OS : TUM CHALE AAO - Page 2

😊😊Kaash rose kaash u can see the happiness and smile of my face when I was readind the OS.

I know rosy iam super duper late…..sorry for that…..since two days was sooo busy wid the admission process🤢🤢

But today…..just now finally I read the whole update and as obvious its just awesome……superb…..mind-blowing

Just like others in start me too felt the same that may be in this story also u have separated dutta-nakkku but nope I was totally wrong……the ending is the *super liked* for me…..what should be much better than tasha reunite.👏👏👏

The dream of someone special that nakku had always seen an d kept in her eyes too…..ultimately get fulfilled.

Generally every girl at the age of 19-20 saw a dream of someone …….who will come in her life and fillit with joyous and happiness…..and the way u describes that feeling through nakku was just superb.

Ddutta comes in his life as a stranger but becomes nakkus someone special for whom she always dreamt of.

Loved the stubborn dutta…..who not liked the milk but still drink it becoz of nakku and the "or sabzee milegi " wala scene……awww loving iit.

And one of my favourote scene…………

Guess…

Guess…

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Yup that one in which nakku says to dutta "kis haq se" and then he replied "jis haq se tumne meri aai ka locket pahan rakha h"

Rose fantastic OS dr…..u expresses a long story vry beautifully in few words ….the love birds met after a long time of 10 yrs and during that time there love becomes more and more hard….and I become more and more addicted to ur stories.

Ooops sorry ……sorry for what…..arre yaar I forgot to say anything abt the song u mentioned…waise to I never heard it before …..its a song or shaayari…jo b ho…. I liked it….it was suitable for the story.

Keep writing

Iam waiting for another hit*sixer*

Thanx for this lovely OS

LOTS OF LUV❤️

Originally posted by: kiran255

TUm Chale AAo !...WHAT !!! a reply from kiran ..this is pleasantly shocking

What a title

aise bulao ge tu dead bodoes bhi grave main say agaye ge :P...ya if u can come back then anyone can ...lol..

no jokes

beautioful title

and i owe u an apology big time no bigger than Ps owe us :(..well a part of me says YES but a part of me is very understanding so no problem ..its ok ..all is well 😃

man was dam busy still is but now i am able to cope with The updates :)

it so good to got ur pm the story looks promising , just completed forst para

will post my comments when completing it !

and yes i will comment the otehrs too chahe 2012 main karo but i Will (determined muh *

lots of love Rose ,

i was having such empty feeling lately u all are part of my life actually integral part of my life for last one year

u are all which i chose because i love who u r and what u do ,

now feels like meeting old buddies after ages and believe me no feeling can be great than this ..ur making me all emotional 😭

God bless u and u my Junior Deshmukh ...now this is too much ..lol..this time i didnt write big big dialogues

keep rocking the forum :)

Omg Rose ,

im speechless ,what have u written ..a simple love story

i have tears in my eyes and a smiel on my face ,

the smile jo ek dum dil say ati hai ,..aww sorry for making u teary but glad it is accompnied with a smile

the smile so genuine ,

indeed Rose this is one of ur best of owrk or i say ..really i liked my previous OS where tasha go their separate ways

It is ur best work

no beauy of the story is that no drama , no action , no nothing ,..hmm like ranbir says keep it simple silly ..lol..

no confusion ,

it oonly had one thing that is love ,

at its purst form

the love so pure and real ,

the love which we cant see now ,..tasha love is pure n innocent ..glad i could maintain that

the story is unique ,beautiful

ever part has its own beauty ,

so want to fall in love ,

these are the ls for which ppl want to fall in love again and again ,..oh god ur praising me too much ..this is so overwhelming ..thanks

awesome Rose, i dont know where u came it from but it just make my heart skip a beat with its simplicity ,

LOve this one

so much that i cant express it ,..i can feel how much u liked it and m happy to know that

i am in emotional dilemma now , read ur work after so much time and this

it has so much u in it ,..hmm a little bit of me is in every nakku of my write ups

like even we dont comment u just have love for every one ,...well i m not sure about that .. i do love ppl who take out time to read but i certainly love more who comment on them as well and if comments r this long then i adore them ..lol..

ur great person Rose ,...ohh plzzz

May u get everything u wish for and may all the ppl seee what i can see in u

that is ur are simply FantASTIC :P..missed hearing this from u ..thanks a lot

oh Rose ,

im going fr readin it agin ...what r u saying

i love it !

re edited

oh btw Rose i forget to mention one of the ebst things of this FF is that

naku didint try to stop her wedding , if she had to , sho would have married and give respect and love to his hubby ,..ya she would have gone ahead with it and would have discharged her duties sincerely but then she would have been a lifeless soul ..i think

its the destiny they share , they do nothing but they are reserved for each other adn GOd make sure that happen ,

see even Dutta is now completed his sentence , if any punishemnt he deserves

he gets it ,

and after taht God gave him gift as his Naku just reserved for him for all those years

i sooo lolove this !

really a great story :D..thanks so much for this long comment ..i really craved for it