OS : TUM CHALE AAO - Page 3

Originally posted by: spandana11

Rose 🤗 you are back with this os😳 so happy to see you back😃 sorry for the delay dear caught up with some work 😕 , coming to OS as usual a awesome👏 piece of OS from you😃 liked it a lot and the track you took to writ this is to tasha char very much beautifully shown and there emotions to ,nakuu taking care of injured dutta eventually both falling in live and dutta is dutta he left but nakuu to not low she waited for 10 years I liked a lot tea stall scene after ten years and tasha conversation to very well you brought what is going in them after ten years and signs of nakuu like ring finger tied still with cloth ,nakuu wearing dutta mom locket 😳 and nakuu asking for tea and dutta for milk so cute 😳 liked the OS a lot very nicely sketched OS👏 keep writing dear ,not coming on if these days so not able to talk with you hope you are fine😳 and take care dear 🤗and keep writing😳

Originally posted by: MishalsFAN

😊😊Kaash rose kaash u can see the happiness and smile of my face when I was readind the OS.hmm i wish i could see that but i can well imagine

I know rosy iam super duper late?.no dear its ok ...sorry for that?ohh plzz dont be sorry m glad atleast u took out time to read n comment...since two days was sooo busy wid the admission process🤢🤢hope everything went out well

But today?..just now finally I read the whole update and as obvious its just awesome??superb?..mind-blowing...thank u so much 😳

Just like others in start me too felt the same that may be in this story also u have separated dutta-nakkku but nope I was totally wrong??the ending is the *super liked* for me?..what should be much better than tasha reunite.👏👏👏

The dream of someone special that nakku had always seen an d kept in her eyes too?..ultimately get fulfilled.yup finally her prince charming made an entry

Generally every girl at the age of 19-20 saw a dream of someone ??.who will come in her life and fillit with joyous and happiness?i know its so lovely nah ..and the way u describes that feeling through nakku was just superb...glad i could bring out the rt emotions

Ddutta comes in his life as a stranger but becomes nakkus someone special for whom she always dreamt of.

Loved the stubborn dutta?.finally someone appreciated this side of him..thanks..who not liked the milk but still drink it becoz of nakku and the "or sabzee milegi " wala scene??awww loving iit...me too really enjoyed writing it ..

And one of my favourote scene????

Guess?..hmm dutta getting bangles for her

Guess?..no 😲..then dutta making a swing for her

Guess?..no 😕..then i cant guess more

Yup that one in which nakku says to dutta "kis haq se"..oye hoye so filmy ..lol.. and then he replied "jis haq se tumne meri aai ka locket pahan rakha h"

Rose fantastic OS dr?..u expresses a long story vry beautifully in few words ?..yup the story was really long but dont tell me i described it in few words ..this is my longest updt ever ..omg i wrote more than 12 pgs ..phew ..and after that i collapsed ..lol...the love birds met after a long time of 10 yrs and during that time there love becomes more and more hard?...yup thats what true love is ..it deepens with the passage of time ..and I become more and more addicted to ur stories...feels awesome to know that still there are ppl who like reading my write ups..thanks

Ooops sorry ??sorry for what?..arre yaar I forgot to say anything abt the song u mentioned?dont be sorry in fact i want to thank u atleast u noticed it ..no one else did ..waise to I never heard it before ?..its a song or shaayari?jo b ho?...its an old song ..i heard it some time back and while listening to it this story came to my mind .. I liked it?..thanks once again...it was suitable for the story.

Keep writing..as long as u keep reading

Iam waiting for another hit*sixer*..lol..

Thanx for this lovely OS..ohh plzzz the pleasure was all mine and thanks for such a beautiful feedback

LOTS OF LUV❤️..me too

😊

for me its a long story but u write it in a small update*rosy r u staring me*...u know why becoz i wanna a FF frm u...just like "sweet tasha moments"...its one of my fav.
i know that for writing those types of ff's the inspiration is must needed...and widout mishal it is impossible...but me glad that still u r writing such brilliant OS...hats off u to u:)

Hey Rosie🤗...

Finally after a long time i get my lappy😳 n now u will get ur comment lol

First i loved d title "Tum chale aao"...wow d words in itself gives so immense pleasure to me😳...Rosie aagaz ye hai toh anjaam kya hoga??😉 hun lets see... Oh ! Nakku..like d intro part how u write abt her dreams & her likes... will see one nakku in each home ...hai naa??...swing ?? so dis time u cum wit jhula thing...arhhh..awesome... Injured man?? DSP??... yes sahab means DSP...chalo Hero entered😛...this part is so amazing how she feel his restlessness & wen she rubbed her hand lying on his heart to soothe away his pain. & he feeled relaxed😳... Sher jag gaya...OMG Baaji??closest pal gone?? tune duji dostana tod diya...how cud u Rosie?...chalo it's fine agar woh rehata toh Tashana nahi Dostana hota LOL...

imao doodh?? & DSP??..i hate it LOL Where is all bottles??...aww he looks adorable...so cute he saw her smile...ohh teri annoyed him?? LOL sadu DSP...ahhh "His intense gaze pierced through her soul which she couldn't bear so went"...can feel it *sigh* loved akadu Dutta... "but didn't fail to steal glances whenever the other person was busy with some work "...i love dis chori chori chupke chupke...Oyy hoyy he is ready to reject it...bina dekhe baras pada lol... leh sherni aagayi...lik her bhashan sab bandh karo sivay muh ke..LOL...again start wit "Meri aayi kehati"...while Nakku's bhashan going on , worth to watch thing wud be is DSP's face😍...at last he gave up..ohh man...LOL he sed dat wont lyk her smile..lol...aww "But she couldn't help it he looked like a baby and she always wanted to pull his cheeks then, she blushed at her own thoughts."😳

"The fall wasn't as bad as she had expected it to be she had managed to save him from getting badly hurt but only" physically", emotionally and mentally they both had fallen deeply for each other thanks to the close proximity which was not helping them either."...loved it how she dared not to meet his gaze & finaally saved him from hittting...& both wer falling for each other...Loved dis para dear...very well written...loved it..satyanash toh tune kiya beech me aakar Tasha k acche khase romantic scene ka.....rofl...insted of two step she moved four step...accha he door hi reh...aww he started applying paste on her waund ...JMM2 scene...dukhati ragh pe haath rakh diya Rosie...aww her unconditional concern...really nakku always concern abt D...n dat too unconditional...dat's why she did dhulai of supriya wen she sw her near DSP room first time ROFL...n later dat concern turn into unconditional luv😍...*sigh*

Nakku making karela??damn ... i just had it..sach me kadwa tha...i didnt know k it was karela...wen i had first morsel...i was lik...what it is?? karela?? mum sed yes..den chup chap kha liya..:|...coz i never sed NO to any food... anyway ..OMG he heard it...""bhale he woh kadva bolte hon lekin dil ke toh saaf hain"" sight...so true...OMG "" made a face, were those bitter medicines, those glasses of milk not enough that now he had to eat this horrible dish too. He sighed and started having it reluctantly, "" ...chalo DSP ne bhi karela kha liya..." thodi sabzi aur milegi?" Ohh how sweet of him...sorry maine dobara nahin liya lol...

aww Nakusha on jhula...n D... lovely Tasha moment..ahh he sed "chal" chalo mandir chalein...ohh duppata on D's face so adorable smile hogi yaar... dis duppatta flying is very funny now a days in one show i wonder how dey show it repetitively LOL... Haila kya line maari DSP ne... ""kal tak toh nahin .." then stared at her and continued " par ab lagta hai shayad meri talaash puri ho gayi.""...awesome writter👏...jeeyo😛...

Eww..Ravi?? useless fellow...Oh she sed, she wil reject it...but he interrupt.. wounded soul...he is hurt...n hurting her..Awesome scene...how he was denying & she was getting scared not of him but for him...specially last line of dis para "" her ring finger bleeding now how could she wear anybody else's ring she was already marked as his, she smiled inwardly.""too gud...n after dis both's turmoil..how he is sharing his past n she is stubborn ...""main fir bhi aapko chahati hain""...n he gave her bangles & rubbed his thumb over her hurt finger...n he left...n she was crying & traced engraved name...Beautifully written Rosie..feel really sad for dem...

D surrenderred! Loved it how he is imagining & feeling her so close to him in each & every moment.. n just her single thought vanished his all pain...beautiful ! OMG he is der in her village again...WOW... ohh he asked for milk in tea stall... dhoodh?? lol...he cud feel it "something was going to happen"...so i 😛...voila "ek cup chai?"...both change der habbits for der loved ones...woh bhi in der absence...what a pure luv😍...fab...How hesistantly he asked abt her & her baba??...Ohh "aise mat dekho??" she knew k he is thinking coz of her ...ARHH what else we can expect from dat coward??... who cares?...

aww she is explaining abt tea ? n he understtod...n pooch bhi liya..shadi nahin ki?? ..samjhdaar ho gaya banda...waah jiyo direct.👏.""Chal mere saath nakku" Ohh teri... ""kis haq se??"" waah meri filmi Rose... aapka yahin andaaj toh mujhe pasand hai...Lovely...awesome scene...everything was amazing...how he untied d cloth around her finger & he slipped his ring into hers ...fatte...n he finally sed k he loved her...woohooo...awesome ...super duper ... fantastic..👏👏👏LOVED IT jaaneman...

How he left her for her better future...but der was sumthing diff. was waiting for her... he was happy wit her memories n here she tied a cloth to her rong finger to show d world k she belongs to sumone..n after a long wait... 10 years later dey met...u sed it right..."some relations are meant to happen, if not today then tomorrow." True!!! ...u make me all emotional in last scene.

NO DOUBT! ...u did a fab job gal👍🏼...awesome write up...as u sed a simple love story😳...haan thoda lamba tha... intezaar yaar😉...ab comment tu hi dekh liyo LOL...but seriously each scene ..dialouges ...very well written👏...salute jaaneman kya story likhi hai aapne dil jeet liya😎...

chalo waise while reading what i feel i wrt...dats why...i didnt write comment again in these days i thought i can...but dil nahin maan raha tha...dat's why such a long wait...so sorry for dat...😳Hope to see u wit ur next story jald hi😉...tab tak ye padho...lol

@Mimi'jee...luckily u beat me dis time😉😳...n it's a really very pleasant surprise ...seeing ur comment so soon😛👏...

Sonee

👏 I hav just 1 word for you!!!! AWESUMMM 👏

Originally posted by: --SONEE--

Hey Rosie🤗...hey soneee

Finally after a long time i get my lappy😳 n now u will get ur comment lol...come on ..cant wait

First i loved d title "Tum chale aao"...wow d words in itself gives so immense pleasure to me😳..ohh ya think of mishal and u get all dreamy ...Rosie aagaz ye hai toh anjaam kya hoga??😉 hun lets see.hmm waiting to know ... Oh ! Nakku..like d intro part how u write abt her dreams & her likes... will see one nakku in each home ..wah wah really u think so bechaara dutta so many nakkus he will go mad ..kahan kahan jaaye ?? lol...hai naa??...swing ?? so dis time u cum wit jhula thing..sitting on a swing n dreaming isnt it romantic ...arhhh..awesome... Injured man?? DSP??.obviously ab anna toh ane se raha lol.. yes sahab means DSP...chalo Hero entered😛..yup sher has finally entered...this part is so amazing how she feel his restlessness & wen she rubbed her hand lying on his heart to soothe away his pain...aww i thought u must be blushing n all.. & he feeled relaxed😳... Sher jag gaya...OMG Baaji??closest pal gone?? tune duji dostana tod diya...how cud u Rosie?.ohh drama queen i didnt want a kabaab mein haddi ..chalo it's fine agar woh rehata toh Tashana nahi Dostana hota LOL...

imao doodh?? & DSP??.imagine she feeding the sher with milk...i hate it LOL Where is all bottles??...aww he looks adorable.yup kadoos looks like a darling..so cute he saw her smile...ohh teri annoyed him?? LOL sadu DSP...ahhh "His intense gaze pierced through her soul which she couldn't bear so went"...can feel it *sigh* loved akadu Dutta... "but didn't fail to steal glances whenever the other person was busy with some work "...i love dis chori chori chupke chupke..ha ha naughty girl...Oyy hoyy he is ready to reject it...bina dekhe baras pada lol... ohh that was supriya so scolding her should not bother u leh sherni aagayi...lik her bhashan sab bandh karo sivay muh ke..LOL...again start wit "Meri aayi kehati".yup some things never change..while Nakku's bhashan going on , worth to watch thing wud be is DSP's face😍.he felt like banging his head..at last he gave up..ohh man...LOL he sed dat wont lyk her smile.how dare she laugh at him .lol...aww "But she couldn't help it he looked like a baby and she always wanted to pull his cheeks then, she blushed at her own thoughts."😳

"The fall wasn't as bad as she had expected it to be she had managed to save him from getting badly hurt but only" physically", emotionally and mentally they both had fallen deeply for each other thanks to the close proximity which was not helping them either."...loved it how she dared not to meet his gaze & finaally saved him from hittting..aww so romantic nah.& both wer falling for each other...Loved dis para dear...very well written.thanks a lot..loved it..satyanash toh tune kiya beech me aakar Tasha k acche khase romantic scene ka.see thats why i kept baaji out otherwise he too would have done the same ....rofl...insted of two step she moved four step..dutta ka gussa hai hi zabardast .accha he door hi reh...aww he started applying paste on her waund ...JMM2 scene...dukhati ragh pe haath rakh diya Rosie.ohh sorry ..aww her unconditional concern...really nakku always concern abt D...n dat too unconditional...dat's why she did dhulai of supriya wen she sw her near DSP room first time ROFL...n later dat concern turn into unconditional luv😍...*sigh*

Nakku making karela??damn ... i just had it.lol what a coincidence .sach me kadwa tha.kyun tune banaya tha lol..i didnt know k it was karela...wen i had first morsel...i was lik...what it is?? karela?? mum sed yes...karela is good for health have it without making a face ...den chup chap kha liya..:|...coz i never sed NO to any food... anyway ..OMG he heard it...""bhale he woh kadva bolte hon lekin dil ke toh saaf hain"" sight...so true.very true he is a coconut ..OMG "" made a face, were those bitter medicines, those glasses of milk not enough that now he had to eat this horrible dish too. He sighed and started having it reluctantly, "" ...chalo DSP ne bhi karela kha liya..." thodi sabzi aur milegi?" Ohh how sweet of him...sorry maine dobara nahin liya lol..ha ha.

aww Nakusha on jhula...n D... lovely Tasha moment..ahh he sed "chal" chalo mandir chalein...ohh duppata on D's face so adorable smile hogi yaar... dis duppatta flying is very funny now a days in one show i wonder how dey show it repetitively LOL..i know me too running short of ideas. Haila kya line maari DSP ne... ""kal tak toh nahin .." then stared at her and continued " par ab lagta hai shayad meri talaash puri ho gayi."".ha ha so filmy nah ..awesome writter👏...jeeyo😛...

Eww..Ravi?? useless fellow...Oh she sed, she wil reject it...but he interrupt.. wounded soul...he is hurt...n hurting her..Awesome scene.glad u liked it to me it was the best scene of the OS ..how he was denying & she was getting scared not of him but for him...specially last line of dis para "" her ring finger bleeding now how could she wear anybody else's ring she was already marked as his, she smiled inwardly.""too gud.ya dutta left his mark on her ..n after dis both's turmoil..how he is sharing his past n she is stubborn ...""main fir bhi aapko chahati hain""...n he gave her bangles & rubbed his thumb over her hurt finger...n he left...n she was crying & traced engraved name...Beautifully written Rosie..thanks a lot..feel really sad for dem.dont be they will meet..

D surrenderred! Loved it how he is imagining & feeling her so close to him in each & every moment.. n just her single thought vanished his all pain...beautiful ! OMG he is der in her village again...WOW... ohh he asked for milk in tea stall... dhoodh?? lol..ya both of them changed for the other .he cud feel it "something was going to happen"...so i 😛..wah genius even u thought the same lol..voila "ek cup chai?"...both change der habbits for der loved ones...woh bhi in der absence...what a pure luv😍..afterall its tasha luv we r talking about .fab...How hesistantly he asked abt her & her baba??...Ohh "aise mat dekho??" she knew k he is thinking coz of her ...ARHH what else we can expect from dat coward??.accha beta agar shaadi kar leta nakku se toh dutta toh mamu ban jaata ..lol... who cares?...

aww she is explaining abt tea ? n he understtod...n pooch bhi liya..shadi nahin ki?? ..samjhdaar ho gaya banda.better late than never..waah jiyo direct.👏.""Chal mere saath nakku" Ohh teri... ""kis haq se??"" waah meri filmi Rose..rofl. aapka yahin andaaj toh mujhe pasand hai.yaar the OS was streatching too much so direct proposal ..Lovely...awesome scene...everything was amazing...how he untied d cloth around her finger & he slipped his ring into hers .hero does everything in style ..fatte...n he finally sed k he loved her...woohooo...awesome ...super duper ... fantastic..👏👏👏LOVED IT jaaneman..thank u thank u but u forgot to comment on the song😭.

How he left her for her better future...but der was sumthing diff. was waiting for her... he was happy wit her memories n here she tied a cloth to her rong finger to show d world k she belongs to sumone.ya both lived to love each other ...n after a long wait... 10 years later dey met...u sed it right..."some relations are meant to happen, if not today then tomorrow." True!!! ...u make me all emotional in last scene.kya yaar no crying ok this time its a happy ending

NO DOUBT! ...u did a fab job gal👍🏼...awesome write up...as u sed a simple love story😳...haan thoda lamba tha..dont say thoda its was bahut zyada meri jaan nikal gayi . intezaar yaar😉...ab comment tu hi dekh liyo LOL...but seriously each scene ..dialouges ...very well written👏...salute jaaneman kya story likhi hai aapne dil jeet liya😎.and i salute to ur lovely mindblowing comment ..

chalo waise while reading what i feel i wrt...dats why...i didnt write comment again in these days i thought i can...but dil nahin maan raha tha...dat's why such a long wait..seriously very long wait i had lost all hopes lol.so sorry for dat..oh no need to be sorry .😳Hope to see u wit ur next story jald hi😉...tab tak ye padho...lol

@Mimi'jee...luckily u beat me dis time😉😳...n it's a really very pleasant surprise ...seeing ur comment so soon😛👏...

Sonee

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