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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Thanx for pm...sis.

wonderful part...Maan has started feeling for Geet...Dev told Geet about his life...but hum to Maaneet fan hain to Dev kuch bhi kar le humein pasand nahin aayega Geet ke sath...

Kankana...sab ki jindagi mein bure- achche dono incidents hote hain...but we don't behave badly with everybody for any other person's fault...Dev has suffered a lot and he has seen his father done wrong with his mother...after seeing his mother's suffering he should behave properly with Geet so that she should not suffer what his mother suffered...but how he talked with Geet it is not justified by his sad past...if his father wear bow-ties then he can accept Geet's gift and keep it in any corner of his house.


Dii, aapki baat thik hai, but har insaan ka apne jazbaat express karneka tareeka alag hota hai naa...MAAN ko hi le lo...GHSP wali...woh kaise rudely behave karta tha GEET se suru suru mein, aur abhi bhi karta hai, jab key koi valid reason hi nahi hai, yahan DEV ke saath toh iitna bada haadsa huya tha...Dii, ek baat kahun , plzzz don't mind...u can't realize his pain until u face it by ur own self...main nahi chahti aisa kisike saath v ho, par yeh baat hi kuch aisi hai...agar DEV ki jagha main hoti , toh sayed aise hi react karti...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Amazing FF dear.
Very nice and strong concept.
Im liking the fact that geet use to get confused about dev.
But yaar after knowing dev's past and the way he asked geet not to ever leave her. You got me senty there :o
Now i dont want geet to be apart from dev :(
Hehe Maan is falling for Geet.

Cant wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awesome update...👍🏼👍🏼

i think frm d pov of dev...he is right...but my thinking is when someone suffers like dat...he knws d pain...so its natural to knw others pain also...doosreka dard ko bhi mehsoos kar sakta hai...magar yahan pe toh dev became heartless...uske toh kisike parwah nehi hai...agar woh rishton pe biswas nehi karta toh kyun rishta jodne ja raha hai...actually dis dev is critical to understand...i think something fishy is dere...lets wait n watch...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome update...👍🏼👍🏼

i think frm d pov of dev...he is right...but my thinking is when someone suffers like dat...he knws d pain...so its natural to knw others pain also...doosreka dard ko bhi mehsoos kar sakta hai...magar yahan pe toh dev became heartless...uske toh kisike parwah nehi hai...agar woh rishton pe biswas nehi karta toh kyun rishta jodne ja raha hai...actually dis dev is critical to understand...i think something fishy is dere...lets wait n watch...

thank u fr d pm...😊😃😆

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har insaan ka apne jazbaat express karneka tareeka alag hota hai naa...MAAN ko hi le lo...GHSP wali...woh kaise rudely behave karta tha GEET se suru suru mein, aur abhi bhi karta hai, jab key koi valid reason hi nahi hai, yahan DEV ke saath toh iitna bada haadsa huya tha...aur shadi sayed woh apne Dadaji se kiya huya wada nivhane ke liye kar raha ho...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsm part... aree now I can understand n justify Dev's reaction... but ye to panga ho gayi naa... Geet sayed kuch din baad Maan ko chahne lagegi but Dev ke liye uski man me jo sympathy hai dat will drag her behind... its really difficult when u r much sympathetic towards one, u cant chose ur happiness coz u feel u r getting selfish but sympathy cant be a strong base of a relationship... hmm its really complicated .. do cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

PART-7



Geet can't say anything & can't control her tears too'...actually she can't find any words to console him, just let him cry'. Dev is crying like a little kid trying to pull out all those pain, agony which he has buried within his heart so far.



Maan comes there in Pari's house to meet her. Pari is waiting for him. There is nobody in the house. Maan looks quite awkward.

Maan: Uncle, aunty kahan hai?

Pari: Koi nahi hai...in a quite seductive voice...bas tum aur main'...she inches towards Maan & sits just beside him, puts her fingers on Maan's hair. Maan understands her intention, he immediately gets up from there.

Maan: Pari, yeh kaya kar rahi ho tum'...main yahan tum se kuch bahut zazuri baat karne aaya hun.

Pari: Zaruri baatein'...iishhe bhi jayda zaruri kaunsi baatein hai Maany, she again tries to get closer to Maan & tries to caress his face. Maan makes her stop by holding her hand.

Maan: Plzz, stop all this non-sense Pari, we really need to talk.

Pari: About what'...ookk'...let me guess'...tum hamari shadi ke baremein soch rahe ho, hai naa'...don't worry, maine Papa se kah diya hai'...jisdin tumhari team mein selection hogi naa, uushi raat Papa ek grand party rakhnewale hain & there he will announce the date of our marriage'... Pari's eyes become glittery.

Maan: Nahi , Pari, woh baat nahi hai.

Pari: Toh phir'..hainn, Honeymoon...'right'.!! par maine soch liya Maany, mujhe Switzerland hi jana hai, wahan barfeelii wadiyon mein tum aur main...haaye'...Pari starts day-dreaming.

Maan awfully looks at her. She continues with her Post-marriage plans.

Maan: Main chalta hun, mujhe practice ke liye jana hai.

Pari: Par'..Maany'...tumhe toh kuch baat karni thi naa'...hellooo'...

He stands up & walks away from there,Pari keeps shouting his name,but he doesn't care.


A few days later, finally that moment has come. The Engagement day. The whole HANDA family looks extremely happy, as their daughter is going to be married with one of the richest guy of the town. Geet is there in her room, looking very pretty in her green Salwar-suit. Her friends are there to help her in getting jewelry & all those stuff. Rano enters there & tells everyone to leave Geet alone for a while. After everyone departs, Rano sits there & thoroughly watches Geet' a drop of tear comes out through her eyes.

Rano: Meri choti si bachhi aaj kitni badi ho gayee hai'...kitni pyaari lag rahi hai,kisiki nazar naa lage,she takes some KAJAL from her eyes & puts it there on the back of Geet's ear.

Rano: Beta , tuh khus hai naa'.

Geet: Hain Maa, main khus hun '..Dev bahut achhe insaan hai,maine hi uunhe galat samjha tha, aap sahi kah rahi thi kisiko samajhne mein waakehi kaafi waqt lag jata hai. Rano smiles & kisses her forehead,chal, woh log aa gaye hain, rasam bas suru hi honewali hai,Rano takes Geet out from the room towards the hall area, where the ceremony is about to take place.

The Engagement ceremony has been completed. Dev makes Geet wear a beautiful, white-gold, diamond-studded ring. Geet too provides him a nice, gold ring.

They both are looking quite happy with each other. Geet finds an extra dazzle in Dev's eyes today with a blend of gentleness, civility & concern for her.

Dev inches a little bit towards Geet & signals her to go away from there. Dev takes Geet on to the roof of the attic, away from the chaos of the party as he wants to tell her something.

Dev: Geet, main aaj raat ko hi U.S jaa raha hun.

Geet stares at him,she can feel that pain within his eyes, the pain of leaving her away.

Geet doesn't know what to say. Actually in past few days a natural attachment has been grown up there in her heart for Dev. She understands his pain, his suffering. But the thing she doesn't understand is how to react to this guy. Geet knows that Dev starts to fall for her, she can read it in his eyes. But why she can't feel the same. She has sympathy for him, but does she has any feelings more than that'!!! Does she love him'? this is the only thing she keeps asking by herself from the last few days, but can't get any answer so far. Dev holds her hand'...looks at her eyes...

Dev: Geet, main tumhse pyaar karne laga hun'...par mujhe nahi pata tum mere liye kaya feel karti ho...Geet remains silent.

Sayed yeh jo waqt humein mil raha hai, zaruri hai hamare liye,takey hum ek dusre ko aur jayda jaan sake. Aur kaya pata mujhse durr jake sayed tumhe bhi mujhse'...

Main nahi jaanti mera dil aapke liye jo feel karta hai woh kaya hai '... Geet interrupts.

Maine bahut socha Dev, par mujhe koi jawab nahi mila'...par sayed main aapse pyaar nahi karti'...Dev smiles at her'...waise bhi mujhse koi bhi pyaar nahi karta Geet'...chalo aaj hum ek naye riste ki suruyat karte hain'.

Geet looks surprised'...Kaunsa naya rista!!!

Dev: Dosti kaa'...duniya ki nazro mein hum bhalehi mangetar hain'...lekin ek dusre ke liye kaya hum achhe dost nahi ban sakte !! aane wale 6 mahino mein sayed tumhe lage ke hamari dosti ko aage kisi aur mukaam par le jaya jaa sakta hai'.

Geet: Aur agar aisa naa huya toh!!

Dev: Tumaha har faisla mujhe kabool hoga Geet'...tumhara jawab chahe "Hain" ho yah "Naa"'...bas iitna yaad rakhna key yeh Dev Mittal hamesha tumhara dost rahega, aur tumhare har faisle mein tumhara saath dega. Good Bye Geet'...he stretches his hand towards Geet for a shake-hand. Geet greets him back. He departs with a gentle smile on his face. Geet stands still up there until he is totally disappeared from her vision.


One week gone. Geet joins her college back. She is quite happy as how Dev has approached to her. She feels that Dev is really a nice guy. The time might have come when she can think about him otherwise '...she imagines & smiles by herself.

It's about 7 in the evening. Geet & one of her friend Arohi are standing there at the Auto stand, there is a huge rush in the stand, as this is the pick-hours.

Geet: Aaj toh pakka ghar mein daant padhegii yaar'.

Arohi : Hain yaar, ek toh pahle se hi der ho gayee hai , uparse ek bhi auto nahi mil rahi'...kaya karein'.?

Geet: Yaar ek idea hai,Metro se chalte hain,jaldi pahaunch jayenge, aur Papaji aur Daarji ki daant bhi nahi khani padhegii.

Arohi: Thik hai , chal.

Both rush towards the Metro Rail station. Even there is a big gathering of the Office-return people & young students.

Geet: Ohh God...yahan bhi wohi haal hai'...itni bheed'...Babaji kaya hoga iish desh ka.

Both are talking to each other, suddenly they have heard a sound of argument. They look here & there & find 5-6 youngsters are there bashing an old man very badly. They are using very offensive, disrespectful, derogatory comments to that much older person'...few of them even hit him harshly by dragging through his collar & thrust him down on the platform. The crowd are standing there silent & watching the whole incident, but nobody takes interest to come forward & saves that old man. Geet can't stop herself from protesting. She immediately reaches over there & tries to stop those crazy creatures.

Geet: Hey you'...kaya kar rahe ho tumlog'...yeh tumhare Papa ke umar ke hain'...sharam nahi aati tumlogonko...

One among those boys inches towards her.''Ohh Really!!!'...achha uunhko chod dete hain'...tumko pakadte hain'...what say guys'.!! Maal achha hai'...he gives a weird look to Geet. It seems all of them are hugely drunk. Arohi tries to pull Geet out from there, but she can't even reach to her as that place is hugely crowded. Those creepiest bloods leave that old man & are moving now towards Geet. She clearly understands their intention & tries to escape from there, but one of them holds her dupatta & tears it up.

PRECAPE: An uncanny happens!!🤢😕


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Edited by 810Kankana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
lovely update...👍🏼👏

thanx fr d pm...🤗🤗
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ohoho...dev ko pyaar hone laga hai...its good to b true...chalo koi gal nehi...abhi yehi maan lete...engagement bhi ho gaya...very good...
magar yeh metro mein kya ho raha hai...abb kya hoga...
but i knw our hero will come n save her...im waiting fr it to happen...i think it will b d turning point of d story n also d life of both our maan n geet...lets hope fr d best n wait n watch...😎😎

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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
AWESOME PART
thank god Dev is gone at least for now
hmmm so is it gonna be Maan to the rescue or not?
hehehe well all i can say is i am in LOVE with this part
pretty please continue soon!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Beautiful update...kankana

Geet is engaged to Dev...😔

Maan went to Pari's house to talk about his feelings for Geet but she is absorbed in her own dreamland...Maan ko seduce karne ki koshish karne ki himmat kaise hui..😡
She should confirm first if he likes her in that way or not...if both the partners are in love then seducing ur love is not wrong...but Maan did right by ignoring her and went away...👏

Geet is in danger...Maan jaldi aao bachao apni Geet ko😉

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
oy mujhe to tumhara Dev bohot pasand aya🤗... ye to show ke Dev jaise bilkul nahi hai bot hi acche hai😊... ab to Geet k liye or bhi zada pange ho gaye... it l be really difficult to Geet for accepting her love for Maan in future ab kya hoga?? 😕

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