Maaneet FF-KASHMAKASH- WHEN REALITY STRUCK - Page 8

Originally posted by: shamy2011

Hey kankana

it was jst brilliant dear...
A very beautiful plot...very unusal n intriguing story...

shamy wonders can ne other maan do dis 4 ne other geet? Does dis reality actualy strike?

PART-9

Rano asks her in shock'...kaya naam hai uush ladke ka'.

"MAAN''...Rano , Arohi both get stunned by hearing this name from Geet. That Tea-tray has fallen down from Rano's hand as she finds Geet standing over there right in front of them holding that newspaper in her hand, her eyes are filled with tears'.she again speaks out the name... "MAAN"'.

Rano runs out to her & hugs her tightly'.

Geet: Maa...'mujhe Maan se milna hai'...mujhe Maan se milna hai Maa.

Arohi: Hain Geet, main le chalti hun naa tujhe'...she stares at Rano for her permission. Rano looks clueless.

Rano: Hain,.par jaldi wapas aa jana, agar ghar mein kisiko pata chal gaya , toh badi mushibaat ho jaayegii.

Arohi: Don't worry aunty main uncleji ko bol deti hun key Geet mere saath mere ghar chal rahi hai.

Rano: Nahi beta, main kah dungi unshe, tum dono jaayo...'par jaldi wapas aana'...aur meri bacchi ka khayal rakhna, she caresses Geet's face lovingly. Arohi departs from there with Geet.

In the hospital, Maan is lying on the bed. Samir is there with Maan. Doctor is checking his wound.

Samir: Aab yeh kaisa hai Doctor.

Doctor: Dekhiye, jiss halat mein aaplog iishe yahan laaye the, uparwale ka sukriya ada kijiye key yeh banch gaya...jakhm gahra hai, kuch time toh lagega hi naa...looking at Maan..'..young man, don't worry'...you will be alright. Maan gives a weak smile. Doctor departs.

Samir: Kaya huya , tuh hansa kyun'?

Maan: Kuch nahi '...woh Doctor ki baat sun kar'..."you will be alright"'...he smiles again.

Samir: Par iishmein hansnewali kaunsi baat hai , sahi toh kaha unhone...'tuh dekhna bahut jald tuh thik ho jaayega, aur pahle ki tarha Crick...Samir stops in midway.

Maan: ...pahle ki tarha aur Cricket nahi khel paayungaa main yaar'...his eyes get teary.

Samir controls his own emotion.

Samir: Maan , kaisi baatein karta hai tuh'...aisa naa soch , dekhna ekdin sab thik ho jaayegaa'

Maan: Waise ussh ladki ka kuch pata chala'

Samir: Nahi yaar'.

Maan : Pata nahi kaisi haalat mein hogi woh aab'.

Samir: Maan , tuh apni fikr kar hain'...waise bhi yeh sab uushi ki wajahse huyaa hai...jab se tere sar pe uush ladki ka bhoot sabar huya hai naa, pata nahi tujhe ho kaya gaya hai'...tuh toh bilkul'...he has been interrupted midway as one nurse comes there in.

Nurse: Aapse koi milne aaye hain'...aayiye'...she asks the guests to come there in.

Maan: Mujhse '...mujhse kaun'...his voice get clogged up as his eyes get stuck to those beautiful almond-twinkle eyes. He gets captivated again, looking without a blink to that silent beauty. Arohi breaks the silence.

Arohi: Hii Maan'...main Arohi , this is my friend Geet & you..?...looking towards Samir'.

Samir: Yah'...hii Arohi, me Samir'...Maan ka bacchpan ka dost.

Arohi: Ohh really'... very nice'...waise main bhi Geet ki bahut puranii friend hun'...School ki'...u know'...they both start their conversation , while the remaining two are still gazing at each other'...it seems that they even forget to take their breath. Arohi-Samir both start giggling up.

Samir: Maannn... Mr. Maan Khurana'kahan nikal liye'...hum bhi khade hain raahon mein'...zara iidhar bhi nazre karam ho jaata toh'...

Maan feels quite embarrassed. He gives an annoyed look to Samir for his useless Shayeri.

Samir: Aare naraz kyun hota hai yaar'...muh se bas ekbaar bol de humein, chale jaate hain naa hum'...he makes a baby face'...kyun Arohi, chaliye...'thoda coffee-soffe pike aate hain.Arohi smiles. Both Samir & Arohi depart from there while Geet is still staring at Maan.

Maan: Geet'...aap thik toh hai naa'...he is trying to get up on the bed. Geet moves quickly at him & helps him lolling on the bed side by arranging a pillow beneath his head.

Maan: Geet, aap baithiye naa.

Geet: Aapne aisa kyun kiya Maan'... Geet's eyes get stuck on to that bandage on his right hand, which merely covers up that amputate part of his body.

'...mere liye apni zindegi barbaad kar li aapne !!!

Maan: Aisa mat kahiye aap, aur agar uushwaqt aapke wajaye koi aur bhi hoti wahan '...phir bhi sayed main aisahi karta.

Geet: Lekin Maan, aapka carrier, aapke sapne'...sab kuch barbaad ho gaya , sirf meri wajahse...

Maan: Aapki wajahse nahi Geet, sayed kismat ko yehi manjur tha...waise aap toh thik hai naa?

Geet: Ajeeb insaan hai aap'...abhi bhi aap mere hi bare mein soch rahe hain'...maine aapke saath kitni badtameeji ki'...aapko kitna bura-bhala kaha'...aur aapne'...Geet closes her eyes , 2 drops of water fall down on Maan's arm. Maan smirks.

Maan: Waise ek baat kahun'...uushdin aapka woh Coke maine jaan bujhke nahi change kiya tha...this brings a gentle smile on Geet's face after a long long time. Both are smiling while Arohi & Samir enter into the room.

Samir: Aare bhai'...kaya baat hai'...zara hum bhi toh sune iitni hansi-mazak kis baat pe ho rahi hai. "Gaye the hum donoko aise chod ke ...gaye the hum donoko aise chod ke , bade hi chup chup se the woh, wapas aaye toh dekhte hain bas chup hone ka naam hi nahi lete woh"...waah waah ..waah waah'. Samir bends down his head & doing "Salam" to Maan & Geet'. Arohi starts laughing.

Maan: Samir...teri yeh bakwaas shayerii bandh karegaa...

Samir: Chalo jiii, thik hai phir, aaj ke liye bas iitna hi'..."phir milenge chalte chalte'!!." i mean visiting hours khatam ho gayee hai..so...

Arohi: Hain Geet chal, hum ghar mein bhi kisiko batake nahi aaye hain'...agar tere Daarji yah Veerji ko pata chal gaya toh badi problem ho jaayegii.

Maan: Hain , aap ghar jaayiye Geet'...warna aapko problem ho sakti hai.

Geet doesn't want to leave Maan now'...still she knows that she has to go'...she bids a halfhearted 'Good Bye' to Maan & leaves from there with Arohi.

Samir: Ohho'... "aap ghar jaayiye Geet ,warna aapko problem ho sakti hai..." He mimics Maan. Maan gives a frown look to him.

Maan : Samirrr'...then they both start laughing out loud.

Another week passes by. During this whole week Geet has used to come to meet Maan in the hospital in every single day. Now they have become very good friends to each other. It's the evening time, just like the other days Geet is there with Maan in the hospital & they keep talking & talking. Maan wonders how much Geet can speak at a time.

Geet: Maan, aapne apni dawaii lii hai naa?

Maan: Hain baba'...le li hai'...don't worry'...achha ek baat puchu...bura toh nahi maanogii naa tum'!!

Geet: Nahi maanungii'...kaya baat hai...'puchiye naa'?

Maan: Woh uushdin jo Bow-Tie tumne kharida tha, jiske liye bhi tha, pasand aaya tha ushe ?

Geet gets surprised'...how come he knows abut that tie.

Geet: Aapko kaise pata key maine Tie liya tha'...oohhh'...you mean'...woh aap hi the jinhone woh Tie lekar bhi wapas kar di thi '...ohh my God'...aapne mujhe uushwaqt bataya kyun nahi...

Maan : Kaya batata , pahle hi iitni gaaliyan kha chukka tha main...'..phirse sunne ki himmat nahi thi. Geet looks so embarrassed'...i am so so sorry Maan. Maan starts laughing'...main majak kar raha hun Geet'...waise bhi mujhe achha hi lagta hai jab tum mujhe 2-4 gaaliyan suna deti ho.Geet looks down at the floor.

Maan : Waise tumne bataya nahi'...pasand aaya tha uushe woh Tie'.?

Geet nods her head for a 'NO''...nahi'...unhone mujhe wapas kar diya.

Maan: Ohh'...I am sorry'...waise shadi kab kar rahe ho tumdono ?

Geet surprisingly stares at Maan'.

Geet: Shadi'.!!! unhone shadi tod di'...she smirks.

Maan: OMG'...par aisa kyun kiya uunhone'...then he suddenly realizes'. ohh...'toh uush din ki wajahse'...kaisa insaan hai yeh'...jo bhi huya uushmein tumhari kaya galti thi'...he looks disgusted.

Geet: Chodiye naa Maan'...woh ek haadsa mujhe zindegi ke bahut sare sachhaii o ko dikha gaya, kaun apna hai aur kaun paraya ,yeh samjha gaya ...khair jo huya so huya, meri baatein chodiye, achha aapki woh dost kahan hai ,maine ek din bhi unhe yahan nahi dekha...Maan smiles gently'.

Maan: PARI !!! Maan takes a deep breath'... meri kahani bhi bilkul tumhari hi tarha hai Geet ...iish haadse ne mujhe bhi zindegi ke sahi maayne ko samajhne ka , sahi dost o ko pahchaneka mauka diya hai'...he gets a book from the side table, & opens it up, a letter is there within'...yeh padho'...he passes a letter to Geet.

PRECAPE: THE LETTER '!!!

Part-8

PART-10

Originally posted by: mahimak

Hii yaar.. I'm really sorry for a late comment..
Ohh God.. I'm just loving ur FF.. its just awesome.. exellent..
Sorry haan.. aaj chota comment dungi.. me busy thats why..
I was really impressed by dev knowing his story.. that totally justified his behaviour.. & then the way he said to geet that he had started loving her & use geet ka har faisla majur hoga.. Was this the same dev who rejected geet.. jabki uski koi galti bhi nahi thi.. it was a mere accident..
But then jis tarah se geet reacted hearing abt maan.. ohh god.. I literally cried at that moment.. just loved it..
And now they r friends.. & yah this pari has left maan.. acha hi hai.. hame tho yahi chahiye tha.. hehe
And dekho.. aaj bhi I said chota comment dungi.. & see its long at the end.. this shows how much I'm in love wid ur FF..

PART-10

Maan: 'PARI' !! Maan takes a deep breath'.. meri kahani bhi bilkul tumhari hi tarha hai Geet ...iish haadse ne mujhe bhi zindegi ke sahi maayne ko samajhne ka , sahi dost o ko pahchaneka mauka diya hai'...he gets a book from the side table, & opens it up'...a letter is there within'...yeh padho'...he passes a letter to Geet.

Geet reads out that letter'...its written by Pari.

Maany, I am sorry, par sayed mere liye aab aur tumhare saath rista rakhna possible nahi hoga',u know main zindegi bhar kisika 'helping hand' banke toh nahi rah sakti naa'...u know me'...Papa ne meri shadi tay kar di hai'...wish me all the best'...take care & again sorry for everything.

Bye,

Pari.

Maan continues...'yeh letter mujhe hospital mein admit hone ke thik dusre hi din mila tha'...main toh behosh tha'...Samir ne apne pass rakhha tha yeh letter'...Pari ka driver aake deke gaya tha '...aur uushe bhi kuchdin baad Pari ka phone bhi aa gaya'...Maan tries to recollect those moments, when he had a chat with Pari through phone.

Pari: Hey Maany'...mera letter tumhe mila naa'?

Maan: Hain,mil gaya..

Pari: Maany, woh agle week meri shadi hai'...Armaan se'...I hope u don't mind.

Maan gets so much surprised'...but doesn't express it'...really, congrats to both of u'...waise tum dono ekbaar bhi mujhse milne nahi aaye'!!

Pari: Maany, woh actually hum shadi ke baad hi London shift ho rahe hain, so we are quite busy'...aur waise bhi hum wahan aake karenge bhi kaya...u know naa key mujhe yeh sab melodrama-rona-dhona 'wagera wagera se allergy hai'...sorry Maany, tumhare saath jo bhi huya'...bahut bura huya...'aur woh ladki'...

Armaan ko meri taraf se wish kar dena ,'Maan interrupts.

Pari: Of course kar dungi',take care Maany, Good bye.

Maan: Good Bye Pari.

'...Maan comes out from his thought, Geet sits there speechless...how come people can be so heartless'...how come u leave someone in such easy way, whom u have loved so much. Her eyes get drenched.

Maan: Geet, rona mat...'sayed Pari Armaan ke saath hi jayda khus rahegi, waise bhi main aab woh purana wala Maan toh raha nahi naa'.

kishne kaha tuh woh purana wala Maan nahi raha'hain'...Samir suddenly heads there up.

Maan looks at him & gives a weak smile'...Samir, kyun mazak kar raha hai yaar...tuh jaanta hain naa...'mera ek haath'...

kaya huya tere haath ko ...'hain'!!! Samir interrupts...'.bhaiya mere,Uparwale ne hum iinsaan o ko 2 haath diye hain naa'...toh tuh dusre haath se khelegaa aab'...samjha..

Maan: Samir...'tera dimaag toh thik hai naa...

Samir: '.Bachhu, meri yaaddast tere jaisi itini kamzor nahi hai ..' ...bacchpan mein kaise hum apne dono haatho se khel ne ki practice kiya karte tha'...bhul gaya'..!!

Maan: Samir, bachhpan ki baat alag hai yaar'.

Samir: Kyun alag hai'...wohi tuh hai, wohi main hun'...bat-ball bhi same hai, ground bhi same hoga'...hain, woh shorts tujhe aab sayed thodi choti lage 'nahi...Maan, Samir both laugh out loud'...Geet also joins them in.

Maan: Samir'...tuh bhi naa'.

Samir: Achha , jo baat main bolne aaya tha, bhul hi gaya batana'...Doctor se meri baat ho gayee, woh kal tujhe discharge kar denge.

Maan: Really'...thank God'...main toh pakk chukka hun yahan rah rah ke.

Geet: Yeh toh bahut hi achhi baat hai.

Samir: Hain..woh toh hai, par Doctor ko ek galat fahemi ho gayee hai .

Geet & Maan jointly: Galat fahemii...!!!

Samir: Aur nahi toh kaya'...kah rahe the dawaii ka bahut achha asar ho raha hai '...kuch jayda hi jaldi recover ki hai tuhne'...aab bechare Doctor ko kaya pata yeh dawaii ki nahi kisi aur ka hi asar hai'...staring at Geet naughtily.

Maan: Samir'...tuh phir suru ho gaya'

Samir: Loh bhaiyaa, bhalaii ka toh zamana hi nahi raha', waise Geet, woh tumhari friend...kaya naam hai uunhka ..hain Arohi'...woh nahi aayee ?

Maan: Samir'...tuh yahan se jaane ka kaya lega...

Samir: Dekh liya aye dost dosti teri'...nayee dost kaya mili'...naa rahi koi kadar meri'...making baby face'...🥱

'..teri toh'...!!! Maan tries to catch him up, he manages to get slipped away from his grip & leaves from there. Geet starts giggling'...even Maan also joins her in.

Next day Maan gets discharged from the hospital. Samir, Arohi & Geet are there to take him back to his house. Samir has already arranged a car. Geet & Arohi both help Maan to pack his bag. Finally they leave from the hospital & few minutes later they have reached to Maan's house. It's a pretty old, 3 bedrooms house. Maan & his Mom are the only 2 people living there as Maan's Dad died long before. Maan's mother is standing nearby the main door, as soon as she finds Maan to come, she runs towards him & hugs him tightly, Maan's shoulder gets drenched by her tears. Maan cups her face & tries to console her. Still she is sobbing. Now Samir greets her & tells Maan to introduce Arohi & Geet with his Mom. Maan does the same. Geet touches her feet. Maan's Mom gets so much touched with her gesture & hugs her lovingly. Geet can't stop her tears now. After a while she controls herself, while Maan's mom invites everyone into the house. Maan takes Geet aside & whispers nearby her ears.

Maan: Geet, bura naa maan naa , par tum Maa ko uush raat ke bare mein kuch naa batana.. I mean maine Maa ko yeh nahi bataya key tum hi woh ladki ho, sirf dost bataya hai '...asal mein yeh purane khayalaaton ki hain, pata nahi kaise react karengi, tum samajh rahi ho naa'.

Geet nods her head for a ' YES '.

Samir: Auntyjii'...kuch muh-mitha toh karwayiye'...iitne dino baad aapka Beta aur Bahuuu'...'Samir is looking at Maan naughtily & then changing the word from 'Bahu' to 'Bahut' bbbahut dino baad ghar wapas aaya hai aapka Beta '...toh mithayee toh banti hai naa'...kyun Maan...!! Maan gives him a frown look.

Maan's Mom smiles & gets sweets for everyone. Samir gets very much excited as he finds his favorite sweets.

Samir: Auntyjii, aapko yaad tha key NARIYAL ki BARFI meri favorite hain...'OMG'...main toh sara kha jaayungaa...waise Maan-babu sirf mithaye se kaam na chalega'...aaj toh 2-2 occasions ek saath hai '.

Geet gets surprised ...'2-2 occasions'!!

Samir: Hain'...aaj Maan ka Happy wala Birthday hai naa'...aare Maan ...'tuhne bataya nahi Geet ko'...Maan smiles shyly'.

Arohi: Really'...that's not fair'...party toh banti hai'...kyun Geet...

Geet : Aapne bataya nahi...

Maan: Kaya batata, 'yeh koi umar hai kaya B'day celebrate karne ki'...he smiles.

Samir: Yeh sab paise banchaneke bahane hai '...u know Arohi, yeh hamesha aisa hi karta hai , kanjus kahin kaa'...chal aaj ki party meri taraf se'...aap sirf time pe mere ghar pe pahunch jaayiyo'.

Maan : Par Samir'...

Samir: Mujhe kuch nahi sunayee de raaha , main bahra ho chukka hun'...waise Geet , Arohi, aap dono bhi plzzz aayiyega...'7 bajhe'...address main aapko bata dunga Arohi.

Geet is hesitating'..."par hum kaise" !!

Arohi: All right'...of course hum aayenge'...Geet , don't worry, main hun naa'...when Arohi is here no fear'

Samir: Hain..aur nahi toh kaya..,,,,ooye B'day boy, zara tuh bhi bol diyo, main kab se kahe jaa raha hun'...looking at Maan.

'...hain, tum ayogi toh ,i mean tum dono aayogi toh mujhe achha lagega ...Maan smiles.

Geet remains silent with a shy look.

PRECAPE: THE BIRTHDAY PARTY!!😃😛

PART- 9

PART-11

Nice update ...precap sounds intresting..update soon.