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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angili

muski waiting make it fast please


Jaldi kya hai...
Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...!!! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

behkudi
part 14


she kissed him all over.. She pulled him by his collar and kissed him madly...
Maan met her commanding touch. She threaded her fingers through his hair & pulled his head deepening the kiss. She got carried into behkudi. She pulled him closer angrily.. the thought of sasha's fingers touching the nape of his neck flashed she gripped the hair wildly... her teeth deepened on his lips..leaving her mark.. his skin nipped. She still kissed him violently, nipping his lips further & wrapping her arms around him, nails scratching against his nape as she leaned herself on him. When his fingers fixed in her hair, he grimaced in pain as she nipped yet again.

Maan became wild in passion ...taking it out on her, pulling her hair & forcing her head backwards to combat the pain. Geet's slender throat was bared to his ferocious lips & he growled tipped carnally to fix his lips over her milky skin viciously leaving a brand on her skin that made her cry out. Her fingers dug into his hair pulling them in pain.

He pulled her head down to his & kissed her over & over not gently or softly but cruelly. Geet moaned & closed her eyes .. tears slipping from the corner ..healing her ache of the sight she saw when the lifts..door closed. Her lips were nipped as his, her cheeks flushed & she could feel the revealing burning in her .. telling her to keep going. He was no where to stop.. he pushed her against the wall, she seeked for his lips & took them again in cruelly.. he moaned.. his hands pinned her hand on the wall.. again the series of events played back in her mind.. her fight slowly softened..

the door closed.. but then ..when she came down ..he was standing behind her.. he was never with sasha in the lift.. she didn't kiss her.. a smile touched her lips & she surrendered ' her acceptance only made him more wild. He moved down to her neck to her curves above the dress.. squeezing them.. & his lips followed.

Then why did he walk into the lift with that b****..thought flashed she pushed him away.. he just did all this to hurt her.
U did all this to hurt me... she cried..
I hate u.. I hate u...
he pulled her from the hair & crushed his lips to her.. & groaned in.. no.. u can't
she tried to push him .. he didn't budge, they ever so lost in their passion.. didn't even realize they were fighting ..(or should say.. making up.. uf muskan confused).. in the stairway.

Geet became conscious when she heard some footsteps approaching them. Maan.. she..tried to get his attention to the sound.. he didn't care.. he never did. Maan.. koi aa raha hain
Maan..
she moaned as his lips sank over her curves.. his fingers slipped under her kurti.
She was scared now.. she tried to move away. As the person crossed them.. she pretended to wait for the lift turning her back to him.. the guy smiled weekly & greeted Maan how shot agonized look to him.

The moment the guy went away Geet took the steps ..maan held her hand pulled her back..he pressed face against the wall.. why didn't u kiss me infront of that guy..
she looked at him from corner of her eye as her face was pressed against the lift buttons... He turned her hand & pulled her hair tilting her head towards him. Tears threatened to fall.
Why ? He screamed
she closed her eyes & shouted at him in anger
I never want to kiss u ..not infront of that guy .. not infront of any one.. never ..
he slammed her head on the wall... I saw that.. & smirked caressing his lip


she angrily struggled ...which was in vein.. she cried out..

that didn't mean anything..the way it doesn't mean anything to u
..sirf aap har baat pe
bematlab kiss kar sakten ho
main nahi
Geet
he roared
kya kar logen she said angrily
he turned her hand & pushed her away
she inched backward crawling on the floor.. looking horrifyingly at Maan..
it didn't mean anything
he lifted her up holding her arm..
nothing???.. he asked looking ferociously into her eyes
nothing.. she cried looking straight into his eyes in anger & pain
he jerked her hand & pushed her away... & left from there
she was terrified with the change in emotions in his eyes like something nipped..


the moment he left she sank down to the floor & cried out.. her pain was deep with in seeing him leave like that she knew he took her answer literally. A week passed & Geet didn't see Maan. She had no clue where he was. No one had. She couldn't even ask anyone. She couldn't sleep ..couldn't eat.. couldn't thing anything but him. Her whole day passed looking for him, waiting for him endlessly.

Meanwhile Brij managed to get a very good job in his best friends company. Brij came back excitedly & lifted Geet & turned her around. He opened a gift pack..pulled out a red duppata & put it around her head. He kissed her forehead.
Brij '
aab tujhe job karne ki koi zarorat nahi
Geet looked at him in shock, how could she leave the job.. leave Maan.. her only hope to see him again will also die.. her heart cried
rano & papaji smiled
brij ' aab tho shaadi ki tayari karo
Geet held the duppata ..nahi ..
brij '
haan pagli.. mera dost hain na.. raj, uske papaji ne khud tera haat manga hain
Geet ' nahi ..
brij ' they want the wedding to be arranged in a week
Geet - yeh nahi ho sakta.. she ran out .. crying.. holding the duppata
she didn't know where to go whom to cry out to.. she went to the office at that hr.
she just barged into his cabin like she knew he will be there & he was there..
yeh tumhara bed room nahi hain

this is not wat she expected after seeing him after 7 whole days.. 604800sec.. thats how she had been waiting for this very monent counting every sec

she didn't listen to him ..just straight went & held his collar..
where did u go?
Main tumhara secretary hoon yah tum meri

how could u leave me like this?
She shook him holding his collar
he snapped her hand off his collar & pushed her away..
her red duppata that was in her hand got stuck on his shirt
he irritatedly looked at the piece of cloth..he turned it angrily & tore it off & threw at her
she held the duppata close her self.. & dipped her head..
I am getting married next week
Maan ' congrats..
he said coldly
she looked at his face expressionless..blank.. like it didn't mean anything to him
Geet ' I will have to leave the job.. her voice sounded so broken
Maan ' I thought u already left it.
Geet covered her mouth & cried.. she looked at him one last time & left from there.. his every word.. played back in her mind.. it all felt like an illusion..his passion..his anger..his claim..his love.. was it love.. or she was imagining things... aaj jo kaha woh sach tha.. yah jo humesha mera dil ne suna woh sach tha?

She didn't know when she swore to never be apart, that only she.. still he was in her heart & soul & he had it whole..she will have to wait for ever to be whole..all her love in vain sadly he doesn't even knoe her pain.. in this 7 days she realized without him was like day without sun, rain with out clouds.. night without stars..a rainbow without color..a life without life..& she is doomed.. forced..hopelessly to still loves & miss him.. she still felt there where no words to describe how she felt vacuum with out him...incomplete.. heart without heart beat.


She locked herself in the room slamming self against the wall, she was too numb with the hurt within to feel the pain she just kept going till she shattered crashed to the floor coated in pain, losing herself in the darkness of night with no hope even in the light..a week ...she stopped trying to fight & let the darkness take over.. she swallowed complete bottle of sleeping pills as they walked her to the matap dressed in the bridal red dress. With palms decorated with mehendi.

-behkudi part 14-

-PREV PART 13 NEXT PART 15-
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay what happened now .. ? me totally confused 😕
Edited by Sia89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Baba ji Yeh Bekhudi nay Kiya kar diya ...

Maan has gone crazy in anger
Geet ate the sleeping pills 😲
continue soon
Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏superb👏
loved it
but no precap😭😭😭
waiting for next part
update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
o god. now what.
cliffhanger. very bad :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!
suicide noway...i never thought about this twist
Cont soon
Keep rocking
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
The pull between them is just too too strong , and the time they have known each other, too little.. no wonder they are so torn apart every time they come together and they hurt the other in their own confounding emotions that are so intense they wipe out any reasoning or logic...

wow.. she swallowed sleeping pills😳... eagerly awaiting the next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
U updated...!!!!
Will read n comment... 😃
Edited by Sameenaas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

r we getting another update of BEKHUDI...😉

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