Maneet OS UPDATED @ pg 11. - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
sweet and cute os.
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
awesome os dear
do write more
love it
thanx for d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
awww it was sooo cute...



love it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
awww sooo cute
luv mannet
luvd ut os x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
congrats !!!!!!!! 4 ur new os ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

short n sweet ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Wow nilima what an OS...cho sweet...why did u end it here pls continue this story make it an FF

love-Piya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys, I am back with just a little short part of maneet. 😉 Hope you guys like this one also. Please press LIKE button and comment would be nice.

Night time:

Maan sitting on sofa and working on his laptop. And Geet sitting on sofa and watching tv. Maan is too busy, but once and while he is sees what is geet doing. It was 11 pm. Geet gets tired waiting for maan to finish his work and come to bed.

"Janu, come na how long is it going to take?"

"bus 10 min. baccha…. Ho gaya!"

"Janu, pichale 1 ghante (hr) se tum yahi keh rahe ho!"

"is baar pakka ho in 10 min, jaan"

Geet makes a face and makes a grumpy face and goes back to her tv show.

At like around 12 maan is finally done with his work and shut down his laptop.

And comes back to bed and sees that tv is on and geet has fallen asleep.

He smiles and turns off the tv and makes geet lie down properly and he slips in spread with her and takes her in his arms. Removes hair which was spreads on her face, kisses his forehead and geet opens her eyes a little and smiles,

"time mila tumhe mere pass ane ka…. Jao yaha se…" and turns away to face other side

Maan smiles, "sorry na jaan… apne janu ko maaf kar do na plz.." and puts his hand on her waist bring her closer and kisses her shoulder.

Geet shrugs off her shoulder and takes his hand out of waist.

"muje nind aa rahi hai.."

Again puts his hand on her waist tightly and starts kissing her on her shoulder, moving to neck, throat, cheek. Geet is losing herself to his passion.

"sorry na mera baccha, dekho I promise we will go out this weekend somewhere alone. Just u and me… hamara pyar…. hamara romance…. Aur…."

Geet turns and hugs him smiling and hides her face in chest.

"promise?"still her face in her chest.

Maan smiles and breaking hug and kisses her lips tightly.

"PROMISE!"

Geet smiles and hugs him back.

Maan gets naughty and moves his hand underneath her kurta and caress her back, moving his hand up and down. And smiles to know that as like everyday his jaan is not waring B**.

Geet understands wat is he thinking. And

"go to sleep! Muje nind aa rahi hai!" and again turns her back to him again.

Maan smiles and again moves his hand in his kurta and squeezes her belly area, and moves upward toward her B****ts.

Geet gets all shy and tries to remove his hand from there.

Maan smiles mischievously and thinks, ab bhi sarmati hai, pagal.

But he again moves his hand underneath her kurti and says, "jaan, y don't u wear those night dresses that u used to wear when we went to honeymoon, u looked Sexy in it"

Geet shys and that was enough to let him in and he again starts to caress her b****ts and belly area, stomach and everything.

Geet doesn't stop him, becuz it is making her feel good and maan gives her good night tight kiss and both drips off to sleep like that. Maans hand underneath her kurti on between her volley and geet's hand on top of his but outside the kurti.

Morning:

Geet stirs in her sleep in maan's arm around 6 am. Maan was stepping out of the bed for his every day exercise. Maan kisses geet on her forehead. And maan moves toward his jim room.

At 7 pm. Maan comes back to his room and looks at sleeping geet. And thinks

"she looks so innocent bilkul choti bacchi ki tarah.. meri beti jayda cute hogi ki meri bivi, pata nahi…" and moved to bath room

And he gets ready and finally decided to wake geet up.

He goes near her and caresses her hair and pats her head. Smiling.

Thinks, "normally wife apne pati ko uthati hai lekin, ha apni love story bhi to hatke hai…" and

"Bachha utho, dekho kitani der ho gayi hai…."

Geet is all cuddle up in puffy blanket and shrugs off his hand and moves to other side.

Maan again goes closer, and kisses her forhead,

"Jaan….. mera pyara baccha, chal abb jaldi se udja dek muje office bhi jana hai aur tuje pata hai tera chehera hasata hua aur apni kiss ke bina mera din accha nahi jata na… chal uth ja jaldi se….."

"uhh……uhh…..Janu….. thodi der sone do na,,,, chalo tum bhi so jao mere sath…"

And takes his hand underneath her face and comfortable sleeps.

Maan smiles at his lovely wife's antics.

"Baccha dekho utho varna….."

But geet doesn't listen…

Maan smiles mischievously and takes off the comforter and slips his hand in her kurti and starts to open her zip and slowly moving to her waist starts tickling her.

"Januuu…….. chodo na….." and moves to his arms.

Maan laughs and happily takes her in his embrace and kisses tightly.

"Janu… tum aise kyu kar rahe ho….."

And fake cries.

"ooo mela baccha ro raha hai…..awww……"

And again tickles and geet laughs

"hahahahaha Janu…..Bus Bus nahi roh gi me bus….."

Maan finally stops and smiles

"Nautanki, mera ye baccha ek number ka nauanki hai…."

And hugs her tightly. They remains like that for some time.

"accha abb utho, chalo…… muje office bhi jana hai"

He makes geet sit up,becuz she is too lazy.

"Janu….. " making baby face.. like :(

"ha mera baccha bol"

"tum ne muje kal raat ko kuch promise kiya than na…"

"aree jaan, tu abhi to itani neend me thi aur ohir bhi yaad hai, sapne vahi soch rahi thi kya…." Wink "hah???... hah???..."

Geet blushes, "Janu….. jav me tuj se baat nahi karti…"

"oo really? Aisa to kabhi ho nahi sakata…. Mera baccha mujse baat kiye bina nahi reh sakata, I can bet that…." And side hugs her, but shrugs off his hands. But still hugs her.

Maan kisses her.

"awww….Mera baccha, ruth mat na….dekho tera janu ka din accha nahi jayega aur janu bhi rone lagega…"

Geet turns and giggles, "hahaha, mera janu kabhi nahi rota, buddu!" and slightly hits his forhead with her fingers.

"accha?...lekin ab royega…" and makes sad face L

"NAHI….Mera janu nahi royega……. BUS!"

Maan smiles "accha baba, naho royega tera Janu"

And he gets all romantic and comes more closer to her

"Baccha…. I love u when u call me JANU"

Geet suddenly stands on her knees and put her hands on her hips.

"accha? To u don't love me otherwise?" and again gets upset

"aree baccha….i love u every way, ur so innocent, so sweet and (coming closer) so tasty…" smiles "and shona… wat up with ur mood, suddenly ur so happy and suddenly so grumpy?" geet gives him a look, maan gulps "I mean so upset

Coming more close, "are you preganant???...ha jaan? Hamare ghar nani pari ane vali hai yani mera bada baccha?"

Geet looks down and blushes hides her face in her palm. And shakes it to indicate NO

"awww….mera baccha sharmata bhi hai…ohooo.."

And hugs her.

"jalo abb jaldi taiyar ho jao taki me jaldi office jake jaldi se vapase aa saku, aur ajj me jaldi aa javuga aur hum apna mini vecation ajj hi suru kar dege"

"Promise?"

"Pakka promise!"

And puts his hand in her hand.

And after like half and hour maan geet comes down hand in hand to dining table.

Everybody is waiting for geet to join them for breakfast becuz without geet nobody eats anything. Geet is a priencess of the family. Everybody pampers her and especially maan, maan never gets jealous that his family loves geet more than him.

Maan's dad, "aa gayi meri princess, chalo abb khana suru karte hai.."

Maan's mom, "kya khayegi meri beti?"

and they enjoy their breakfast laughing. It was a ideal family ever.

I hope you guys like this part. I hope u guys didn't get bored.

This part was specially for Madhavi, becuz she is begging me since morning, message pe message, "so here you go, madha!"

And for Piya, "sorry yaar, I don't if people will like this as FF, but I promise I will write something like this. Little little happy moments of our maneet. I hope you like it. "

And everybody please enjoy!!!! Please press LIKE button and comment. It makes me feel so happy and I get encouragements to write it more. And if u guys want me to stop then, I would be happy too. Please let me know.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
simply beautiful
love it
fab written
ty 4 pm
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
fabulous
yu narrate so perfect
waiting eagerly
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOVLEY UPDATE SWEET HEART ...THANK YOU LOT ...I AM GLAD YOU UPDATE IT ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, LOVE YOU ...UR ARE FAB... THANK YOU FOR UPDATE FOR ME LOVE IT RELAY ...UPDATE MORE I WILL BE WAIT FOR OS FOR U

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