Maneet FF-tum mere kaun hu-pt-48- pg-144 - Page 9

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shah10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
wow..amazing upate
cant wait for the twist
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Awesome.waiting for the twist.hope maan n geet together
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
both parts amazing
uff dont like dev & NT sam too
i'm glad geet save maan
why is prem in hurry does he
have evil intention or after geet property
i hope the twist turn to be maaneet marriage
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
great part...waiting for the twist
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
a beautiful part
dear
well written
what is that twist


love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

😳😳😳...waiting for next update...what's going to happen????/waiting for more maaneet moments😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-14

When Geet reach KM it is already night 11'o clock. Nakul open the door with sleepy eyes. Geet managed to be normal. Even maan stood next to her silently. she take him to his room. Made him to lay on bed. She removed his shoes. Still his cloths are wet but she is not dare touch to him again or change the cloths. She tugged duvet till his neck. When about move maan holed her wrist tightly. Geet scared .she try to remove his hand but he pulled her forcefully. Now she is top of him. "geet...when he is trance first time he addressed her properly.

Geet :" maan sir leave me..."

Maan:" nahi geet tum meri hu...i won't leave you . I want you completely. I want to taste you .pls don't leave me alone...". He hugged her tightly. Geet struggling to come out from his grip. Somewhere alcohol is again working. Geet know very well not only alcohol sameera mixed some drugs in his drink. She is scaring very much of his act. but she is not dare to leave him alone at hotel room. She knows the future plan of NT. she don't want to hurt maan that's the reason she is taken big risk on her life.

She pushed him and try to escape from him. she ran to door. But maan is faster then her. He blocked her way. He pinned her against the door. His angry eyes are searching in her face some thing. Geet closed her eyes with scare. His lips taken her lips in. geet breath stuck in her throat. This is her first kiss. She is trying to push him. No way he is become a devil. His body started to warm in her touch. He is trying to make his way to in but geet is not giving so easily. His lips move to her cheeks. He bitted roughly. She about to scream but she controlled. "maan sir pls leave me...pls..." she is almost begging him. nothing reaching his ears.

He pulled her saree pallu. Geet try to close her chest from her hand. he removed her hand roughly and pinned against the door. Again his lips locked her lips. This time she can't block his way. He bite her lips finally he made his way to in. his tongue is searching her tongue in her mouth. It tasting very good. His mind is not recognizing her properly whether she geet or sangeetha. Again and again started to address geet and sangeetha. Today he want to taste her completely. Geet protesting is not a matter for him. geet lost all her strength to fight against him. she opened her mouth to scream but something remembering she closed her mouth. Still she is whispering him to leave her.

He pulled her saree Fleets roughly. He tarred her blouse . he lifted her with his arms and throw on bed. Next movement he is in top of her .geet already dyeing with shyness. She is trying to cover her bare Brest from her hands. He spread hands and pined her on bed. He looked her innocent eyes. he kissed her eyes?then next to her cheek .he locked her lips with his. His hand is playing with her body aggressively. His kiss turning passionately on geet. Geet couldn't take any more. She tried her lost best to push him. that made him more wild. Some where he is not liking her protest. Roughly he removed her inners and entered her capturing her lips with his. Tears rolled on her eyes. she lost her sense in pain. Finally she surrendered her self to him.

when she gained her sense her head is on maan chest. He wrapped his arms on her waist tightly in the fear of loosing her. She looked her self and maan. she closed her eyes with shame. Her hole body is paining. some of the wounds are still bleeding. Plenty of marks are left on her body. She scared...what anybody thinks when they know about this. She remembered prem. Her eyes again start to flow tears. She try to move from his grip. Maan wake up again he attacked her. It seems he didn't get enough from her. He spread her legs and adjusted in mid. She closed her eyes from pain again she fainted.

At morning it is 6'o clock. geet open her eyes. still she is in grip of maan. now she scared to move. She don't have an idea that how many times he did it. If he wake again?.. but no way .this is the time dadima will go for walking. If anybody saw them she scared?somehow she came from his grip. Now he is sleeping like kid. It seems still he is in under drugs. she covered her self from bed spread. There are too much of blood stains on spread. Tears are rolling thinking of her faith. Some how she managed to maan to ware his cloths. She moved to door. But the pain too much in between legs she cuddle her self on flour. She couldn't get up, she last her sense again.

Pre cap: Bitter truth...knows...

Sorry for short update. Actually I feared type this part. As all of you no that this is my first FF. while typing my fingers shivering. I have edited this part at least 10 times?..Pls.. pls ??forgive me if I have done any mistake.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
aweosme update.
poor maan .
cant wait to knw how maan will knes the truth.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
omg what did he do???????????
uff ho... waiting for more!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
great dear
lets see what happens
when he knew ?

love,
abi

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