Moving on!!!!!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: vasuja

Dev- good eyes!!!!!! i tell you, good eyes!!!!!!! your son got just that.
mom- yeah yeah yeah...but you have to eat to kheer before going to bed
Dev- i said good eye not mouth! .(laughing)..okay bring it on!...

Loved the above lines...I am loving this insecure gauri...And Dev is simply superb😍

Loved your update dear...take care and have fun...Will look forward for the next one.

Thanks Vasuja, Gauri's insecurity start when she married a guy who has a woman/friend like Anandi and cheated on her. and lied to her for 6 years. no matter how beautiful a woman is, she goes into that kind of marriage not thinking with her head...she will definitely have insecurity issues.

Originally posted by: hooked

Dear AVI,,,,,🤗

Simply beautiful !! Awesome...I love how Gauri is still the outsider and still very insecure and pushing J away with all her phobias. Am glad J is also none too happy with how his marriage is turning out 😆😆 !!

There's such an easy flow to your story...is this your first kid ? You'll have great fun reading out stories and doing plays with the kids...am really enjoying your play..

Yeah dear, he is my first ...well not to talk if my big baby husband...lol. Thanks you make me want to write more!!!. ..lol

Hey Avie, you are keeping us waiting so long 😍. Looking forward to the update. Great job dear love your story.

Ok! so i just wanted to write how sorry i am for not writting more on time. I had so much going for me and my son! dont even get me started...ha ha ha.
Please forgive me and lets pick up from where we stopped!
Love yah!

Anandi talking with her dad
Anandi- Bapusa, i have to go there. Ma Sumitra has been my mom for most of my life and that family is still a part of me
Anandi's dad- well, it seems you've made up your mind. i just dont want to see you hurt seeing those people. i wanted you to forget about them.
Anandi- Bapusa, they also have made me who i am today. yes bad things happened but the family loves me and i am still a daughter to them. moreover Dev and i needs bapusa and ma's blessing since they are also my parents.
Anandi's dad- Anandi, you have really grown into a beautiful, respected and wonderful young woman against all odds. so I trust your judgement. if you feel you have to go there, then i am okay with that
Anandi- thanks Bapusa. Please help me expain this to mom, she has been angry since yesterday night on this.
Anandi dad- your mom is hurt...so she needs more time to understand, forgive and accept things. give her time.
Anandi- yes dad. i understand that. i hope she finally forgive things and move on.
Anandi's dad- Speaking of moving on. how is Dev?
Anandi- he is doing fine bapusa
Anandi's dad- i mean, how are things with him?
Anandi- fine
Anandi's dad- you dont seem happy
Anandi- i am happy, Dev is really i good guy
Anandi's dad- and he loves you. but do you love him?
Anandi- (blushes) dad can we talk about that later?
Anandi's dad- you always want to avoid talking. Your first marriage was a big mistake...you were young and didnt choose your own husband. now things have change, you've grown, you are educated, and very beautiful, i dont want you to compromise your life for anybody.
Anandi- I will not. Its just that after what happen with Jagya, i am kind of scared.
Anandi's dad- Jagya is your past. do not let him destroy your future. use your experience of build yourself not destroy yourself.
Anandi- thanks bapusa. i feel sleepy. i need to sleep. i think you need to sleep too. Good night.
Anandi's dad- Good night beta.


At the Havali

Gauri is on the Phone with Priya(her collage friend)
Priya- Gauri, i waited for this called(smiling)
Gauri- Am so sorry, i misplaced your number...i had to look for it all day. am so sorry i was not able to call you.
Priya- its okay. So have you meet with the Doctor. what did the doctor say?
Gauri- its a brain tumor
Priya- Brain tumor!
Gauri- its still minor, but it still needs to be worked on now.
Priya- how are you feeling.
Gauri- well... scared, but i need your help
Priya- dont worry about it. just tell me how i can help
Gauri- i need a new doc
Priya- what happend to the one you have now"
Gauri- its a long story, you dont really wanna know...believe me!
Priya- Gauri, but am a gynecologist ...i ca...
Gauri- i know! I need to met that doctor you old me about
Priya- oh! sure...the doctor is really good! i think the best in India.
Gauri- how can we met? (Jagya shown at the door listing)
Priya- dont worry i will arrange that. We can even go to the office. lets say tomorrow?
Gauri- yeah! thanks tomorrow will be good(thinking... that way she will not see Anandi in the house). how about 2pm?
Priya- okay...i will come pick you up
Gauri- thanks bye..(drops the phone)

Jagya- got the dactar?
Gauri- i hope so. Priya will come and take me to see him.
Jagya- thats good! maybe we can go together.
Gauri- thanks
Jagya- now have a rest!
Gauri- sure now i even feel better, i dont have to met Anandi again.
Jagya just turned and looks at her.

Loved it Avie. you are building up the suspense very well. Looking forward to the update 😃 On second thought, can the current story writer (Purendru Shekhar) be replaced by you by any chance 😉?

Morningin the Havali
Sumitra take tea to Bhairon and they both talk about how proud they are to have Anandi as a daughter. Bhairon still feels sad about how Anandi left their house..her home. Sumitra tried to make him undertsandthat its all for the best. now Anandi has got the opportunity to finish school and now she is going to bring her new life to met them. Bhairon thinks Anandi may not want to see GaGa, so they shouldnt be home when she comes. Sumitra said Anandi is not more the little girl you use to know, she is very strong! moreover she wants Jagya and that Woman to see how good Anandi had turned out...even after everything they did to her.
Sumitra leaves and entered the Kitchen where Gehna is making breakfast.

Sumitra and Gehna start making Anandi's best food which is dehai Vada. Sumitra also made Ladoo for Anandi and Kheer is Dev.
They talk happily while cooking. Jagya was about to go to walk saw the breakfast Table ready to eat, while coming close, he heard Sumitra and Gehna laughing and
Sumitra- i couldn't believe the doctor is my own Anandi, as she looks so beautiful and very polished in a modern way.
Gehna -its good that even after all this change Anandi still loves, respects and consider them her own.
Sumitra - good people may grow but they never turn bad. (Jagya looks blank at those words).( Sumitra looks a little sad,
Gehna- what happened, why are you sad didi?
Sumitra - when Anandi was small I used to dream of Anandi coming back from walk and comes home running every evening to eat my food. I even dreamth of holding my grand children from Anandi and telling them stories about how stupid Anandi and Jagya fights were. But now i am going to have Anandi like a guest!..(Jagya remembers all his silly baby fights with Anandi when they where kids),
Anandi- "what kind of a man gets angry at every little thing?, (he started smiling unknowingly. and said his words out loud)
Jagya- "Well, Anandi you always have to fight me so i get angry!"...(Sumitra and Gehna turned and say Jagya, they were both shocked at this! Sudenly jagya came back to reality and feel awkward!.).
Jagya- I...I was about to leave for work.
Gehna and Sumitra Nods
Sumitra- eat breakfast first
Jagya- i dont want to be late, i have Patients waiting for me...(he leaves)

Sumitra- what just happened?
Gehna- i really dont understand...i think he was thinking about Anandi?
Sumitra- you think he misses her too?
Gehna- I dont know...but she was close with him before he did what he did, am sure he never forgot her

Originally posted by: andv

Loved it Avie. you are building up the suspense very well. Looking forward to the update 😃 On second thought, can the current story writer (Purendru Shekhar) be replaced by you by any chance 😉?

Thanks dear. I wish!!!!🤣...i really need a job.

great fanfic!!!! :D PLEASEEE CONTINUE! I can't wait till jagya meets dev...<3