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hey guys how r u 'em a slinet reader and thought to start a FF, befre u get in confusion i also have abhay piya version on this ff which is not completed yet 'em on part 3 on that forum so shaan khanak have been my second fav. jodi so i thought should start here too :) hope u like it it is hawt and romantic Ff plss share ur views

chapter 1



Shaan and his friends had just arrived at a night club. It had been a long day at work and Shaan had plans of just relaxing,sitting back having a few drinks and if he met a few pretty girls that would just be an added bonus. That was until she walked in... when he first saw her he couldn't help but stare. She was beauitful. Long wavy black hair falling half way down her back, delicate features, full lips and then she smiled...WOW. She was wearing a black fitted halter dress going to mid thigh with minimal make-up and just long dangly earrings as jewellry. No denying it she was stunning and there were many guys in the place that felt the way he did. She came in with a crowd of friends, guys and girls making lots of noise...already looking quite intoxicated.
Shaan and Akash were at the bar when she walked over with some friends. A path cleared quite quickly for this new girl that no one recognized but wanted to know. The girls reached the bar and pretty much cut Shaan off as he was about to order. Before Shaan could say something Akash holds out his hand and introduces himself. The GIRL barely gives him a glance, rolls her eyes and looks at her friends smirking. WHAT A B***H Shaan thought to himself and just as he's about to let her know what she can do with her attitute Akash offers to buy her a drink! SHE looks at Akash with a glint in her eyes and a smile on her face..."you want to buy me a drink...sure" she says, She places the order and points to Akash saying to the bartender.."he's paying" Akash nods his head like a little puppy agreeing to whatever she says. With a toss of her hair and a thanks she's gone with her entourage behind her. The bartender in turn hands Akash a bill for 4000 Rupees! Turns out she or now Akash treated her whole group and left the bartender a 500 rupee tip! Now usually Shaan would laugh at Akash for being so dumb but this time Shaan was livid. Who did this girl think she was?! To top it off Akash didn't have that kind of money so Shaan ended up picking up the tab.

Shaan calmed himself down, telling himself forget it, enjoy the evening. Soon Shaan found himself talking to a pretty girl who was ofcourse showing a lot of interest. But as the night progressed his attention would keep shifting to HER. It was hard not to look at her, the way she danced, she was amazing, her moves, her grace, her laughing face, her confidence. She was stunning and Shaan found that his eyes would continuously drift over to her. But he also noticed that any time a guy would approach her to dance her and her group would chase him off usually by embarrasing him in some way. Seeing this was making Shaan mad...why he didn't know...but it just bothered him. The whole club was talking about this new group and about the stunning girl who seemed to be the centre of this group. They didn't seem to be from here, foreigners some people were saying.

Shaan had enough of hearing about this arrogant girl and thought I'm going home. He got up and said bye to his friends and then walked over to the bar to settle his tab. At that very moment the GIRL walked over to get another drink. Side by side they stood and as he looked at her he found himself asking "you think quite highly of yourself don't you?" The girl turned towards Shaan and looked him up and down and with a smirk she said "Yes I do and I'm not interested". Shaan was shocked "Excuse me I'm not asking if you're interested in me infact I'm not interested in you". You've got a spoiled arrogant little rich girl syndrome going on and it isn't attractive. SHE turned to him her eyes blazing "EXCUSE ME!" "Who the hell do you think you are?" By this time people had started noticing and their friends had surrounded them. The GIRL's friend came over and asked if this "LOSER" was bothering her. Shaan took a step towards the guy when he heard HER response .."Don't worry I know just how to handle this loser, he's not understanding in plain English that I'm not interested in little boys like him so I'll have to explain it to him in a different way. At this she grabbed a full glass of alcohol and threw it in Shaan's face. Shaan was shocked and then livid, it took 4 of his friends to hold him back. The GIRL and her friends walked away laughing.
Shaan didn't have drinks thrown at him, girls didn't turn away from him. Infact he didn't chase them, they chased him. So for this girl to make it seem like she was rejecting his advances..advances that he didn't even make..and then to throw a drink at him. He had never felt so much rage and hatred towards someone. No one made a fool out of Shaan Singania. If it was the last thing he did he would make sure she paid for what she had done.


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res for index

chapter 1= page 1

chapter 2= page 1

chapter 3=page 2

chapter 4= page 4

chapter 5= page 6

chapter 6 =page 9

chapter 7 page 14

chapter 8= page 15

chapter 9 page 22

chapter 10 page 23

chapter 21 page 50

chapter 11 page 28

chapter 12 page 28

chapter 13 page 32

chapter 14 page 34

chapter 15 page 37

chapter 16 page 39

chapter 17 page 42

chapter 18 page 42

chapter 19 page 45 :)

chapter 20 page 48

chapter 21 page 50

chapter 22 page 54

chapter 23 paage 57

chapter 24 page 59

cahpter 25 page 62

chapter 26 page 68

chapter 27 page 70

Chapter 28 page 76 ( SR Hot update)

Chapter 29 page 79

chater 30 page 79

chapter 31 page 80

chapter 32 page 80

Edited by abhaylover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey welcome to he forum hope u have a gr8 time here .yea do start ur ff would like to read
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Welcome here...
Am also new here...
Do start ur ff...
Would love to read...
Start soon...
Deepali
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welcome to the forum...
n pls start with ur ff soon..

we ll love it...

hott n romantic we ll love it...
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Hey Welcome to the Forum !
Your name ?

Do start that FF! Nice to know that you love ShaNak as well !
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yr most most most welcome dear

pls pls pls do continue:)
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chapter 2=

Khanak woke up with a blinding headache...why did she drink so much?! She usually wasn't one to get so drunk but last night her and her group had been celebrating the end of their 4 month long dance theatre perfomance. It had been a hectic schedule with them performing in 20 different cities with Mumbai being their last stop. A lot of her friends were returning back home to Vancouver. But she'd be sticking around. Her family was joining her in a few days and together they would travel to Chandigarh for a family wedding. She couldn't wait to see her family...it had been too long. Khanak got up slowly and went into the bathroom to splash some water on her face. As she looked in the mirror, events from the previous night ran through her mind. Dancing, drinking, laughing, throwing a drink in some good looking strangers face...wait a minute did she actually do that?! OH YEAH she did. Well he deserved it she thought...okay maybe he didn't deserve the drink in his face but he did deserve being told off by her. He didn't even know her and he made so many judgements about her. Arrogant...she's arrogant because she's not falling all over herself to talk to every guy that approached her. PLEASE! Thinking about him made her mad but when she pictured him in her head she had to admit that he was HOT. He was so tall that even with heals she had found herself looking up at him. He was the perfect build, .and those big eyes..beautiful would be the only way to describe them. Yup he was HOT and he knew it The way he carried himself, his confidence in himself. . She had caught herself stealing looks at hm more than once last night. BUT arrogant no it alls were not her type. Well who cares, it's not like she's going to ever see him again.

Just then the phone rang bringing Khanak back to the present. Picking up her cel; phone she saw that it was her dad calling. excitedly she picked up the phone. "dad how are you"? she said into the phone. Khanak was a daddy's girl, she was his princess and her dad's favorite. Most girls tell their mom everything but Khanak told her dad everything. He always supported her through anything and was always there to listen and give advice even when he was so busy with his business. He was the one that encouraged her to take part in the dance theatre group and to travel and see as much of the world as she can...before she settled down to a career. She was close to her mom aswell but her dad and her had a special bond. "Dad I can't wait to see you all." Have you spoken to Thiaya ji and chachu is everything ready for the wedding"? "We are going to have so much fun" Her dad laughed hearing her chatter and her excitement. "Khanak everything is ready for the wedding...we'll be there the day after tomorrow and then we'll leave for Chandigarh right away. This is going to be a special trip in more ways then one, Khanak beta I have a big surprise for you. Khanak immediately started asking questions..what, where, how, when, what???? Her dad just laughed and said she'd find out soon enough. Their call ended soon after leaving Khanak curious about what the next few days will bring. She loved surprises so she couldn't wait. She looked at the clock and quickly started getting ready, she had 2 days to get her outifits bought and ready for the wedding!

About 10 minutes away Shaan too was waking up, it would be safe to say he had not slept well. The last person he had thought of last night was also the first person he thought of today. HER!! Events from last night came rushing back to him. He grabbed his phone and called Akash. Akash picked up the phone sounding groggy and sleepy. 'Wake Up!" Shaan snapped into the phone. " I want you to call around and find out who that girl was..where she came from, where she lives, everything and anything you can find out". I want this information ASAP! "Akash are you listening to me...get on this". Shaan hung up before Akash could say anything. Shaan was on a mission he wasn't going to rest until he taught that girl a lesson. But first he needed to know who she was.

Two days had turned up nothing about her and Shaan was begining to get frustrated. She popped into his head all the time, at work, at the gym, when he was out...he'd suddenly think of her and his anger would rush back. Now as he packed his bags getting ready to go home and spend a few days with his family his frustration built...what if she was no longer in India then he'd never find her!

Khanak loved Chandigarh. Everytime she came to India, this was usually their first stop. Her granparents, chachu, chachi, thaiyaji, thaiji, cousins, buas, masis all lived here. Whenever she came everyone would spoil her and spend lots of time with her doing fun activities. Her family was so lively, and fun, and her cousin getting married..the first of all the cousins, made this trip even more exciting. Khanak always felt comfortable when she got to the house because she knew this was her home too. Her and her cousins would stay up nights and laugh and talk and eat! Some nights they would sneak out (her thaiyaji was a little strict) but hey you gotta live on the wild side sometimes. Khanak was extremely close to her Vijay Chachu, but she wasn't a big fan of her Parul chachi but chachu more then made up for chachi's lack of social skills. The festivities were starting tonight with the first of them being the haldi ceremony. Her cousin Lavanya (her thaiyaji's daughter) was getting married in 3 days. Haldi tonite, Mendhi tommorow night and then the wedding and reception the following day. Khanak and her cousin's were surprising Lavanya with a dance performance on the Mendhi night. Khanak had chereographed the dance and was going to teach the girls tonight.

Seeing the house beautifully decorated in dark shades of Pink, gold and copper. The beautiful colors, wonderful smells of delicious food, all types of flowers in all different colors and her family's laughter and chatter made Khanak so happy. Khanak's family meant the world to her she would give anything to keep them smiling and laughing like this.

Haldhi night was well on it's way. Khanak had just finished applying some on Lavanya when her dad called her over. Next to him sat a man that Khanak instantly recognized! She hadn't seen him in many years but when she was at home she saw a framed picture of him and her dad every day. Mohan uncle was Khanak's dad's oldest and closest friend. As Khanak's dad described it they were brothers. Even living so far away from eachother they still spoke every weekend, no matter where they were and every time either one was in the same country they would get together. Khanak walked over and gave him a big hug and was surprised to see tears in uncle's eyes. She looked at her dad with a questioning look and her dad just smiled at her. "They're tears of happiness her dad said and uncle then put his hand on her head and said " I've waited for this happy occasion for a long time and finally it's here". Khanak thought to herself Uncle must be getting emotional over Lavanya's wedding.

The next day:

Shaan loved being home. Good food, being pampered by his mom, seeing old friends, sleeping in, this was the life. Mumbai was way too fast paced compared to Chandigarh. Like tonight he was planning on vegging at home, his cousin's were coming by, maybe catch up with them and then hit a pub for some drinks. But ofcourse his dad had other plans for him. Shaan had just seen his dad 2 weeks ago when he came to Mumbai to go over some projects...projects that Shaan had worked on start to finish and knew the ins and outs of. Still his dad had asked 101 questions and wanted to know every little detail. Shaan didn't know when his dad would finally start to trust Shaan's judgement and understand that now Shaan is running the company and since he had taken over profits had doubled!

So when his dad said we're going to a mendhi ceremony even though Shaan wasn't in the mood he knew there was no way out. Shaan's took a quick shower and threw on a black kurtha. He was really hoping it wasn't too long a night. Once at the venue Shaan recognizes it immediately, this was the home of his dad's childhood friend. The house is lavisly decorated and Shaan recognizes people he's known all his life, including some old school friends. He starts walking over when an announcement is made that Lavanya's cousin's have a special surprise for her. A hush falls over the room as the lights dim and you hear the tinkling of the payals on the feet of the girls as they ran to the stage and position themselves. The musc starts and the lights came on slowly and front and centre on the stage who does Shaan see but the GIRL!

chapter 3

Edited by abhaylover - 14 years ago
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Interesting start ! lovd it !
i dont think we hav an FF here where Khanak is the arrogant one! Its always been Shaan .

continue soon !
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khanak is too diff here she is modern and yeah the chit chat non stp backwas 1 hhehe u will love when they will fall in love

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