Moving on!!!!!! - Page 5

Gud one...plz continue.already loving & enjoying it...

Great job!!!... would love to see a confident and independent Anandi!!

gr8 storyline, much better than the actual serial.

Loved ur storry line.

I am very impressed by ur progressive story.⭐️just love it, looking forward to more updates.

Anandi and Priya are helping Sumitra and Gehna set the table. while Bhairon, Basath,Dev and Jagya are setting on the Dinning.

Sumitra ask Priya and Anandi to sit and eat.
Anandi- am not not a guest, I want to stand too. its has always been the culture in this house.
Sumitra- Alot have change Anandi in your absence we all eat together now. your Kaka and Bapusa have change the law in the house.
Basanth- yes Anandi, we like everyone eating together as life has thought us that there are no difference between a male and a female child what matters is how important someone takes his/herself. (Jagya looks down) while (Anandi smiles).
Priya- thats very good kaka ji. Many people think less of the female, but i love this family a lot for their way of thinking...(she notices Gauri's absence) where is Gauri? (asking Jagya)
Jagya- she would not be able to join us now
Priya- why? she needs to be around her family at this time of her life...I will go get her
Jagya- no...no! let me go.

he gets up to call Gauri.

Gauri is in her room with tears

Jagya comes in slowly...

Jagya- Gauri, are you alright?
Gauri- Why is Anandi going this to me?...what have i done to her? she will not leave my home, my friend and my husband alone...
Jagya- what are you saying gauri? cant you think straight for once?! what has she done now?
Gauri- She came here to show off at me.
Jagya- not everything is about you.
Gauri- of course everything is about you...Jagat...you!
Jagya- how me?
Gauri- she is doing all thing to take you back and the way you were looking at her i...
Jagya- Shut up!
( he was load enough to be heard by the family waiting for them)
Sumitra- let me go and check on them( She goes to the room)
Jagya- i just came to call you down to eat ...what what do i get?
Sumitra- Please you have very important visitors so keep your fight aside for once and come down.(and leaves)
Gauri- i am not going outside this room, i dont want to see her
Jagya- let me go eat!!!! (he also leaves)
Jagya comes down
Priya- she is Okay?
Jagya- yeah she is fine.
Bhairon- let just eat. Keep her food for later.

While eatting Dev really like the food!
Dev- This is really good Auntji. Even better then Anandi's cooking...😉
Sumitra- nobody cooks better than my Ladoo
Anandi- Not even my teacher?...😊
Dev- Anandi is right...Aunti ji, once a teacher always a teacher...lol.
Anandi- Okay, nobody wants you talking now, eat your eat😊.
(Jagya looks irritated...looks at Anandi and Dev smiling secretly at each other).
Priya- oh and she is out finally!
Gauri suddenly comes down a sat gently and quietly...And Gauri serves her the meal. Jagy now looking at her while she eats.

After the food all when and sat down at the lunge.
Priya- (thinking) but Gauri, if you know Anandi this much why are you looking for a Doctor?

Man😡😡😡😡😡gauri is such a jerk🤢🤢🤢

Wow!! The story is so interesting. Please Continue Soon!!!

Originally posted by: avyarima

Anandi and Priya are helping Sumitra and Gehna set the table. while Bhairon, Basath,Dev and Jagya are setting on the Dinning.

Sumitra ask Priya and Anandi to sit and eat.
Anandi- am not not a guest, I want to stand too. its has always been the culture in this house.
Sumitra- Alot have change Anandi in your absence we all eat together now. your Kaka and Bapusa have change the law in the house.
Basanth- yes Anandi, we like everyone eating together as life has thought us that there are no difference between a male and a female child what matters is how important someone takes his/herself. (Jagya looks down) while (Anandi smiles).
Priya- thats very good kaka ji. Many people think less of the female, but i love this family a lot for their way of thinking...(she notices Gauri's absence) where is Gauri? (asking Jagya)
Jagya- she would not be able to join us now
Priya- why? she needs to be around her family at this time of her life...I will go get her
Jagya- no...no! let me go.

he gets up to call Gauri.

Gauri is in her room with tears

Jagya comes in slowly...

Jagya- Gauri, are you alright?
Gauri- Why is Anandi going this to me?...what have i done to her? she will not leave my home, my friend and my husband alone...
Jagya- what are you saying gauri? cant you think straight for once?! what has she done now?
Gauri- She came here to show off at me.
Jagya- not everything is about you.
Gauri- of course everything is about you...Jagat...you!
Jagya- how me?
Gauri- she is doing all thing to take you back and the way you were looking at her i...
Jagya- Shut up!
( he was load enough to be heard by the family waiting for them)
Sumitra- let me go and check on them( She goes to the room)
Jagya- i just came to call you down to eat ...what what do i get?
Sumitra- Please you have very important visitors so keep your fight aside for once and come down.(and leaves)
Gauri- i am not going outside this room, i dont want to see her
Jagya- let me go eat!!!! (he also leaves)
Jagya comes down
Priya- she is Okay?
Jagya- yeah she is fine.
Bhairon- let just eat. Keep her food for later.

While eatting Dev really like the food!
Dev- This is really good Auntji. Even better then Anandi's cooking...😉
Sumitra- nobody cooks better than my Ladoo
Anandi- Not even my teacher?...😊
Dev- Anandi is right...Aunti ji, once a teacher always a teacher...lol.
Anandi- Okay, nobody wants you talking now, eat your eat😊.
(Jagya looks irritated...looks at Anandi and Dev smiling secretly at each other).
Priya- oh and she is out finally!
Gauri suddenly comes down a sat gently and quietly...And Gauri serves her the meal. Jagy now looking at her while she eats.

After the food all when and sat down at the lunge.
Priya- (thinking) but Gauri, if you know Anandi this much why are you looking for a Doctor?

Wow! this story line is amazing! and soo well written. you must start writing novels...very well done⭐️. and thank you so much for entertaining us and keeping us hooked👍🏼