Maneet FF-tum mere kaun hu-pt-48- pg-144 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
can u update today
its very good ff
after what hapend to geet
pre e
xpect to geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please add me to ur pm list x
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg how will maan undo what he
did to geet he took he innocent
pls dont separate maaneet plsss
awesome part
waiting eagerly next
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part -15

Dadima went to geet room. She didn't find her. Dadima just thinking where she went . last from 1 year this is the schedule were geet and dadima don't it miss daily at any coast. Dadima just wondering about geet absence in her room. When she is about to move in front of maan room she heard big thud sound. Dadima open the door. She shocked. Geet laying on flour in half naked. Maan is on bed. ripped cloths spread hole room and all the things are disturbed. Her wounds, her tear marks on cheek ,her messed hairs, her situation without any explanation dadima understood.

Now she is worried" geet... kya huwa beta ...anke kolo...maan..." she try to wake up him but he still sleeping like kid. Dadima ran to anni room. Anni came with hurried. Both lifted geet and they succeeded to take her room. Dadima and anni both are in shock where they can not accept what maan did to geet. Anni sprinkle some water on her face and try to wake her. Finally geet gained her sense and started to cry. Her tears are not controllable. Dadima and anni trying to console her but it is not so easy. They know what she lost. Not a money, not a property, not a person some thing more then that where it can be gain again and there is nobody can value it.

Anni get angry on her own brother. Her jaw tightened and teeth's are gritting. After some time geet ask anni to take her wash room... Anni and dadime take her to wash room. Anni helped her to remove spread. Anni just closed her eyes with painfully. She couldn't see her own brothers wildness on geet. Anni helped her to take bath. She made her to ware other fresh cloths.

Again geet came and laid on bed. Anni went to her room and brought her medical kit. She put some medicines on wounds. When she moved to her private part geet holed her hand. But anni didn't mind her .she applied ointment . still blood is oozing from her private part. Anni couldn't control anymore.

She turned to dadima. "dadima call police. Maan bhai has to be arrest, how he do this geet." Dadima still crying with helpless. Anni took the phone and when about to call police geet hold her hand.

"anni pls... listen to me...jo kuch be huwa is main maan sir ki koi galthi nahi..."

Anni and dadima wondered " what are you talking ...geet"

"ha dadima...anni...this is preplanned by nayan tara and dev. Some how They want to take this property . But maan sir not ready to give anything for them. So they want to blackmail him. They planned to trap maan sir, they booked Sameera and they mixed drugs on his drinks, they fixed camera in hotel room. . But when I come to know about their plan I take maan sir from hotel to here but unfortunately all this happen." Still she is bitterly crying.

Dadima: " lakin geet beta...ek awaz de thi ho hum sabko ...kissine aakar tumara madat karsakthithi..."

Geet: "dadima , if I call that time anybody can help me...but ...servants come to know about maan sir...what they think of him...i don't want to damage his personality in front of everybody. dadima I know very well maan sir. Dadima you don't have an idea when he saved me in forest. I am here from one year he didn't try to harm me any day. Today I am alive bcoz of maan sir. What happened to me that is my faith . Pls don't tell anyone including maan sir."

Anni" geet tum hosh mey hu..."

Geet" ha... anni...if maan sir come to know what he did to me he won't forgive him self?pls don't tell him...promise" she holed her palm.

Looking her innocence and kindness anni and dadima hugged her. Anni given her some injection and medicine to recover and both left their room.

Anni went to maan room and she checked him. still he is under drugs. Anni collected his blood sample and send to hospital. Anni and dadima adjusted the room like before. They removed geet cloths.

When maan wakeup it is already evening 7' o clock. his head is still spinning. He hold his head In his hand. He managed to go bathroom and taken cold shower. Now it is relief for him. he is trying to gain what happened last night. Only he remembered that drink he drank which is offered from sameera. After some time nothing is remember. He ware fresh cloths and came down.

Anni and dadi sitting in hall. Looking maan both exchanged their looks. Maan found their act some thing different. he didn't found geet also..." Dadima...where is geet..." dadima and anni silently observe his face .it seems he didn't know about what he done. Some where anni getting angry on maan.

Dadima some how try to manage" wo geet is not well..."

Maan ready to move her room: " What happened..."

Anni worried now" nothing bhai?yesterday night your car get accident. Both of you fainted. I have treated you both. Geet is also ok now but she had some fever. She will be alright...don't worry." She is trying to avoid his question. but this is Maan singh khurana how can he agree. He make his way to geet room to check her.

When he enter her room ,luckily geet tugged her bed spread till her neck .other wise he could found her marks on her neck . her fever still not controlled. He kept his palm on her fore head. Still it is warm. He just wondering how could he slept so long time and she is suffering such a high temperature. Anni call him and ask him to not disturb her. Some where it is fishy but he couldn't find it.

That night maan couldn't sleep properly. It is midnight 1'o clock. he came to geet room. the temperature is too high. She is something murmuring in her sleep. Nothing could understand. He hold geet hand she tighten her grip in his palm. Her fingers entangled in his fingers. Maan call anni. Anni came worriedly and she checked her. Its too high fever. Immediately she is given some injection .

Anni: " maan bhai, if she not recover tomorrow we have to admit at hospital." Maan worried. Some where he is the responsible for her condition. But he don't know about the truth. He ask anni to leave her . anni first thought to oppose ,but think something and she left them alone . he sat next to geet. He is taken her palm into him. her hole body is shivering. He tucked another duvet till her neck. still she is shivering. He sat on her bed, he made her to lean on his chest. He hugged her and hide her face on his chest. Something is bothering him. he don't want to see her in pain. But what he is not sure.

hole night she slept hugging him. he can feel that her skin is burning. Some thing she is murmuring. He couldn't understand properly. She is remembering her hole family. Ma, babuji, darji, bhai and sngeetha di when he hear sangeetha name from her mouth again he lost in her memory. His chest is becoming wet due to her tears. Only one sentence he understood that" babhaji ...pls mey be apki pass avungi..."when she said those words maan tightened his grip on her with unknown fear.

maan still not understand her feelings. Why she is crying so much today. What happened to her. Why today she is craving her family so much. Once again he lift her face. Her eyelids are wet and closed. She seems like she is in half sense. While lifting her face duvet slipped from her neck. he found scratch marks on her neck. but he don't have idea that happened from him. he thought due to accident it may happened.

till morning he holed her like kid and slept. Early morning her temperature decreased . maan and anni both relief. Still geet no idea that hole night she slept on his chest.

Maan sat next to her " geet how are you feeling now" geet pursed her mouth. Maan thought that she is tired. He got the call from UK. Client invited him to discus about new project launching in India.

Maan: " geet I think now you are better . I want to go for UK in urgent basis. Take rest ill be back at next week on your wedding day. Ok byee?take care?." he left tapping on her cheeks.

Pre cap: maan angry with geet

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..mindblowing.
love it.
poor geet ..she so naive n innocent.
hope maan knw truth soon.
do continue soon.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
why they wants to hide the truth from Maan.ok Geet asked them not to tell Maan for his sake.but Annie can tell him

waiting for the coming up

thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
i think mann ll knew about geet
or
geet may canel the marriage...
oh omg ur story is intesting dear
dear
pls give the links take in the first page
dont give pg numbers
take the link from the address bar and paste in the first page
so easily we can get the link and open and read
try it once
i knew u are knew but dear u are giving wondeful stroy so try to habituate the if dear

love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
He left to UK amazing without even getting aware of her condition
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Posted: 14 years ago
WONDERFUL.ITS UNIQUE THAT DADIMA ND ANNIE KNEW IT.ND THEY CARED HER.MAAN STILL DOESNT KNOW NYTHING BUT HE IS SO CARING ND HE HUGGED HER WHOLE NIGHT THAT MEANS HE LOVES HER BUT ITS NEEDED TO CLEAR THAT AS SANGEETA YA GEET..I THINK WHN MAAN WILL KNOW EVRYTHNG HIS REACTION WILL B UNIQUE LIKE U SHOWED ALL THE SITUATION IN NEW STYLE..
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely ff.. plz add me to ur pm list

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