Maneet OS UPDATED @ pg 11. - Page 5

Originally posted by: maanluver

awesum update

pls update sooon

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Saturday morning

Whole family was running around to get everything ready fot maneet's 2 day out trip. Maan had promised to geet that he would take her out this weekend so preparation for their trip was going on.

Maan's mom, dad and dadi was packing maneet's stuff like what they will need, more of packing for geet.

Maan's dad: princess ko headache hua to? Prerna put a Tylenol in their bag's side pocket.

Prerna: aree ha, accha yaad dilaya app ne, agar meri geet ko thand lagi to ek shawl bhi rak deti hu.

Everybody was busy in packing for their trip

and

here maneet in another room

Maan-geet on bed laying and geet's hand around maan's neck and maan's around his jaan's waist.

"Januu…batao na hum kaha ja rahe hai?"

"jaan…agar bata duga to surprise kya rahega aur ye jo apni family hai na uss jaga ka pura history background nikal degi aur fir vaha jana cancel kar degi, pichali baar ki tarah.. tumhe yaad hai na hum Calcutta jane vale the last month aur mom-dad ne hume jane nahi diya tha, kyuki vaha raining season ki vajhase roads karab ho gaye the….

"januu…vo hamre acche ke liye…."

But maan didn't let her finish…

"what? Kya shone… isme hamri acche-bure ki kya baat thi? Mene such beautiful resort book karaya tha, tumhe pata hai?...khair me ye risk iss time pe nahi lene vala…"

"accha baba… lekin hum kab nikle ge ghar se?"

"ye hamari family ki packing ho jaye na, fir nakle ge….. lekin abb k liye muje ek pyari si…..

And places his finger on his lips

Geet understands what he wants and she comes forward and gives him a wet kiss, before she can come out maan takes her for full passionate kiss.

Maan's hand roams back and forth on geet's back…geet's finger playing with maan's smooth sliky hair…

Both are lost in their wet passionate kiss…

Maan enters geet's mouth…both plays with each other's tongue

Maan slowly makes his hand enter inside her shirt and moves up till her bra hook and he opens it

While still kissing he massages her br***ts with his both hands, slowly his hand about to go inside her short night pant just then dadi knocks their room

"baccho… uthe ke nahi abhi tak?? Chaloo….jana hai ki nahi gumne??"

Inside the room

Geet tries to answer but maan doesn't leave her mouth and doesn't let her anwer…

"kyaa yaar yeh dadi bhi na…hamesha wrong timing.."

"janu…abb jana hai ki nahi….ki yahi pe…."

"nahi nahi jana hai kyu nahi jana hai.. I m very excited for the place and I know ur gonn love it!"

"aisi konsi jagha hai januu?"

Before he can answer

Dadi, 'bacchoo………"

Maan gets irritated and answers

"ha dadi.. aa rahe hai"

Before they step out of bed maan gives her final kiss and they descend the room

And everybody is like u haven't got ready???

They gets ready fast and leaves for airport

They sit in the plane, its their private plane so nobody's there to disturb them.

Geet's resting her head on maan's shoulder and maan's hand on her shoulder and another hand on top of geet's hand which is resting on maan's thigh….

Geet is trying to know where is maan taking her

"januu…. Bolo na hum kaha jaa rahe hai?"

"bacchaa… maine kaha na…. it's a surprise.. and ur gonn love it…and don't u trust me??"

Geet playfully hits him on his chest..

"yee bhi koi puchane ka sawal hai….i trust u more than my self, even if u take me to hell I would go with blindfold"

"Shonaaa…..ye kyat tum ….. chalo jane do…. Abb so jaoo kyu ki vaha pohojne ke baad me tumhe sone nahi dunga…" WINK

"badmasshh…"

"only with my shona…." Kisses her forehead

They land on their destination

And they come out from airport geet looks around and tries to know where there are…

Maan takes her to their cottage…

The cottage is surrounded by lot of trees and its nice and pleasant weather…

Maan makes geet go head…as geet was about to out her first foot in the house there was written

WEL COME TO YOUR DREAM LAND

EGYPT

And geet gets soo excited and turns around to hug maan…

"JANUUU…..o.m.g. we are in Egypt? I mean THE EGYPT?"

"omg…omg…..omg…..omg….."

She gets so hyper, maan just smiles widely to see this reaction of geet

He is happy to see geet this happy…

"shona….andar to chalo…."

And they both enter their huge-beautiful cottage (more like bungalow) and it red rose petals showers on geet and geet spreads her arm and spins around on her spot.

"januuu….tumne mere liye yeah sab kiya?"

"nahi ye sab mene vo pinky hai na uske liye kiya… jaan.. ofcorse mene yea sab meri princess ke liye kiya"

"chalo tuje me hamra bedroom dikata hu…"

And he takes her to bed room….the bed room has a full view of a big huge pyramid

"WOW….januuu….it is sooo AWSOME… I LOVE IT.."

"accha u love this? But not me…who brought all this just for u!" and makes a sad face..

"aww… mera januu… sad baby ho gaya? I Love u baby……" and slightly pinches his both cheeks and moves his head side to side.. smiling…and gives him a tight kiss!

Suddenly maan gets all romantic and comes closer to geet and puts his hand on her waist…

"accha… I'll just see how much u LOVE me…"

"umm…kaise??"

"aise…"

And he takes her in the bath room and one by one starts to take out her clothes..

Maan turns on bathtub water and by the time they get rid of their cloths the tub gets full of water and rose petals was already their

And maan slowly puts geet in the tub and he goes toward the door to close the big lights… as soon as big light gets turns off, small light is on and he puts a romantic song on.

And gets comfortable in the tub with geet.

"aww…januu.. this is sooo romantic!"

"hummm…."

Maan and geet relaxes in each other's arm and they both doses off

After 2 hrs maan wakes up to see his jaan sleeping peacefully

He just admires her for a while then he slowly wakes geet up

"bacchaa….. bacchha…uthoo chalo kuch kha lete hai!"

"umm…januu..sone do na.."

Maan sighs and slowly put her by wall of tub and goes out of tub and wipes himself, then wears his night dress and takes another towel and carefully takes geet in his arm and takes her to bed room and wipes her with towel. Not bothering to put any clothes on her, he puts her to bed and puts spread on her, turns a AC's temperature little higher.

He goes down stairs makes pasta for both of them..

Takes it.. and tries to wake up geet again but she doesn't wake up..

He knows she might be too tired and leaves the food on table

He calls in india and lets them know that they have reach safety, not to worry about them

And he too joins geet on bed

Geet turns around in sleep and comes in maan's arm..

Maan smiles and hugs her tight and doses off

Early morning

Maan wakes up and nuzzles geet's neck

Geet wakes up and maons

"januuu… sone do na.."

"yeah suhana mousam,

Yaha tum aur hum,

Aur uff yeah tumhare nakhare "sone do na"!"

"januuu…tum kabse shayri karne lage??"

"jabsee…. Tum unromantic ho gayi.." L

"aww…baby…then wat u want me to do to prove u that I m still a romantic like u r?"

"umm…..u know wat I want?"

geet blushes and looks down shyly

"is that a YES then?" with mischievously smiles

Geet puts her hand firmly on his neck and shakes him YES

"okkayy babyyy…"

And he slowly massages her back

That's when geet realizes that she is laying naked on the bed with her Janu.

But that was not new to her.

She has always gone to sleep without her cloths on with her janu.. she would just not bother to put on any clothes on… and later they would end up having a hot love making…

Maan moves his hand up and down on her back, slowly his hand starts to go little down to her private parts and pleases her….

Geet feeling pleasure relaxes a little and she too puts her hand on his back and chest moving smoothly and takes out his waist coat, that turns on maan further

Maan slowly puts geet on her back and moves his hand on her b****ts and massages there… geet closes her eyes and her hand resting on his back on

Maan starts to kiss her..

He kisses her tip-toe lovingly….

Geet is lost on maan's passion

Maan comes on top of geet and kisses her jawline, neack collarbone, br***ts one by one moves down her belly button and again moves down to please her…

He gives her lots of smooches at down on her private parts…

Geet moaning…

"aa…januu.."

"ohh janu…."

This makes maan more passionate and he speeds up

Finally geet couldn't wait any more

She pulls maan up..

"januu….. plzz come to me…. I cant wait!"

That's all maan was waiting for and he takes her

"ohh jaan…"

And he positions himself on top of her and enters her in one go…

"aaahhh….januuu………"

Maan teases her

"kya hua shona?? Tumhe sona hai aur??"

"ohh janu…. Plzz don't do this come na.."

Maan didn't wanted to disappoint her more and her starts to love her

He shows her how much he loves her

Geet too didn't stop her slef and she too gets in with her jannu to a passionate ride

After 3 hrs

Maan collapse on geets chest

Geet running her fingers trough maan's hair

"ohh jaan… no matter how many time make love to u, its still not enough, ur too yummy and irresistible…

Geets just blushes and smiles

And maan suddenly remembers that geet had not eaten anything last night and he just jerk up from bed and

"baccha? U didn't had anything last night…. R u hungry? (w/o waiting for her answer) Let me make something for u"

And starts to get out of bed

But

Geet pulls his hand and makes him sit down on bed

She rests her head on his chest covers themselves.

"kya hua baccha?"

"meri morning HOT chocolate?"

"ohhoo…. Yaha maine tumhe puri chocalate se nehla diya fir bhi tumhe HOT chocolate chahiye?" grining…

"accha….."

folding her arm over her chest, getting upset

" jaoo…baat to aise kar rahe hai jaise apko…….."

Before she complete her sentence

Maan takes her lips into his, and kisses her passionately..

Geet moves her finger in his hair!

They both kisses each other passionately like there is no tomorrow!

Maan moves his lips down to start his passionate journey of love all over again but geet stops him.

"januuu…. Don't get too naughty… muje bhuk lagi hai"

Maan's face still between her valley kissing her.

"umm… muje bhi"

"januuu… stop kidding… hatoo I wann go eat something"

Maan realizes that he should stop, gets concern for geet

"ohh sorry baccha… I'll get something for u"

Starts to get out of bed and geet gives him final kiss and lets him go.

Maan gets out of bed and starts to put on her boxers and night pant and geet moves her head to other side.

While putting on his boxers

"shona..? kya hua….uthar kyu dekha rahi ho…idhar dekho na.. meri taraf!"

Geet still doesn't move her head to see him.

"besharam ho tum janu!"

Maan just smiles and continues teasing her

"kya shona…kitani bar tumne muje…aise…I mean..nak.."

But before he could finish

"Januuu…."

Gets all red and hides her face in her palm.

Maan wears his pants and comes to her

"ohhh mera bacchaa…sharma gaya! I LOVE U, mera pyara sa, sweet sa baccha!"

And removes her hand from her face..

And maneet hug each other.

"I LOVE U, TOO JANU"

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Originally posted by: monika1992

Plz dun mind i hav copied ur pic..i dun know how to post pic so i copied...plz agar bura laga ho to sorry