Story - Do Saal Baad - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: visrom

I am extremely busy till 21st. I will take an off on 22nd after this whole week of heavy work.

I'll try to finish it on that day. Pls bear with me.



Mera suspense to saare comment parke aise hi increase ho raha hein...but i am waiting when u will finish it & i am going to read it...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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See, I wrote about 75% of this under the impression that Vivek is leaving. now I am unable to finish it because I don't know what's gonna happen to Vivek. Will try to finish it if it fits into what happens today. Otherwise, just read the Behrupiya part...and treat it as a standalone thing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I read the story Vis ... you've developed the plot so well and handled it so simply ... and after reading it id just say please do complete it no matter what ... the story is really awsome !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes Visrom di!
plz cumplete d story!
its just fab..
and no matter that Vivek is in CID or nt,if he is in ur Story,then let it be yaar!
best of luck!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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At last read it. You have handled the pliot well Vis as always. And I love your narration style👏


But I dint see at the bottom. Its incomplete
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
I am not going to finish this. Vivek is playing Hide and seek with me. I first wrote it differently, then Vivek left, so I wrote everything with Sachin, then didnt feel good about it, so wrote fresh including a nice send off for Vivek and suddenly he's back!!!!! Forget it!!! Sorry guys. I cannot complete this. Apologies!!!!! closing this thread.

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