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Hi Friends, This Nilima Again, i am back with a OS this time. i hope you guys enjoy reading it. GEET is coming so sad now so thought of cheering you all special my Best friend, My cousin she actually cried today by watching geet and she requested me to write a os so Madhavi here u go! hope this will cheer u a little. not not taking much of your guys time. please enjoy reading it and please feel free to critize my writing.




Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

Tum mile toh mil gaya yeh jahaan
Tum mile toh har pal hai naya
Tum mile toh sabse hai' faasla
Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya' hai khuda

That was JANU's Caller Tune for his BABE, his BACCHA

As soon as she heard this song as her JANU's caller tune there was a very different smile, smile of feeling special!!

She knew that she was, she is and will b very special to her JANU, her childhood love and now a hot, dashing, rich and popular man among all age women was her husbund. Yes he was her husband. He was all made for herself only. She smiled contently.

And he picked up the phone before it went to his voice mail, which he has never let happened when his Babe's call came.

"Ha, babe'kya hua?"

"Janu, (crying) Janu'. (crying)'.."

"Baccha kya hua tuje ro kyu rahi to, plzz rona band karo na baccha.."

"Janu' (sob) (cry) Janu'.."

"Geet baccha bata na kya hua tuje'. Tuje kahi lagi kya, kya kar rahi thi tu? Me abhi to nikala na ghar se'?"

"Janu, (sob)'."

"ha mera pyara Baccha, bol"

"I miss u'." (making a cute face like a little child)

Smiled, "aww mera baccha'"

"janu' come na I miss u'."

"Baccha, me abhi nahi aa sakata, Shona' me do din baad soon as possible ane ki koshish karta hu ha jaan.."

"nahi Janu' I want you now, come na I'll come with u bus.."

Smiled remembering that he told her 100 times to come with her to shimala but she didn't wanted to come because she thought he'll b too busy and she'll b alone and he wont have much time for her, but he also knew that as soon as he will step out the house she'll start missing him. So he was right outside the room.

But he still wanted to play with her and he knew she was fake crying that is the main reason he let her cry but if she cries for real he wouldn't even let her single tear fall on floor and take a whole house on his head. He was way too possessive for her.

So he continued on his conversation with his baby.

"baby'. Tum samj ne ki koshish karo na, me already airport pachich chukka hu, me jald se jald ane ki kosish karata ha bus.."
geet thought she will fake cry and he will come back to get her, but this time she is too late to take decision. She can't even pass her day without seeing her janu and two whole days were like ages to her. yes, there was whole family present for her but still...

Khurana's and Handa's are family friend. And their huge mension is also side by side. Geet's parents always admired maan and maan's parents always admired geet.

But reality stuck her and she realized that she have to live without him and started crying for real. But before her tear drops from her face, maan catches it.

And hugs her.

"geet, shone'. Ro mat na na baccha.. dekho me aa gaya"

Geet realized that he has come back and smiled and hugs him back

"Janu''. U came'. I LOVE YOU Janu.."

"aww mera baccha'. Me apne bacche ko chodke kaise ja sakta hu baccha?"

And looked at her and slowly takes her lips in his lips and passionately kisses her.

After a long time they broke of due to lack of air.

And Maan looks at geet and smiles,

"I love u too mera pyara sa, sweet sa, chota sa baccha'."


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INDEX

Pt 2 @ pg 4

Pt 3 @ pg 7

Pt 4 @ pg 8

pt 5 @ pg 11


~~~~~~~~~~ ************Here's My First SS************* ~~~~~~

~~Woh pyare Lamhe ~~

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Thank you all

Nilima :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yupeeii me the first one..soo cute os..love it..keep writing dear..
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LOVLEY UPDATE DEAR ...LOVE IT ...LOVE YOU NIL SUPERB...UR ARE FAB ...I LOVE YOU ...THANK YOU I LIKE IT ...UR THE BEST ... LOVE YOU ...AND WRITE MORE OS MORE ME ...
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awesome os do write some more
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Originally posted by: madhavipatil

LOVLEY UPDATE DEAR ...LOVE IT ...LOVE YOU NIL SUPERB...UR ARE FAB ...I LOVE YOU ...THANK YOU I LIKE IT ...UR THE BEST ... LOVE YOU ...AND WRITE MORE OS MORE ME ...



Happy madha???
i am glad u liked it.
Thanks alot dear!
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome os do write some more


Thanks alot dear.
i am glad u liked it
will try to write more if will get time.
thanks for reading.
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awesome update
continue soon
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thank u zoha
have learned from u ...:)
i m glad u liked it
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aww dat was a cute os
luved it
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awww .. that was sooo adorable ...
write soon
love
Sana

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