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Okay So this is what i love to see in BV. after leap. I have never been a writer, am just writing down what comes to my head. so any correction is welcomed and hopefully you will like my story...if i am going out out line please feel free to close the topic.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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What about Gauri sick and taken to mumbai for treatment, needs a neurosurgeon, Anandi the best Dr to help out. Comes in says
Anandi-"namaste, i am Dr Anandi Wabula, i will be your Dr for today". Her phone rings...Hello Dev,
Hot guy on phone-,"honey, you wanna grap lunch?"
Anandi- "come on, i have a patient who really needs help" why not come over later to my home, I will make special dinner you.
Hot guy on phone- yum yum...That will be great see you at 7:30pm
Anandi-sure!...she keeps offs phone saying "sorry about that"
Gauri and Jagya looking at each other with fallin face.
. Sumitra holding GaGa's beautiful 4 year old baby girl comes in seeing Anandi...they both ran to each other Anandi take her blessings and Sumitra hugs her with tears
Anandi- "ma'a sorry just came back last week and had to much work" but i really want you to bring my fiancee you meet you, next two days if that ok?
Sumitra happy hugs her and kiss her many blessings. Where is DS and Bapusa"
Sumitra - "DS is gone!" and your Bapusa is at work".
Anandi- am sorry ma'a, didnt know, i hope you are ok ma'a,
Sumitra- am going great ladoo
Anandi-And who is the Angel? to the baby girl
Baby- i'm Pooja, who are you?
Anandi- Am Dr Anandi, Pooja, you are so cute and smart!
Pooja- thank you, you are very beautiful too Dr Anandi...

Anandi smiles and said thank you pooja.

Anandi turns to Gauri
Anandi -"Mrs Singh, you ready for me?"..
Gauri- "hmmm, oh oh yes ma'am".
Anandi-Mr Singh, there some papers i need you to sign".
Jagya follow Anandi, Gauri look confused...

Anandi's Office office,
Jagya- "Anandi, i wan...
Dr Anandi-." Mr singh, i need you to Sign here, here, and there"
Jagya- Anandi, i know...
Dr Anandi- Make sure you read it carefully before signing sir. I need to go now, your wife is waiting for me"...

...to be continued
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anandi goes to the check room, and examine Gauri who is dressed as a patient, Gauri looking into Anandi's eyes for any personal emotion...but none,
Anandi- i think, we really need to do the surgery within the week, how about you come in on Thursday, is the alright?
Gauri- yea...ah, what if we start on the medical treatment now(trying to prove she is a doctor too)
Anandi- Mrs Singh, medication is not necessary for this, just come in and we take it lump out, its still minor, but its in a very sensitive area, thats why i want it done this week...so take good rest and i will see you on Thursday madam.
Anandi walk out. meets Jagya outside look at him with a "am done look"..and said .Jai se Krishna ma'a
Sumitra.- jai se Krishna Ladoo... Anandi goes away.

Jagya walks i to Gauri, and asks if she ok...she nods. and she walked out with him holding her.

At home, Sumitra goes on telling Bhairon, Gehna and Bassath all about Anandi all are happy,
GaGa walks to their room speechless.
Jagya trying to Feed Gauri looks far way (thinking). Gauri observes him. and ask
Gauri- Jagya, are you thinking about her?
Jagya - who?
Gauri-dont play with me, cos since we came back you are not yourself.
Jagya- Dont start again Gauri, you always think about things way out of line
Gauri- out of line? dont you think i saw the way you were looking at her
you think you need a mistake marrying me?
Jagya- Gauri!
Gauri- we are changing Drs, i dont want her treating me
Jagya- we had hard time looking for a Dr and now she is the best, how do you think i felt when i saw her there? but we are doing this for you, so please stop putting on all these act...we are talking about your health here
Gauri- its my health so i say we look for a different dr
Jagya- Well, you keep looking. i dont know what you want me to do...walks out to the terrace, where its raining, thinking about all the past love and hurt between him and Anandi, his daughter comes there pull his arm and he picked her up...still thinking..

to be continued

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scene shefts to Anandi reaching home driving by herself.
Anandi's Home is very modern, given to her by the hospital she works in. She works in and her mom come down looking worried,
Ma'a- Anandi, i told you not to be coming late , now Dev was here, he waited for you
Anandi- OMG Dev, dont worry mom, i will talk to him
Ma'a- eat your food its getting cold,
Anandi- ma'a i will eat later, where's bapusa?
Ma'a- you know your dad, in bed already

Goes to her room Anandi calls Dev
Dev- Anandi,
Anandi- i made you wait hena? Sorry, had a bad day at work
Dev- you should have called, but its ok, tell me about it,
Anandi- Its ok, we will talk later i just need to rest for now, talk to you soon.
Dev- that ok, talk to you soon, ...aur Anandi, I love you!!
Anandi- you are so sweet Dev...good night.

Keeps the phone, And prays, God please hold me through this.
wears her nighty and goes to bed.

At the Havali, Jagya still thinking and talking to himself, what i am going to do now, how am i going to face her?...but waw she looks waw...Jagya! ...what are you thinking, i shouldn't thinking like this? i love Gauri. Gauri is my wife, Gauri is beautiful...oh god but Anandi looks so wonderful, well thank God she is getting married! but to who? who is that man? I want to know him, but i dont think i should be here when they come, ...well i dont really care is her life, why should it bother me. But do you think she is mad at me, she doesn't look happy seeing me and didnt even say any thing to me.Yes she is still not happy with me. God i really need help here! how could you give me this fate?
Gauri- Jagya!
Jagya- coming
goes to the room
Gauri- jag...
Jagya- can we stop talking about this?
Gauri- what are you talking about? i haven't even said anything yet.
Jagya- i know what you want to say and frankly, i think we both need to sleep right now
He turns his head the other way and Gauri looks confused and sad, looking at him, while Jagya's eyes still open, but away from gauri..

To be continued
And thank you for liking it, i didnt know i would write some thing that someone would want to read...lol...but yeyyy thanks!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next day, Anandi at her office, looking at some document, and suddenly a knock...
bollywood style, smoken hot, tall looking guy ,with the body of a geek god . wearing a pair of very well fitted white sleeve folded shirt, with blue jeans. Dev is a mixture of an Indian dad and a British mom.
Dev- hey doc, can i come in?
Dr Anandi- Dev? shouldn't you be at work by now?
Dev- I first asked
Dr Anandi- you will never stop will you...(smiles)
Dev- I took a day off, i wanted my office fixed. so i said to myself, why not take the most beautiful woman out today?
Dr Anandi- Dev!
Dev- so i took my mom out! (smiling)
Anandi- Pagal ladka!
Dev-. ok i want to take the second miss world out to make the day complete!...(hold Anandi's hands and smiling).
Anandi- Ok wait for me to clear my table. ( keeps bak some books together, they both went out.)

At the Havali.
Jagya just finished taking a bath, Servant bring food for Gauri who is Lying down, but awake.
Jagya- How are you feeling today?
Gauri- great
Jagya- Am going to work now, please take care of you.
Pooja inters running toward her mom and Sumitra follows with a cup of milk for Pooja. but stops right outside the room.
Gauri- good morning Sasuma,
Sumitra- hope you are feeling better now.Pooja! you need to go take your milk.
Gauri- Pooja, come on go take the milk.
Jagya- am going out now
Pooja- Papa, if i take the milk, would it make me as beautiful and smart like the Dr we saw yesterday?
Sumitra, Jagya and Gauri looks shock! and look at each other. Sumitra ran in to Pooja,
Sumitra- you want to be like the Dr?
Pooja- yes, dadisa (nodding).
Sumitra- Ok, ladoo, brink all the milk and you be just like her.
Pooja - yeeyyy! (and drank the whole milk). Papa, can i follow the driver to pick up Sapna from school today?
(Jagya nods.)
Pooja- let me go and see dadasa.( runs out to Bhairon with Sumitra)
Jagya and Gauri dont seem happy, their Daughter idolizes Anandi after just one day of meeting her. Jagya walks out to the office and Gauri looks on.

To be continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continuation,
At the nice very elegant Restaurant, Anandi and Dev sat out side.
Waiter serving them with they will like to eat.And they placed their orders.
Dev - Okay Anandi, let it out. you dont look very happy. does it have any thing to do with yesterday?
Anandi- not really, but yeah, about yesterday sorry for keeping you waiting. i just had a bad day at work thats all
Dev- its ok, your Parents were good company anyway. and your dad was wonderful to be around.
Anandi- yeah yeah yeah!!!! dad and his questions..
Dev- hey i can understand, I would do worst to any man coming to take away our baby from us...and your dad is giving me all the "daddy leasons" i need...😃
Anandi still thinking...
Dev- Anandi?
Anandi- Dev, what will you do if some one that who really hurt you so bad and nearly destroyed comes to you for help
Dev- Some one who want to distroy you? does this have anything to do with your ex?
Anandi- they came to the hospital yesterday?
Dev- they?
Anandi- he and Gauri
Dev- you know i've always wanted to see that thing that called himself a man. on the second hand, i would be locked up after meeting him😡
Anandi- 😳 . Dev, i saw sasuma
Dev- Anandi, i understand these people were good to you, but why keeping a relationship that is already gone
Anandi- i cant keep away from his parents just because he was not good
Dev- who is asking you to keep away from them, am talking about the names you still call them with...okay? so what will yo call my own mom?
Anandi- I know, I know...I promise you that will stop!
Dev- thank you!
Anandi- Dev, one more thing, please dont be mad...i told her we will be going over to see her for blessings.
Dev- sure! tell her i say hi
Anandi- i mean with you
Dev- me!!!!! ( Anandi, looks sad) okay, Darling anything for you.
Anandi- Thanks☺️.
Dev- Hey maybe we can Visit, Shyam and his family after that?
Anandi- sure!..didi will be so happy to see us
Dev- yeah i will not eat before we go there ...she likes overfeeding me.
Anandi- nope! you love eating too muh of her food...lol( Anandi laughing).
Dev- (holding Anandi's hand). I love to see this smile. It just makes life perfect...gosh! i love you soo much it hurts...
(Anandi is Blushing☺️)...
Anandi-eat your food, its getting cold.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the separate post. please continue...love your episodes
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice continue plzzz...though d daughter thing feels sumwat wierd...anyways...gud storyline ...really interesting

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9staroneserials

Nice continue plzzz...though d daughter thing feels sumwat wierd...anyways...gud storyline ...really interesting


Yeah i wish there is no daughter too but GaGa should have been married for 6-7 years...its only logical if they have a daughter two kids...even if to make DS and the rest of the family accept them happily.
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Originally posted by: avyarima


Yeah i wish there is no daughter too but GaGa should have been married for 6-7 years...its only logical if they have a daughter two kids...even if to make DS and the rest of the family accept them happily.

If thats on ur mind, then ya i agree 2 ur point...

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