Meeta-navya- shayari

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi All;
we all have loved shayari's and FF on ANYA, but today I am trying something different because it just touched me .I am here with few lines for Meeta andNavya...
I know it might sound strange for some, but the phase that they are going thru rgt now, is really made me emotional. MOM-daughter relation has always been special for everybody. And I guess everybody at some point goes thru this kind of phase. Phase where, both have some questions, both want to talk abt sometthing, have a open discussion, both know abt it..but still, we keep quiet..because probably it is not the right time, you are not sure, or you think you will not be understood, whatever the reason may be it does happen at some point. Meeta-navya.. shares a similar relation..they are no different..They are both pretending that everything is normal, but they both know thts not true...This last scene of fridays epi..really touched me a lot..I felt there was alot more to be said or shared.
So here I am with some lines for MEETA and NAVYA..
Kehte hai maa bacho ki har saans pehchanti hai
Bacho ki khushi main hi to Maa ki zindagi samayee hai..
Meeta- Navya ke bich bhi aaine(mirror) sa rishta hai..
Lakh chupana chaho, par sach kaha kabhi chupta hai..
Ek dusre se dil kholkar baatein karte the kabhi
Aaj unke bich ek ansuna sa sanaata hai..
Bachi ko badi hoti dekh, Maa ka dil ghabraya hai..
Kuch guzre halat ne, bahrose ko bhi thoda dagmagaya hai..
Beti bhi to bechain si hai, sehmi bhi,
Maa ke badle swabhav se kuch dari si aur pareshan bhi..
Dono ki aankhon main dard bhi hai, shikayat bhi..
Aankhein ek dusre se kar rahi hai hazaroon sawal bhi..
Hoth se muskuraye to jaroor, aur kuch bole bhi.
lLkin, dil main uthe toofan ko unhone dabaaye bhi..
Dil aur dimag main shayad jang si chidi hai..
Sahi aur galat ki, ye ek ajib si paheli hai..
kehna to bahot kuch chahte hai dono,
Par done hi halat se majboor hai..
Waqt ka khel hai ye saara..
Aur rukh hawaoon ne bhi to badala hai..
Lekin, yakeen hai mujhe is Maa- Beti ke rishte par..
ki halat phir badlenge, waqt phir badlega aur hawa ka rukh bhi,..
If you like it please hit the LIKE button.
Please do comment/advice to my post, I'll apreciate it a lot.
P.S. I still have 1 paper left, so I might not be able to reply to comments soon, But please post your comment and I'll reply it at my earliest.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi
Awesome shayari 👍🏼 you have written,i impressed with these lines,it is perfect what u have written
Bachi ko badi hoti dekh, Maa ka dil ghabraya hai..
Kuch guzre halat ne, bahrose ko bhi thoda dagmagaya hai..
Beti bhi to bechain si hai, sehmi bhi,
Maa ke badle swabhav se kuch dari si aur pareshan bhi..
Dono ki aankhon main dard bhi hai, shikayat bhi..
Aankhein ek dusre se kar rahi hai hazaroon sawal bhi..
Hoth se muskuraye to jaroor, aur kuch bole bhi.
lLkin, dil main uthe toofan ko unhone dabaaye bhi..
Dil aur dimag main shayad jang si chidi hai..
Sahi aur galat ki, ye ek ajib si paheli hai..
kehna to bahot kuch chahte hai dono,
Par done hi halat se majboor hai..
Waqt ka khel hai ye saara..
Aur rukh hawaoon ne bhi to badala hai..
nicely you have written,keep going 👏👏👏👏 and i wish for your exams also
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you for your comments..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: yaminirajan

Hi

Awesome shayari 👍🏼 you have written,i impressed with these lines,it is perfect what u have written
Bachi ko badi hoti dekh, Maa ka dil ghabraya hai..
Kuch guzre halat ne, bahrose ko bhi thoda dagmagaya hai..
Beti bhi to bechain si hai, sehmi bhi,
Maa ke badle swabhav se kuch dari si aur pareshan bhi..
Dono ki aankhon main dard bhi hai, shikayat bhi..
Aankhein ek dusre se kar rahi hai hazaroon sawal bhi..
Hoth se muskuraye to jaroor, aur kuch bole bhi.
lLkin, dil main uthe toofan ko unhone dabaaye bhi..
Dil aur dimag main shayad jang si chidi hai..
Sahi aur galat ki, ye ek ajib si paheli hai..
kehna to bahot kuch chahte hai dono,
Par done hi halat se majboor hai..
Waqt ka khel hai ye saara..
Aur rukh hawaoon ne bhi to badala hai..
nicely you have written,keep going 👏👏👏👏 and i wish for your exams also

Thank you for your sweet comments dear😊. I am glad you liked it😊.
Thank you for your waishes for my exam too..i guess I need it a lot😊...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Urmi, Nice one...It puts the kuchkhatti-kuchmeeti maa-beti relationship into focus...
I wish I knew about shayaris to say more !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyaalex8

Hi Urmi, Nice one...It puts the kuchkhatti-kuchmeeti maa-beti relationship into focus...

I wish I knew about shayaris to say more !

Yes Nisha..i just wanted to look a little more deeper into this relationship..I am glad you liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great,,we got one more poet
very good ,,i loved that line most about bachi ko badi hoti dekh...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifully written, very much loved those lines👏
Lekin, yakeen hai mujhe is Maa- Beti ke rishte par..
ki halat phir badlenge, waqt phir badlega aur hawa ka rukh bhi,...love the way you ended too😛
Keep writing...all the best for ur exam.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Urmi...u r the best...the shayari really touched me...i can't explain how much difficult its for me to see the worried Meeta maa...few years back i had seen my mom with the same expressions...
Waqt ka khel hai ye saara..
Aur rukh hawaoon ne bhi to badala hai..
Lekin, yakeen hai mujhe is Maa- Beti ke rishte par..
ki halat phir badlenge, waqt phir badlega aur hawa ka rukh bhi,..
U r right...Waqt will definitely change everything...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!! We hv got another Shayar in the making here...our Urmi Di !! 👏
As for the shayari Di..i agree what u initially said...mom-daughter's relationship...i loved the shayari...it made me quite sentimental too 🤔 😭 Loved each n every line...they are so factual...meeta-navya...or for that matter any mother and her daughter's situation...loved it Di...thanks for posting this !!! 😃I loved it so much !! 👏 👍🏼 🤗

Kehte hai maa bacho ki har saans pehchanti hai
Bacho ki khushi main hi to Maa ki zindagi samayee hai.

Ek dusre se dil kholkar baatein karte the kabhi
Aaj unke bich ek ansuna sa sanaata hai..

Beti bhi to bechain si hai, sehmi bhi,
Maa ke badle swabhav se kuch dari si aur pareshan bhi..

Dil aur dimag main shayad jang si chidi hai..
Sahi aur galat ki, ye ek ajib si paheli hai..
Lekin, yakeen hai mujhe is Maa- Beti ke rishte par..
ki halat phir badlenge, waqt phir badlega aur hawa ka rukh bhi,..

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