WATNA VEY MAANEET part 5-6/pg 15 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice piece of work

the correct essence of patriotism and love

am speechless

I remember many scenes, like from Mangal Pandey or say from Navrang

nice work

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was so cuteee..ok i know i sound stupid pallo..but sacchi..it reminds me of movie bhaghat singh..cut off geet..baaki everything is same..thnku for the lovely story yaara..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jst started reading . I must say its too awsum. U have written every part with so much najakhat . Oh god i jst love it to core.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

love the way he plans everything...

lucy has defo fallen for manavendra...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx 4 pm...waiting 4 maaneet moments...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow palu...

new one...
its really very interesitng...
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry 4 l8 rply... its jst superb... 👍🏼 luvd it 4m core of ma heart...😊 storyline is gr8... 👏👏 kp writing... n d info at d end of part is also gr8... 👏
VANDE MATARAM!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 8 I like the idea of you loving me

He was amused at this entire idea of meeting Lucy'he was hit by English women when he was in London and yes he did learn ball dance and all but why would Lord Edward's sister want to meet him'he wondered what the reason could be'it couldn't be a trap in all probability' this woman was different'..he was waiting near the talaab for her to come'he heard footsteps'.and hid behind a tree with his pistol ready'.she had her head covered in a dupatta'.she was in Indian attire'her eyes scanned her surroundings'.this was an area where no one would come the talaab was no longer used for bathing because of the thick growth of water hyacinth'.subhanallah she is really pretty'. After ensuring he was safe he revealed himself'.Ms Lucy what is it that brings you here?...namaste'.ap hindi achha bolti hai'her eyes lit up as though she were a little girl happy to hear his praise'hum hindi seekh rahe hai'hmm but it's no use'why?...she is so innocent he could stop smiling'come let's sit if that is you are okay to sit with a nigger'she removed her dupatta and revealed her face'.why did you say it's of no use?...very soon you will leave the country'..her eyes instantly became misty bbutt I I love'you love ? I love India I want to stay here'and exploit us?..no no listen'let's sit somewhere I don't want you to strain your legs'I don't want to talk to you I am leaving'.. Lucy wait you didn't come all the way just to show how lovely you look in this Indian attire'.he was amused to see her turning crimson'..come let's sit over there I am sure you will not see these water hyacinths in England'..I will also not see you in England'.what?... You don't let me sleep'.he suppressed a laugh'.but I don't sneak into your room at nights Lucy'he tried to sound innocent'what will I do if I fall for my brother's enemy? You invade my thoughts since the time I heard you say Long Live the revolution down with imperialism in the market'..your eyes look into my soul'I I don't want to even meet those stupid suitors my brother brings everyday'.Lucy'.please stop crying'our worlds are different Lucy I can't even be your future see we are enemies and this will only lead to catastrophe it is not safe for you to come out this way if you are found you will be ostracized by your community'.are you married?...you are getting me all wrong it's not about my marital status and yes my mother wanted me to marry but I didn't want to take a burden so'..if I am a British what is my fault?...Lucy you'.listen stop crying'..I feel like a prisoner I don't like this life of balls and parties I want to be free I want freedom too'and you think I can give you freedom'okay wait stop crying'.am I that bad that you hate me?...he looked at her now pink face'.she was messed with the tears'do you all wear this? What? Kajal'Savri made this for me'it all running over your face'she wiped it smudging it more'.wait I will do it'she held the edge of her dupatta and wiped her face here now you look pretty again'if I am pretty why don't you like me?... I like the idea of you loving me'..now smile'.Lucy it's not about you being pretty or ugly it's that I haven't ever thought about all this never ever has a woman come and say all this to me'.so you think I am bold and unmaidenly?... no Lucy don't get me wrong listen I have a different purpose in life'.yes to throw me out?...you have lovely eyes he said lost in her innocence'

Precap: If I stay here longer I will have to leave my heart back with you

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Part 9 I I want to be with you

She was batting her eyelashes'.where are your parents?...they are no more they died two years back'so Edward is the only family you have'.yes'.how long are you here?...8 months now'you like this place?..yes I also like the food Savri brings for me'.you are a rebel?...no I just don't like the things Edward makes me do'like?...like he wanted me to impress that Nelson Bingley he wants me to get married to Bingley'oh so that was the reason you were at the station?...yes'he could see a sadness in her eyes'.Edward is ruling my life I hate it'..emm'.so Lucy what do you want to do next''she sighed go back to the cantonment and and'..Lucy did I hurt you stop crying okay listen to tell you the truth I like you'I admire your guts the way you feel for us but'.but you don't love me?...how old are you Lucy?...19'..emm I understand why Edward is becoming crazy to marry you off'why?'because you are pretty and nave' anyone can take advantage of you'no that's not true I am not so friendly with everyone but I feel differently about you'Lucy'he almost whispered if I stay here longer I will have to leave my heart back with you'he took her hand into his own and said can I give you a name this very moment?...she nodded through her tears'Geet'.you will remain in my memory as Geet'.will we never meet again? Wont you come to say goodbye when I leave India?...you think you will leave India? Yes soon you will get back your country'.and what if I say you will find a reason to stay back?...Geet you are making my heart race'..and I think this is risky for both of us'.she leant on him'.dont come so close Geet your folk always accuses us of feeling lust for British woman'.she turned a darker shade'.he could feel her bosom heave'..he could see the docile eyes 'and she said you are the balance holding my life or death'.I I I want to be with you'.he placed a hand on her head Geet you know that is not possible even if I decide that things are okay we can't settle down and you know why'I will wait for you'..I will wait for your freedom but once you get your freedom will you free me too?...he pulled her closer'her innocent face was provoking him'she placed her head on his chest'if you don't feel for me why is your heart beating so fast?...her breath falling on his neck was driving him insane'.she touched his rugged cheek

The touch generated such euphoric sensations in his mind that he felt he had just experienced a divine event. He kissed her forehead and said Geet go back if destiny wants us together we will meet'.I will wait for you'.if I ever settle down if ever there will be a woman in Maan's life it will be Geet'he kissed her again and covered her face with the dupatta take care and don't take these risks okay? I will be away for a while and if you get a better suitor do marry'Maan'shhh now don't cry and make things difficult'memsahib'there Savri has come looking for you'.will you give me something Geet?...what she blushed'.a lock of your hair'

Precap: She betrayed me

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