Maneet OS UPDATED @ pg 11. - Page 4

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Hey guys, I am came with another part. Hope you guys will like it. This part is specially for "Geetmaan1234" . Hope u like it sweety.







At night 12 pm.

A man sneaking in the house slowly without making any noise.

he was slowly moving toward his room he knew that he was in BIG trouble, but instead of scolded by whole family he was statisfied with his wife's scolding. He knew he has lot to make up to his wife.

It was none other than our maan the MSK and his wife's janu and the serni was none other than geet maan khurana, her hubby's bacha.

They were a perfect, cute lovely-dovely couple in the family and front of the whole world they were hottest, sexiest and romantic couple.

But this infamous couple's one part mean The MSK was in trouble.

Before he can reach for stairs, suddenly the lights were on.

And a male voice came on,

"maan?"

Maan turns around a little nervous. And says,

"yes, dad! Wat up?? App itani rat ko..?...rone nahi abhi tak?"

"hamari princess ro ro k ache suja rahi hai, aur hum so jaye?? Kyu late aye tum itani der se?" DAD

"Maan? Muje tumse ye umeed nahi thi, dear'. Meri bacchii 6 baje se tumhara intzar kar rahi thi aur tum?... I m so dispponted in u' MOM

"mom'dad'. App log meri baat to suniye, me shona k liye hi kuch khas inzam karne k liye gaya tha, issi liye der ho gayi'varma me itni der'."

But his dad didn't let him finish and said, "go to ur room and take care of priencess''

Maan bows down his head and moves toward his room and his parents moves to their room.

Before entering his room, maan takes a big breath and says to himself, 'maan bte taiyar hoja bivi ka maar khane k liye' I cant believe k jisse puri duniya darti hai vo apni bivi se darta hai'." And enters his room

The room is quite, he takes a relief'

Thinks *uff' muje to laga hr bar ki tarah anadar ate hi barish suru ho jayegi, flower pots, pillow, phone every thing' but this time'.. umm' lets see*

And moves slowly'

And sees that night lamp is on and geet is sleeping dressed all beautifully'.

Maan goes near and sees that his baccha has cried and fallen asleep.

He feels bad that he promised that they will go to movie but because of circumstances he couldn't come.

He sees that his jaan had worn such beautiful and simple dress. But he didn't fail to notice the dried tears of her eyes. he feels sad that he had never let a single tear drop from her jaan's eye but today'..

He caresses her face lovingly and wipes the tears.

He goes to freshen up and change. After 10 min he comes wiping his towel and then trows towel on sofa and goes down stairs to get food for him and his shone, becuz he knows that without him, his shona wont eat either.

He comes back with food and goes to wake up geet.

He takes her in his arm and kisses her forehead lovingly,

"shona'.. come on wake up honey.."

Geet stirres and comes to his arm more closely'

Maan thinks *chahe kitani bhi naraz ho, mujse dur nahi reh sakti meri jaan* and smiles

"jaan'.. lets eat dinner shona'"

Geet stirres a little and opens her eyes, its all red and maan feels sad again for making her cry. But hiding that he tries cheers her up

"come on baby'.chalo' khana kate hai'

Geet smiles and opens her arm to hug him really widely and then reality hits her and she comes out of hug

"janu''. L"

"I m so'." But geet doesn't let maan finish and she kisses him tightly

Maan is taken aback but then he starts to respond her.

And both comes out of the kiss when they run out of breath

and before maan say any thing geet gets panic and askes,

"janu' kya hua tha?? Huh' kya hua that? Batao na'..muje pata hai agar mere janu ne apna promise toda hai to jajur koi baddi vajha hogi"

and checks his head and all and maan starts to fumble..

"vo.. ummm'. Shone' kuch nahi me bhul gaya tha jaan' "sorry"

"nahi janu muje pata hai, tum apni 1000 billion ka contract sigh karna bhul sakte ho lekin apni janu se kiya vada kabhi nahi bhulte.."

"nahi.. baccha, sach me' I forgot baby, sorry na.."

"NAHI'U CANT DO THAT AND I KNOW IT"

Maan smiles to see his nakchaddi geet and but he don't wann stress her by telling wat took him long so he again tries to cover up

'bachha me'." but

"janu tumhe meri kasam, batao, I know tum mujse kuch chupa rahe ho!"

Maan slowly tells the right reason that while running back to get home early to surprise her he mets with an accident and he was taken to hospital and as soon as he gained conscious he came back.

Geet hearing this gets again panic and starts to check him once again and

"kaha' kaha lagi janu tumhe dikhavo'."

Maan gets overwhelmed by geet's love and he just without hearing wat she is saying points at his forehead, geet kisses him and asks

'aur?"

He points to his heart, she kisses him worringly but maan is getting naughty

'aur?'

He points at his eye,nose, cheek and followed by his lips

Geet was innocently going to kiss him but stops at mid track and hits him playfilly

'januuu''bolo na'

'nahi lagi baba'..tumhari kasam bus!"

'pakka na?'

Ha meri MA''

'januuu'''

'accha forget that lets eat I m sooo hungry' '

And they feed each other and later they retire to bed.

while puting geet to sleep maan thinks,

*mere ma-baap ko bhi mujpe barosa nahi tha lekin meri geet ko mujpe barosa tha...* he feels a tear of happiness in his eye *i love u jaanu, u r truly my jaan, my soul...*

and hugs her tightly and geet to reciprocates his hug in sleep.

Precap: I'll try to come up with something romantic and hot.

geet's drees

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Edited by nilu710 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVLEY UPDATE NIL AFTER LONG TIME ...LOVELY UPDATE DEAR ...FAB HA ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nilu thnx so much for updating I love it very much
and plz sweety continue soon with hot and romantic update
Love u muahhh :))))))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part ur MANEET r so cute...lovd them
con soon
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum update
pls update sooon

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