huya Doctor saab, yeh baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai'?

Doctor: Maine kaha naa aapse 'ussh ghatna ki wajahse Geet ko bahut bada sadma laga hai'..iisshi liye yeh aise behave kar rahi hai'...aap log jitni jaldi ho sake Geet ko kuch kahalwane ki koshish kijiye'...ushe rulane ki koshish kijiye...'agar yeh jayda der tak kuch naa boli toh iishka aage chalke bahut bura asar ho sakta hai. Everyone departs from the room except Rano, she hugs Geet & tries to make her speak, but it seems that Geet merely feels anything around her. She sits there like a doll made up of sheer Stones.

In the evening Dev's Mom reaches there in the Handa House to meet Daarji. Geet's family is assuming some turmoil to be happened.

Dev's Mom: Bhaisahab, Geet ke saath jo kuch bhi huya woh nahi hona chahiye tha, humein bahut dukh huya sun kar'...she pauses, par bhaisahab, yeh sab hone ke baad hamare liye Geet ko apne khandaan ki bahu banana mumkin nahi hoga'...everyone out there becomes stunned.

Papaji: Bahenji yeh kaya kah rahin hain aap, uundono ki Sagai ho chuki hai...aur jo bhi huya woh ek haadsa tha'.!!

Brij: Aur sirf badnaami naa ho, iish wajeh se humne police-complaint bhi nahi karwayee'.

Dev's Mom: Dekhiye Bhaisahab , humein aaplogone ke saath puree humdardi hai, par iitni badnaami hone ke baad hum bilkul nahi chahenge key Geet hamare parivaar ka hissa bane'...akhir hamari bhi Society mein ek iijjat hai, ek rutva hai'...Mittal Khandan kisi aisi ladki o apne Parivaar mein samil nahi kar sakta , jisse sare-aam'...

Par isshmein hamari bachhi ki kaya galti hai '...Rano interrupts'...there are so much anger & pain in her voice.

Dev's Mom: Bahenji, yeh faisla hamara nahi Dev ka hai'...unhone hi iish shadi se iinkaar kar diya hai'...aab aap hi batayiye hum kaya kar sakte hain'

Dev ne mana kar diya hai '..Rano gets shocked.

Dev's Mom: Aur yeh Geet ki di huyee anguthi bhi lauta ne ko kaha hai unhone'...she places that Engagement ring up on the table. Rano can't hold herself, she rushes over there into Geet's room , holds Geet & shouts out'...dekh , woh tera rista todne aaye hain, aab toh kuch bol 'Geet'...Dev ne teri anguthi wapas kar di'...woh tujhse shadi nahi karna chahta ...''Geet'...kuch toh bol meri bachhi'...kuch toh bol'...kuch toh bol'...she bursts out in tears'.. her words , her tears have no effect on Geet. She has been looking completely lost in that great darkness of silence.

A whole week has gone, during this time Rano, Geet's friends have tried many more times to make her speak, but she never responds to anyone else. All the time she sits on her bed, looking towards the floor, or sometimes outside the window. She never eats properly. It seems that life has been stopped for her.

Today, Arohi comes there in Handa house to meet Geet. She enters into Geet's room, with a newspaper in her hand. She puts it on to the bed & finds Geet standing next to the window, watching outside with a blank look. Arohi also reaches there next to Geet & hugs her warmly.

Arohi: Kaisi hai Geet'...Geet keeps silent. Arohi knows she doesn't get any answer from her, still continues with her talking. Meanwhile Rano enters.

Rano: Are Arohi beta, tum kab aayee?

Arohi: Bas abhi abhi aayee hun aunty'...aunty, Geet kaisi hai, dawaii o ka kuch asar ho raha hai kaya??

Rano: Kuch bhi asar nahi ho raha , naa hi kuch bolti hai , aur naa hi kuch sunnti hai '...hain pahle sirf bistar mein hi baithi rahti thi, do din se dekh rahi hun , uthke khidki ki taraf jaa rahi hai '..bas'...iishe jayda kuch nahi'. ..."Bahuu"'..Rano hears Daarji calling from outside.

Rano: Arohi, tum baitho beta, main aati hun'...mujhe Daarji ke liye chaye banani hai', She tries to move towards the kitchen.

Arohi: Chaliye aunty main aapki madat kar deti hun'...she follows Rano into the kitchen.

Arohi helps Rano in making teas. Both are discussing about the present circumstances over there. Rano makes the tea & serves to Daarji & the rest of the family & then takes some tea for Geet also in a tray & moves towards back to her room. Arohi follows her & continues with her talking.

Arohi: Aunty aapko pata hai aaj paper mein uush ladke ke bare mein news aayee hai...'jisne ushdin hamari Geet ki jaan banchayee thi. Main aapko hi dikhane ke liye woh paper laayee hun apne saath'...aunty, agar uushdin woh nahi hota naa, pata nahi kaya ho jata hamare Geet ke saath. Uushwaqt toh main darr ke maare Geet ko lekar ghar chali aayee thi'...mujhe toh pata bhi naa tha key baad mein uush ladke saath kaya huya tha.

'..kaya huya tha uushke saath'.? Rano looks worried.

Arohi: Aunty, pata hai unh gundo ne uush ladke ko Metro rail ke niche fenk dene ki koshish ki thi'.

Kaya '.!!! Rano gets shocked.

Arohi: Hain aunty, sukr hai Bhagbaan ka woh jaan se toh banch gaya...par '

Rano: Par kaya'!!! Rano can't wait.

Arohi: Ushka ek haath aa gaya train ke niche'...Rano stops her breath for a while ...'her eyes fill with tears.

Arohi continues'...hain aunty, aur aapko pata hai, yeh ladka Delhi ka ek bahut hi achha Cricketer tha...jo ki iish saal India team mein samil hone wala tha'...bechare ki puree carrier hi barbaad ho gayee'...mujhe toh kuch bhi nahi pata tha aunty, aaj paper mein padhke pata chala'...chaliye aapko dikhati hun woh paper. They almost have reached to Geet's room.

Rano asks in shock'...kaya naam hai uush ladke ka?

"MAAN"...Rano , Arohi both get stunned by hearing this name from Geet. That Tea-tray has fallen down from Rano's hand as she finds Geet standing over there right in front of them holding that newspaper in her hand, her eyes are filled with tears'...she again speaks out the name ..."MAAN"'.

PRECAPE: MUJHE MAAN SE MILNA HAI...

PART- 7

PART-9

wow man the story is so intense... i m simply loving it and i want to read more of it... can u plz pm me for ur future updates...

awesome update...👏👍🏼

i feel very bad fr both maan n geet...more fr maan...coz his dreams to play in indian team cant b fulfilled now...pudi zindagi badbaad ho gaye...im sooo sorry...😭😭😭😭😭😭

im feeling like kill dev...frm first only i dont like him...i hate him...😡😡👎🏼👎🏼🐷🐷he said he started loving her...he dont even trust her...love is far away...

thanx to GOD...geet banch gayi...im tooo happy fr geet...❤️
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superb update.

Awesome part!
Maan to the rescuee!
awww her first word is Maan<3
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Maan saved her...he is true hero

Dev's mom return the ring telling that Dev has returned it and he doesn't want to have any relation with her because of the incident...spineless people😡..

😲 Maan is injured he lost his hand...those goons threw him in front of train..😭

Hey kankana

it was jst brilliant dear...
A very beautiful plot...very unusal n intriguing story...

shamy wonders can ne other maan do dis 4 ne other geet? Does dis reality actualy strike?

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

hei it was an awsmm update... d story is getting more n more interesting... huh really people have lost their spine... even here in Kolkata we come to see such news every now n then ... I felt so bad for Geet... I m sure Dev doesn't reject Geet its her evil mom's conspiracy ... n Oh God what happen to Maan... Its really painful... ur story has a base of sheer reality.. loving it... cont soon