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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Congrats on new ff...
so the story is gonna b a fb...
cant wait fr the story to unfold...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
awesomeee superbbb luvd ittt go going ashh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
so the way understand the twins
are not maan biological father
maan was geet shinning armor
simply beautiful
love it
geet loves maan unconditional & proud
to be his wife
yu narrate so perfect
me loving how the story flow
waiitng eagerly next
thnx for update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Awsm concept wanna read more plzz do pm me
when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~PART 2~


He dimmed the lights and walked off towards the adjacent room that had a door through their bedroom to pacify his two year old twin daughters…saanjh Khurana & Chahat Khurana.

Geet watched him disappear into the girls' room and smiled, murmuring "I Love YOU" again and again under her breath and finally drifting off to sleep!!!


X X X X X X X X X


That day, Geet woke up early in the morning with a feel of light-headedness. She freshened up and went to the puja room and did the aarti and then took blessings from her father in law Sunil Sharma while giving him prashad. It was her usual routine since she had come into the house as Dev's wife!

She headed towards the kitchen to prepare breakfast for everyone. Along with it, she made 2 cup of tea and took it for her father-in law who was reading newspaper in the living room and took the other cup for Pammi, her mother in law to her room.

Then she prepared coffee for her beloved husband, Dev and took it to their room. They had been married since five years….geet had just turned 18 when her family got her married to Dev! Even though she was a bit young for marriage, she did every possible thing to keep her family and her husband happy!!! She loved them dearly and wanted to serve them forever and ever…that was her dedication to them…to keep everyone happy! And that was what her mother Rano had instilled in her since childhood.

After they all came to the dining table she started serving the breakfast to all of them. Suddenly she felt dizzy….she wondered what was wrong with her! Even when she woke up in the morning she was feeling a little bit dizzy!! Before she could even serve dev, she felt everything turning upside down and fainted.

The trio were shocked to see her like this! Dev got so worried….he immediately carried her to their room n then called the doctor. The doctor came and did some preliminary tests!!! She just walked out with a big smile on her face!!

Dev: doctor..kaisi hai wo? Use kya hua hain?

Doctor (smiling): aap fikr mat kijiye …khush khabri hai…aap pita bane wale hain!

Dev looked so happy…he couldn't stop smiling!!! He was becoming a father…how wonderful could that be???

Doctor: but…..

Dev (worried): but??? What is it doctor??

Doctor: she looks a little stressed out…u need to make sure she is not overstressed.

And saying that she prescribed some medicines for her and again asked him to take care of her!

After the doctor left dev just ran to his parents and informed them about the new member of the family!!! Everyone was so delighted! Later he entered into his room and saw geet sitting on the bed with pillows to support her back! He just gave a naughty look her and she just blushed to a dark shade of red seeing it.

He just kissed her forehead and whispered – I love you geet!

Geet just smiled seeing him so happy! Though it was an arranged marriage…she had fallen for him head over heels!!! She felt so blessed having a loving husband and such a nice home!

Later after dev left for his work, geet got up and started with her daily chores….do the dishes, wash the clothes, prepare lunch etc! while she was sweeping the floor, which she is not supposed to at this time, Pammi started her taunting "Pichli baar toh ladki dene wali thi par iss baar agar ladka nahi huva toh tujhe don't expect much from us!"

Geet was shocked to hear this….tears immediately welled her eyes….for a moment she had forgotten that she still lived in HP where girls don't have a world have of their own! She has seen girls being tortured and locked in the house since childhood! She had seen girls dying unable to bear the treatment given to them! Alas…poor she….in her own little world of happiness….she had forgotten that she was living in a hell where you don't have a right to spread your wings…provided you are a girl!


She herself was victim to such torture at her own house in the hands of her darji and veerji….but after marriage, she thought her bad days were gone..but no! it would never stop haunting her every now and then…reminding her of the state she was in!

She wanted to break free….she wanted to get away from all this…but can a god given lineage ever be broken? She was reminded of her previous miscarriage….ohh how painful was that to lose their 1st baby…their symbol of love!! But least did she know that Pammi had bribed the doctor to reveal her the sex of her child during sonography test! The moment she got to know it was a girl child, she had set her wicked plans to not to get that innocent life into this world by any means and she did succeed in that!

Pammi's words kept ringing in her ears…the whole day she remained disturbed!! Somewhere she started to get a fear that if this time she doesn't give birth to a boy they will surely throw her out of the house.

Later in the night after dinner when geet was going to keep the water jug in pammi's room, she heard pammi and dev discussing something! She just stopped near the door out of curiosity..even though she knew it was wrong to do so!


Pammi: "Dev pichli baar toh hume pata chal gayi ki woh manhoos hume ladki dene wali hai to hume tumhare kamre ke pass ki seediya pe subah uske neeche anae se phele tel [oil] dal diya aur woh phisal gayi and we made her believe that she slipped off the stairs and had a miscarriage! But this time, am warning you Dev, iss baar agar usne hume waaris nahi diya toh hum usko uske bache ke saath mar dalenge ".

Another shock for geet…..she never expected pammi, whom she sees as her own mother could do something so filthy!!! But above all, she was more shocked to learn that dev didn't tell anything to his mom when she killed his baby...their symbol of love!

She wiped her tears and tried to compose herself and knocked the room's door! Hearing paami's permission, she entered and kept the water jug there. When she was leaving pammi stopped her n said "Tujhe yaad hai na ki meine tujhe aaj kya kaha tha???"

Geet who had lowered her head to hide the tears that had formed in her eyes n nods her head and goes to the the kitchen.There while cleaning the kitchen surface pammi's words kept repeating in her mind-- Pichli baar toh ladki dene wali thi par iss baar agar ladka nahi huva toh don't expect much from us……….Dev pichli baar toh hume pata chal gayi ki woh manhoos hume ladki dene wali hai to hume tumhare kamre ke pass ki seediya pe subah uske neeche anae se phele tel [oil] dal diya aur woh pishal gayi………par iss baar agar usne hum waaris nahi diya toh hum usko uske bache ke saath mar dalenge….

She cried loud covering her mouth with her plams…how could they do that to her? Was the love they showered on her was fake??? Didn't they love her like she does? It hurt her…deep within…Dev kept quite when he knew the whole truth…why? Why? Why?? She just couldn't digest the whole fact altogether!!!

After sometime she returned to her room and saw that dev had already gone to sleep. She went and stood at the window! Endless tears flowed down her eyes remembering the words pammi told n that dev didnt tell anything to his mother….more than pammi's words..it hurt her that Dev didn't do anything to save their child..rather helped her to get rid of it!!! She was too shocked and heartbroken!

The next morning her eyes were red and puffy due to crying the whole night. She did her routine but sunil noticed her red eyes n asked her "Kya huva beta teri aankh laal kyu hai???"

n she replied "Kuch nahi papaji …wo…wo..aankhon mein kuch chala gaya hai!!!"

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next: what would happen to geet now???

Prev: PART 1

Next: PART 3

update courtesy- hinal_maaneet (hinal)

AUTHOR'S NOTE: hey friends how are you all?
hope u r enjoying this ss! we are not updating regularly cuz of our colleges! plz do bear with us!
moreover...since different writers are writing this SS, u'll
find variations in their swriting style!!! so don't mind that and plz enjoy!!!😳


Edited by sweet_aishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Amazing i hate this pammi and can't believe that dev also is supporting her in this , i hope geet soon runsaway from there.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
brilliant part.
loved it.
so this flash back or past of geet's life
now she is married to maan singh khurana who is savior of her life her husband, guide, lover, friend
but in her past
dev is her husband.
in her past
where she only suffered
she loves unconditionally every one but in return nothing but they killed her child cause she is girl
I want to ask pammi
what is she
she is also girl
what if her parents or grand parents killed her before coming to this world
I don't know y people still thinking like this
and dev who is father of the baby didn't protest or rather I would say he support her
how could he done it
how could he stoop so low
he doesn't deserve to be called as father

feel so sad for geet
no one is there to understand her or wipes her tears and make her feel better or console her
she is alone
continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
nice update dear
hate pammi to the core
cntinue soon
ty 4 the pm
mysteriousmilli thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Awesome update... loved it
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
wow...awesome...do continue soon...plz add me as ur buddy n do PM me...

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