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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Wow Story by Vis... 😃 Will read it tonight...

along with sunny's story... 😆 Backlogs and backlogs... that means mere planning mein kuch gadbad hai 😉

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

excellent starting di!👏👏 plz complete it asap! I am eagerly waiting!

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

great story after so many days!!!! Plz continue soon.. M dying to read what will happen next.. Oh n BTW u did a great job wid d jumbled up plot of Beherupiya 👏 👍🏼

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kelly32

@kelly32

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

great story..👍🏼
you are covering all the loopholes that behrupia left behind..
waiting for next part..😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

DII... kum az kum yehi likh diya karein that this version is INCOMPLETE...😭 banda ko HEART ATTACK tou na ho na...🤢

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

NICE ONE DI ..its great but PLEASE COMPLETE IT SOON DI ...

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Nice Statring..the way u used Behroopya Case in this Story was Great..Also u cleared many things which was not cleared abt Behroopya till now...

And The vivek part was so good..Atleast U added him in ur story and no silent exit of him in ur story like FW..

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

I have the idea in mind...need some time to out it on paper (sorry notepad).

I am a bit busy..got to work overtime for a week. Will write when I get time.

I suppose one part of what I wanted to write for a long time has been covered...how Abhijeet got kidnapped etc.

The other part has just started...picture abhi baaki hai, pls be patient...during AKA didn't you all wait eagerly week after week?

Please bear with me. Those who have not read, please read it up and tell me whether you liked it or not and whether there are any loopholes which are not tallying with Behrupiya.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago