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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 6(part 1)

Suddenly same strong arms caught her frm falling.She stared at him wid her baby brown eyes.Both were lost in their own world thn

Pia(whispered):Abhay

Hearing this Abhay cute smile turn into confused expression

Abhi:Abhay 😕.Madam who is Abhay?I m Abhi Abhi khanna

Pia: Abhi

Abhi: Correct Abhi waise 4 ur knowledge let me tell u U r still in my arms

Pia stand up wid a jerk

Pia:Oh sorry

Abhi: No worries sweetheart.Every gals wnt 2 b in my arms

Pia:Wht?

Abhi:Nothing

All came running 2 thm

Radhika: Are u ok beta?

Pia:Yes aunty I m f9

Haseena: Wht happened 2 u dear

Pia: Nothing mom I was jst feeling weak.May b due 2 jet lag

Haseena:Control urself Pia b4 u fall.

Radhika:Ohh u all were asking 4 my son.So here he is.Meet my son Abhi & Abhi this is Mr.Dobriyal

Abhi(shook his hand) wid Dobriyal

Radhika:Their daughter Misha

Misha mouth was still open due 2 shock

Abhi(shook his hand wid her):Have u invited flies 2 have party in ur little mouth if not thn shut ur mouth.No wonder u r tashi's frnd.

Misha(angrily):Dude keep ur mouth shut

Radhika: These r Raichand

Abhi shook hand wid Chandeena

Haseena:How's ur injury son?

Abhi:F9 ma'am thnx 4 helping

Radhika(confused):Injury?

Pia talking 2 Haseena through telepathy

Pia:Mom,So Abhi was the injured guy.Y havent u told me tht?

Haseena:B'coz I don't wnted 2 c u in pain

Pia:But mom u shuld have.He is my Abhay or so much lke Abhay(they both broke their connection)

Abhi:Oh its long story mom I was injred a bit & this kind family helped me out

Radhika:Oh Abhi how many time I told u be careful.

Abhi:Sorry mom

As soon as Abhi said mom haseena turned her face toward him & thn wid sudden jerk she said

Haseena:Oh meet my daughter Pia

Pia shook hand wid Mrs Khanna,tashi & thn wid Abhi.Both were holding each other hand 4 long time & thn

Tashi:Guys u both r still holding each other hand

Both came out frm their dreamland 2 reality

Abhi: Mrs.Raichand is she really ur daughter?

Haseena: Yes.Why?

Abhi: No I mean u luk sexy.No one will say u have this big daughter.

Haseena smile at Abhi's mischievous comment while Chand was staring at him

Abhi(thinking):Oh this man seems lke Hitler.Wife pai comment kiya toh

he is staring & galti se inki daughter pai line maar di toh tu toh gaya
Abhi but it would b fun
Radhika:Abhi behave urself.Sorry Mrs Raichand

Haseena:Its ok Mrs.Khanna.Ur son is very sweet

Haseena: I guess v shuld leave children alone they need a space frm

us.Enjoy u all
And all Budha party left & thn Abhi turned 2 Pia
Abhi 2 tashi(staring at Pia):Apni frnds se nahi introduce karwaogi

Tashi:Oh sorry.Bro meet my frnd Misha

Misha:Hello dude

Tashi:And bro this is Pia Misha's bst frnd cum soul sis abhi abhi Spain se aayi hai

Abhiya shake their hands

Abhi:Nice 2 meet u Miss Pia Raichand

Pia:Same 2 u

Abhi:Well u luk gorgeous in ur black dress

Pia(smiling):Thnx

Tashi:Oh bro dont u dare flirt wid my frnds. Pia & misha let me warn u

my bro is big time flirt so uski cheesy bato mai mat aana
Abhi:Shut up Y r u lying abt me?I m such an innocent
Tashi:Ur drama wont work on me
Misha: This party sounds boaring no fun, no masti

Tashi:Y don't v dance

Misha:Gud idea
Pia:U go.I don't wnt 2 dance
Tashi & Misha:Plz come

Pia:No I m not feeling well

Both Tashi & misha left while Abhi & Pia stand there

Abhi: So Ms.Pia u love black.Dont u?

Pia:My life becomes black

Abhi:Wht?

Pia: nothing actually someone very close 2 me used 2 love black.I guess U entered my room in morning

Abhi:Oops sorry 4 tht I don't wnt but by mistake I bumped into ur
room.

He bent a bit & put frwd his hands

Abhi:May I have pleasure dancing wid lovely lady

Pia:Sorry but I don't dance.I don't know how 2 dance

Abhi:Who asked u 2 dance?I will make u dance.I m so charming tht

every gal luks graceful wid me(wid pride)
Pia:Oh very over confident
Abhi:No confident
Abhi took her hand & they went 2 Dance floor

Song played


Meet me on the Equinox
Meet me half way
When the sun is perched at it's highest peek
In the middle of the day
(Abhiya danced 1st without touching each other.Only their eyes were staring & they both were lost)

Let me give my love to you(Thn Abhi hold her tight frm waist)
Let me take your hand(He take her hands & put on his shoulder)
As we walk in the dimming light
Or darling understand(Then push her away & thn pull her back)

That everything, everything ends
That everything, everything ends

Meet me on your best behavior(He throw Pia downside)
Meet me at your worst(Thn pull her agn turn his neck 2 Pia almost touching her cheek)
For there will be no stone unturned
Or bubble left to burst

Let me lay beside you, Darling(He cupped Pia face & carres her hair)
Let me be your man
And let our bodies intertwine(they came so close tht their lips almost touched each other)
But always understand

Pia was lost in his eyes thn she remembers the day whn Abhay proposed her

(Part 6 ka part 2 bhi hai neeche dekho)
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey shrish main bhi sone ja rahi hun shayad, to pls let me knw tu aaj to post nai kar rahi, coz i don't want to get late😆😉

Ohh I updated😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 6(Part 2)
Flashback

Abhay blindfold Pia

Pia:Where r u taking me Abhay?

Abhay:Do u trust me?
Pia: Ofcourse I trust u.More thn myself,more thn life
Abhay:Thn no questions honey.Ur ques literally kill me
Pia:How mean
Thn Abhay unfold the black cloth.It was all dark & thn suddenly a projector starts which shows Pia's lovely pics,Abhiya moments
Pia was so lost watching it.Her eyes were mist she turned back 2 see Abhay but 2 her surprise Abhay was was bent on his knees
Abhay:Pia u mean everything 2 me.V r born 2 love each other.U r my destiny,my soulmate,my life.I love u more thn anything in dis world,more thn myself.I m lucky 2 have u & now I want 2 become luckier.
Thn suddenly 4 big balloons burst.Red rose pedals falls on Abhiya & in those ballons it was written 'Will U Marry Me?'Pia was jst staring at balloons
Abhay took out a ring & asked:Will u Marry me Pia?
Pia(wid mist eyes):Yes
Abhay wore her gorgeous rubby ring
Abhay:Hey now no more tears jaan.He kiss her on lips
Everybody came out 2 wish thm,
Thn song play at background
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you

& Abhiya dance 2 its tune(I'll describe this scene better in another flashback)
Flashback ends
That everything, everything ends
That everything, everything ends
That everything, everything, everything ends
(Abhi spin her in full speed.)
Pia lost her balance & agn Abhi hold her.
Pia look at Abhi eyes & thinks
'Same eyes,same touch.Is my Abhay back?I m loosing myself all over agn
Abhi luks at Pia lovingly still holding her & thinks
'Oh this girl is driving me crazy.I dont know wht but something is pulling me towards her.She seems different frm all the girls I ever came across'
Misha & tashi come 2 thm
Tashi:Hey whts wid u 2.Pia always falling & bro always holding her chalo uth jao
They stand up
Abhi:Y dont u leave me alone?Atleast 2day my bak bak machine.Its my birthday spare me
Misha: Oh so wht if its ur b'day tht doesnt mean u get license 2 hold my sis
Tashi:Yes I agree wid u misha
Abhi:Oh shut up .No wonders tht tashi became frnd wid u misha.I hope Pia is not lke u 2
Misha & Tashi:Wht?
Abhi😡:Psyco
Pia:Plz stop it.Misha plz stop fighting
Misha & tashi:Ok sorry
Abhi:Thnk god Pia.U know my sis is mad & so is ur frnd Misha.Both r made 4 each other.Y dont u 2 marry waise bhi now its legal in India😉😆
Pia smile at Abhi's comment
Misha & Tashi: Shut up.Very funny.
Tashi:Misha I told u my bro is mad.C he is
Mish:I agree wid u.Ur bro is dabba.I cant stay here 4 a min.Chalo Pia
Abhi:Ohh u to made 4 each other bhootni.If u 2 wnt 2 go thn go Pia will stay wid me
Pia stares at Abhi
Misha:Why she will stay wid u.She is my BFF & cousin.Pia come wid me
Pia was abt 2 go thn
Abhi(making puppy faces):Oh Its my b'day & u wont grant my wish.U broke my heart
Pia luk at him lovingly.His cute expression were making him insane
Pia:Ohh come it's his b'day
Tashi:Dont tell me evn u fall in his drama.He is big time dramebaaz.Bro atleast dont flirt wid my frnds.Plz dont insult me infront of thm
Misha & tashi left
Abhiya standing near bar
Abhi:So how come u able 2 tolerate ur Bff misha?
Pia:Oh come on Misha is not only my BFF but my soul sis & I know u too luv ur sis.I can clearly c in ur eyes
Abhi(smiling):Yes I do love my sis & I love 2 irritate her
Pia:Thts very sweet of u Abhay
Abhi:Agn Abhay.I m jealous(fake jealousy)
Pia:Oh I m sorry agn
Abhi:Oh its ok u can call me Abhay.Sabhay ya whtever.I wont really mind tht.Gorgeous gals can call me anything they wnt.Waise gals evn call me 'Jaan,darling,honey,sweetheart' Wht u wnt 2 call me?
Pia:I'll call u Abhi only
Abhi(eagerly):So do u have any bf?
Pia:No
Abhi was happy 2 hear this
Abhi:So u never fallen in love?
Pia:Ofcourse I had fallen in love
Abhi was disappointed 2 hear this.He felt as if somebody stabbed him
Abhi:U told u dont have bf & thn u r saying u love someone
Pia:He was ot my bf.He was my life
Abhi(jealous):Where is he now?
Pia:In my dead heart
Abhi:Dead heart?Wht kind of rply is dis?
Pia:As soon as he left me my heart died.And he still live in it
Abhi:I guess u really loved him.So now he is not in ur life
Pia(smiling):'In ur life'I told u na he is my life.I m his part.But he is no more
Abhi(was sad seeing Pia sad but somewhere he was happy tht Pia's bf is no more.May b bcoz he is falling 4 her):Ohh thts sad.I m sorry
Pia:Its ok.He still lives in me.
Abhi tried 2 change the topic
Abhi(mischievously):So do I have any chance wid u?
Pia(smile):U r really a big time flirt.Aren't u
Abhi:No.I m such an innocent lad
Pia:Ohh really.Tht toh I could c how innocent u r
Abhi(humoring):No sachie.U know I m waiting 4 u 18 years.As soon as I was born my heart said 'U r born 2 b wid Pia'.U r my soulmate Pia
Wht Abhi said jockingly hitted Pia hard.She felt Abhay is back as Abhi.Tears fall frm her eyes(Till now only Abhay had the power 2 make her cry now evn Abhi had same power.She excused herself & ran
Abhi:Wht happened 2 her?Did I hurt her?
Abhi ran behind her...

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay me 1st (thnx for posting this at night😆)...wow yyaar i can hug u really tight and never leave u😆...i always wanted abhay to crack funny jokes😳...hats of to u even in romantic ff's u put a spice of laughter 👏...so so nice i could just imagine all of this...and yes a hug again 🤗

but i am angry u didn't pm me it was my luck i wandered in the forum before closing the net so i am angry on u for that😡...but otherwise🤗🤗
Edited by sweet_gumdrops - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

gosh again late...😆

bt chalo still bach gayi...agar main so gayi hoti to bas hogya tha🤢😆
ok shrish ...dat was wonderful part....dat dance wowwwwww
i m in love wid abhi...my heart skips all d beats whenever i read abt him..hehehehe😆
n dat proposal...hats off to u shirsh...i m still dreaming...kya proposal tha, phele to propose karne wala itna hot n then d way he proposed...omg...i m totally out of this world...i m sure i m gonna av most beautiful dreams tonight.n ofcourse i just loved d way pia answered abt abhay...datswat v call eternal love..
n finally u came out of ur laziness n posted it...a big bear hug to u shrish...🤗
continue sooon...waise ab to tanzie ki turn hai😆
luv
heena
Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Lo mein agayi... 😃
That was reallyy nice Shrish... 👏 👏 first of all thanks for the song "Meet me at the Equinox"...I love this song you know... out of the Twilight series, New Moon is by fav book.. i like the books but not the movie bt yet i loved this song... the depth of this song is intense and I loved that you used it.. 😳
OMG... Abhi is a class A flirt 😆 😆
though he's totally not my kinda guy but i cant help falling for him 😛 😳 Piya will fall for him in no time... afterall he looks like Abhay... and he's already attracted to Piya... good...good..loving it... bring it on...waiting for the next one... ill try to update tomorrow..ok?
Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

nice update
do pm me 4m next time

Thnx a lot dear.I updated my new chap & PMed u too😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

hey when r u gonna update?plz pm me..

Hey i updated my chap & Pmed u also dear😳😊😊
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Originally posted by: sweet_gumdrops

yay me 1st (thnx for posting this at night😆)...wow yyaar i can hug u really tight and never leave u😆...i always wanted abhay to crack funny jokes😳...hats of to u even in romantic ff's u put a spice of laughter 👏...so so nice i could just imagine all of this...and yes a hug again 🤗

Congo😊.Ohh a hug frm my side too🤗.No plz leave me😉😆.C I made him do tht😆.Hhaha I can never tolerate a boaring thing.So little bit of humour is gud 4 health😊.Thnx a lot dear.Hug agn 2 u too🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

gosh again late...😆

bt chalo still bach gayi...agar main so gayi hoti to bas hogya tha🤢😆
ok shrish ...dat was wonderful part....dat dance wowwwwww
i m in love wid abhi...my heart skips all d beats whenever i read abt him..hehehehe😆
n dat proposal...hats off to u shirsh...i m still dreaming...kya proposal tha, phele to propose karne wala itna hot n then d way he proposed...omg...i m totally out of this world...i m sure i m gonna av most beautiful dreams tonight.n ofcourse i just loved d way pia answered abt abhay...datswat v call eternal love..
n finally u came out of ur laziness n posted it...a big bear hug to u shrish...🤗
continue sooon...waise ab to tanzie ki turn hai😆
luv
heena

Thnx a lot heena.U know I was not in a mood of writing 2day.I thought ki yeh mera most ghatiya update hoga.But I thought no I shuld nahi toh nxt time tanzie & heena ko excuse mil jayega😉😆.I myself fall in love wid Abhi.I m potraying him lke my dream man so he shuld be witty,funny still lovable😳.I was not able 2 decide kaun se song mai Dance karao thn I thout New moon ka 'meet me on the equinox' is gud & 4 Flashback dance I chose 'I wanna grow old' coz I thought it will suit Abhiya well.Ohh I'll decribe dis prposal flashback more elobrately in some other update.Bcoz main bahut kuch soch k rakha hai.I jst wrote wht my heart said.I really felt tht this shuld wht Pia feel abt Abhay so I she replied in 2 Abhi in the same way.Thnx agn 4 loving dis ghatiya update😊.A big hug 2 u too🤗.Now tanzie turn😉.She is sleeping now😆😆
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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