Maneet FF-tum mere kaun hu-pt-48- pg-144 - Page 32

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wow.. u made us cry yaar.. cont sooon
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Nice update!!! great to see Maan taking careful steps to bring geet out of the shock
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m glad tht maan is trying so hard to bring his geet back to life
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beautiful update...
lv d way maan being paitent n caring 4 geet...
ccontinue...
luv u ...
chao
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nice yr plz update next part😊
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PART- 27

Her pain is melting into tears. After a hours she couldn't control. She fainted. He lifted and went to his room. The hotel room is luxuries and it is very romantic. But maan is not in romantic mood. He is worried about her health. He laid her on bed. Immediately he called arjun and explained about her health.

Arjun:" don't worry maan , this is good sign?I hope she will recover very soon, but don't miss her medicines. Now she need lot of love and care. Her mind is not willing to come from her pain all these days. Today she poured every thing. Now her mind is not ready to trust anybody but you have to make it possible." When he convinced maan relief.

He went to near her. she is sleeping peacefully. " geet...geet utto ..geet" she opened her eyes. again its filled by tears. He robbed her tears with his forefinger. She closed her mouth from palm and trying to control her sobbing. He removed her palm." No geet...pls cry...how much you want to cry ...cry it now it self...but this will be lost tears from your eyes. next time I don't want to see tears in your eyes." he hugged her. she is not believing his concern. She trying to move from his grip.

Maan:" no geet, I am sorry, I hurt you too much geet. I have surrendered to your love. No one can love me in this world like you..." he saw her eyes deeply. nothing sure in her eyes."?.geet I promise you , I am for you?." Still lot of question in her eyes. now he is lieing with her."?geet trust me ,I love you geet.." he kissed on her forehead. Now she clenched his shirt collar tightly. Her head leaned on his chest. Again she is wetting his shirt. He holed her tightly and he leaned back. Now he is on bed. Her head is on top of his chest. He allowed to cry. After a long time she stopped and slipped to sleep. He covered her from his arms completely and slept.

Almost one week passed. There is a lot of changes in geet. now she is not protesting to take her food and medicine. Now she is reacting every single touch to maan. some where she started to agree present. Now are view changed on maan. they visit almost tourism pleases in shimla. It is wonderful experience both of them. Maan visited many times to shimla but he didn't enjoy so much. This time each and every second he is enjoying in his honeymoon trip. But still sangeetha shadow is not leaving him. when ever he saw geet face he feel sangeetha. She rushed into his memory. Now he is not bothering himself. He him self taken the oath. At any cast he will not leave geet. he is punishing himself for ruining her life. he is very careful when she is with him.

One day morning he planned to take her another picnic spot in Manali. Geet still sitting quite on bed. " geet be fast. Today ill show you another nature beauty spot.." she didn't turn to him. maan knotted his eyebrows. Still she is not speaking single word. as per his notice now she improved physically also. Still what is bothering he didn't understand. When he touched her shoulder she turned to him.

"challo geet, its time up" she handover the sari to him. he looked her ,She shied. "you want me to tie the sari?" she nodded. He grabbed to his arms. His eyes are teary. How much she love me. how much she is waiting for my touch. Did I deserve her love...no ...

When they reach Manali it is almost night.as soon as they finished their dinner they settled in hotel room. Actually it is not like a room it is like hut. There is a village touch in hut. It is quite impressing for new couple. It is too cold ,maan raised the room temperature. Geet standing near window and watching bluff falling. She open the door and went to enjoy the bluff.

Maan stunned looking her beauty . her white sari given lot of glow and purity to her skin. his desires fire burst. After few minutes he moved to near her "geet it is too cold...come inside." he brought her back to room.

He hugged her from backside. His face is caressing her cheek. Her white mixed pink skin turn to dark pink. " geet you are beautiful..." He whispers in her ears. His hands moving on her waist. It is trying to trace her body curves. Finally it is moved to her mounts. " geet , mey papa banha chatha hu..." she closed her eyes in pain. Mey be she remember her baby. he left her in one jerk.

But geet didn't let him to leave her. she holed his hand tightly. He lifted her chin from his forefinger. She closed her eyes. "geet anke kolo.." still she close her eyes. . he hugged her tightly. Her mounts touched him hardly her head rested on his shoulder. After some time he broken his hug. She closed her face from her hands.

"geet ...pls..look at me...geet speak to me.." she still shied.

He removed her hands from her face. Her beauty raised due to her shyness. he rubbed his nose to her nose. His hand moved to her back and loosen her hairs. he captured her lips. When he touched her lips its burning. He sucked her lips. Seconds passed. But his kiss in not ending its going to deep and deep. it is heavy to breath her. when he freed her lips swollen. "geet you are too sweet?I could.. I want to eat you raw." She closed her eyes. He moved to her back. His favorite part on her body. her nape he found small black mole he bite her hardly. Geet heart slipped with a jerk.. after biting he caressed by his tongue. It is sending chill air to her spine. Placing his lips on her shoulder he closed his eyes in pressure.

his hands moved to her waist. His fingers searched to her belly button. His hand played with on her belly button. Geet lost her sense completely. Her knees converted into jelly. it seems she lost all her strength and she is leaning completely on maan support. After some time when she about to move gathering her stamina he holed her sari pallu tightly. Slowly he pulled to him. his eyes are shining like diamonds.

He whispered in her ears" geet tum bahut acchi hu..."she turned back. His eyes filled with lot of love and desires. Her feet glued on floor. she couldn't move. He close the distance between them. "geet I want you completely..." he is looking her approval for her eyes. she buried her face in his chest.

Maan got his answer. He lifted her and made his way to bed.

He placed her softly on bed. He started remove his shirt button. Geet closed her eyes and turned back to him with shy. In very few seconds he in back of her. he turned her to him with her shoulder. "Geet look at me...if you shy so much what can I do..."in husky voice. He removed her hands from her face. "...geet pls..." she opened her eyes. he felt he is in heaven. He didn't see so much of love in his life . her brown almond eyes are filled with passion, love and purity ."I love your eyes...bcoz you won't talk to me...but your eyes will talk to me..." immediately she closed her eyes." pls speak ...to me ...geet..." he kissed on her eyes. he moved to her ear elbow. He turned back. Again his gaze on her mole on neck. this time he bite her mole slowly. "geet ..i want to count some more beauty spots on you..." she curled in his hug. Now his hand in her sari pallu. He removed it. He saw another mole on her throat. He sucked there...he continued his discovery to tip to toe.. Now she is new born baby in his hand. " geet total nine moles..." she buried her face in his chest. His hand moved to her belly. he is seducing heavily. She felt chock in her throat. She started breath hard. Her heart started to beat increased to double. He kissed on her nave and licked .he pressed his face hardly on her belly. she couldn't take any more. Her hands clenched pillow tightly. "maan..."his eyes widened..."geet..."

PRE CAP: MAAN + GEET= MAANEET.

Freinds this is very beutifull song in my langvage. just i converted in english . i didn't change much bcoz the wordings give beatifull meaning so pls any mistake forgive me.

Maan & geet has become one that is written by brahma.
I love you more then my life, you are only mine y u are worried,
Give me all your pains and I give you all my happiness to you,
Rain is coming, why can't you smile for me my love,
Maan & geet has to be one that's written by bramha.
Maan: one eye to another eye ,
Can I bring and give you heaven,
Anything can happen you are my partner,
In your eyes this will be a last tears drop,
I hide you in my heart like small bird,
Ill give you lot of love I hide you in my arms,
No body find in history like my love Why can't you smile for me my love .
Maan and geet has to be one that's written by bramha?
Come like storm or breeze
But once you come and touch
and go Without seeing you I am about to cry,
Without your smile my world is stopped,
I am not getting sleep to my eyes only I am day dreaming,
I am tired come and give me a sprit,
Without u I am become breathing dead body,
If rain stopped but tree drops are not stopped,
Come here, come here my love.
Maan and geet has to be one that's written by bramha?
Geet : nobody seen a god , mey be he will be like you.
can i call you friend you are more near to me,
can i call you my valentine you are more then that,
can I lie on your heart,
can I melt in your hands,
I want to be with you till my life end,
After my death also I need you,
Till the world end I need you,
I want you , I ll come with you , ill come with you
ill join you like river with sea.
Maan & geet has become one that is written by brahma.
I love you more then my life,
you are only mine y u are worried,
Give me all your pains and I give you all my happiness to you,
Rain is flowing, why can't you smile for me my love,
Maan & geet has to be one that's written by bramha.
Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments


Edited by varsha-sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I dislike how Sangeetha still shadows Maan
he has to move on
but i'm so happy that Geet is getting better!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
More than their romance I loved the improvements in Geet!!! she is actually getting over the incident...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part..
Thanks for the pM
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...
love d part 26 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

sorry 4 d late comment ... was busy with family ...

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