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Posted: 14 years ago
diii superb wow...love it so much...so how much I love your ff Im in uni and reading your FF...
update soon di...case want that precap wow...

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Posted: 14 years ago
it is amazing update ,
you have captured everything so beautifully ca't explain in words , it was very heart touching part ...i felt so emotional after read it but in this part every character were doing nice , everyone were so concerned about radhika's health and specially dev ..have done it very brilliantly , now we can feel his emotions , loved their talk on phone ...at the end everything was perfect and hope their cute angel will be fine always 😉

Thanks Devika

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update Devika.
wow seems like Radev soon going to have baby!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update! Waiting for the baby to arrive now!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Devika,another gr8 update 👏 waiting for the princess now..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thankas. lovely update and waiting for ur next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
When someone is around you who cares for you even before you need than life become more beautiful ...Di you very well present this wonderful thoughts through actions of DEV but in simple yet impressive way .. its just you who have ability to create this magic 👍🏼 ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello devika waiting eagerly 2 become part of u dreamworld again.when r u going 2 serve my morning tea,
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Posted: 14 years ago
hai friends.. thank you so much ruchibabbly, kscjk, AditiD, Nabesa, khus1973, tukli, thujaa, imissouri, avina_radev48, laxmis, laxmi_avinafan, DAIRY25, sugarandspice, *Maleena*, suwin, NiHa24, chalhov, v3gradev09, Indiangirl09, -Madhu-, abhilasha_dream, bvs7691, radhika5, radha_bilahari, -Shankar-, anu17, nycsweetie, for liking part 123. Really appreciate your precious time to let me know your views, your eagerness.because that will really add to my spirit as I am still trying to get in here. So thank you to know I can move on. Ok, one more.. from today onwards mostly there will be an update everyday, don't know whether you will be able to catch up with me, but if things goes as i planned, then for few days you can expect an update from me. hope i won't bore you. what you can do is, please give me feed back, as i want to move on, and only your words and your response can let me do it, I want to complete it as soon as i can, and with the next turn, i prefer to move with steady pace (because i want to stay in form) and without break to bring everything together... the whole of this FF, so please be with me if you are a reader, and please respond at any how possible, that will be really appreciated,... thanks for reading and take care... Devika.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please read the above note if you are a reader of this FF.. please ..and acknowledge it if possible... so that i can know how many are with me with this speed track.. thanks

Part 124

The handbag just slide down from suchi's shoulder to her forearm into her hand. She walked in with anxious face into that pivate room, and her eyes were focusing only on the bed where Radhika was resting .

"Mom, you here already!"

Suchi ignored Dev's voice and only looked at Radhika, who was trying to sit to show Suchi that she is fine.

Dropping the bag on the table unknowingly, Suchi sat on that chair from which Dev moved away.

"How are you beta?" signaling Radhika to rest back. Suchi felt the relief after taking Radhika's hand in hers.

Radhika with a smile: I am fine mom, I felt little tired and

Dev sitting at the head side of the bed in sideways: no mom, she didn't eat anything for two days and

Suchi: why beta

Radhika: no mom, just today, I felt so nauseated and

Dev: no mom, don't listen to her, look at her legs, I am sure she was walking around all the time and was not resting at all

Suchi noticed Radhika's swollen feet.

Rohini: no beta, she was resting only, even she didn't go for any walk yesterday or today, I also noticed that swelling.

Dev: Maaji you are back, what the doctor said?

Mohan: Dr. said we can go, everything is fine it seems like.

Dev: why, let's wait here only

Suchi: No Dev, she is fine, let's go home, anyway there is still time , right?

Dev: but mom

Suchi: these all natural only , no need to worry

Dev lowering his voice: so only you came this fast

Suchi as if hearing his teasing tone: I know you will say like that only, then looking at Rohini " I told him to wait for me too, but then he was making all those excuses, saying you will take time forever, and if you don't find anybody to give charge then it will be a question mark, and see now he is admitting that I am fast

Dev: see, that's why we got her here early, otherwise

Suchi confidently: otherwise also nothing will happen, you are talking as if you are the only one concened and nobody is around.

Dev: babuji, now she is turning the plate upside down, you should have seen her face yesterday, now she is talking like a doctor.

Suchi: don't try to tease me Dev, then looking at Mohan you don't know bhayya, for a moment I thought he is the one who is going to deliver, you don't know what all drama he made over there.

Keeping that secrecy between them, Radhika's fingers made that small space and squeezed his arm skin within fraction of time, and as a reflex Dev pulled his arm away which was resting near her hand, and looked at her face with a small "aaavuuu"

Then he stood in pause for a second and then looked at Rohini's smiling face

Dev trying to hide himself: mom is simply making up rubbing his skin slightly with other hand and looking at Radhika.

Interpting him, Suchi: Dev, enough, now anyway doctor gave permission right, let's go home.

Dev: um

Mohan: anyway, I am glad that now you are here too, do you need to go back anytime soon before her date.

Suchi: no, noway I told them that Rahdika is getting admitted to the hospital, and not to expect me near the hospital building for next one month.

Dev: who took charge?

Suchi: what yout hink of me, we help each other too ok, um

Suchi and Dev helped Radhika to get up from bed while Rohini packed everything back into that little bag.

Soon they reached back to Radhika's house and Yeshpal, Sushma, and Daadi were waiting impatiently outside the house looking at their way.

Mohan pulled the jeep in, followed by Suchi's car along with Dev and Rahdika.

Daadi felt relief seeing Rohini's smily face.

They exchanged the talk, and later Suchi went along with Yeshpal and Sushma to haweli.

Radhika was resting well in bed, watching Dev finishing his work on his laptop and then getting up to close the door.

Dev coming near: So when Rahul will be back?

Radhika: most probably tomorrow.

Dev: he sounded having all masti

Radhika: he waited so long to go for this school trip, and this is his first trip with his school friends , you can imagine.

Dev smiled as he was checking on her feet.

Radhika: that will be alright by tomorrow

Dev: no radhika, let me massage it for sometimes, maybe that will help, it was never be this bad, ...you talk to me something , ok.

She just smiled

Dev: um, now you smile, you really scared me today

Suddenly feeling bad, Radhika's sad voice came out: sorry

Dev looking at her: no Radhika, I didn't mean to hurt you, I just want you to be well, and I know you are going through so many discomfort, and I cannot do anything about it. So atleast if I can be near you, then I feel better.

Radhika tried to bring a smile

Dev: more than you it is my little princess who scared me today

Radhika watched as his face moved towards her tummy

"you don't know beta when mamma told that you are not moving much, I was unable to think anything better, one time your daadi scold me for browsing all the sites for negative things, that time I didn't get why she is scolding me, but now I know.

Radhika: when? , didn't I know that?

Dev: are you listening to us, this is our private time

Radhika: I was not listening, but you are talking so loud, so I happen to hear it

Dev: oh, no Radhika it was earlier, and I stopped doing it.

Radhika: when?

Dev: when Dr. Sulochana asked about baby movements and all, I was so nervous and my first place to ask or check is internet , so I was browsing, and I was not understanding many terms and things they were saying , so naturally I asked mom, and she scolded me so badly and wanrned only to listen to the doctor for now.

Radhika: um, so now

Dev: so only I brought that book for you , recommended by mom, and did you ever read it

Radhika: ha, I did

Dev: um

Radhika wrapped her arms around his head and brought near to her chest and resting his head over her upper chest, she said: when you are around me, nothing bad will happen to me or to our angel, because your love will protect us from everything.

Dev: Radhika.. the soft voice trailed as he placed a kiss over her lower jaw. Lifting his head up slightly, looking at her face, he said: I missed you a lot

Radhika: me too

And he saw that tear escaping from the corner of her eyes.

With a smile he rubbed that off and resting back in position he said: I know everything will be fine Radhika, now I won't leave you alone. The more you stay away from eyes, the more I need you close by.

Radhika just wrapped her arms around his chest, to convey her wish too. Radhika kept on listening to his heartbeat as she was fully awake with the added fluid load.

***
Days passed without any warnings , and Radhika was smiling at the elder lady talks, and sushma was shooing Dev away from listening to the ladies talks. He tried his level best to sneek in, but later left the space for the ladies privacy. Radhika listened to her own birth story and smiled as she heard about Surender's response with Dev and Lechu's delivery time. And she snuggled into Daadi's arm when she heard her babuji's birth at their home privacy.

Dev went out with his daadaji , and watched his day going , tackling villager's issues, and looking at the progress of agricultural facilities. He even went along with daadaji for a meeting to get sanction for a grapevain yard funding issues for the villagers. The land was offered to the villagers by Yeshpal, and they were trying to get a suitable scheme to purchase the plants and other materials needed to cultivate it.

The officer took the application and showing the betal stained teeth outside , the officer said "I will look into it".

He heard about the officer's act when villagers went alone to give the application and this time the officer just took it seeing daadaji along with them.

The car was moving at its pace back home, listening to the villagers talk, Dev thought ' what the big deal about it?" without understanding the struggle of those poor people he moved on with picking that beeping cell and with a smile he answered,"bolo Radhika"

.

The evening was filled with so much laughter , being teased by Sushma and Daadi, Dev tried to raise his voice too, while Suchi joined them silently. Before dinner time Surender and Lechu arrived too. They were laughing saying the tension filled talk and action of Suchi and Surender was moving one step ahead in teasing his wife.

Suchi: I know, you'll say all this very cool way in front of everyone, and then secretly call Mohan bhayya at night to make sure everything is fine

Surender: what else I do, when my own gynecologist wife show this action at home.

Suchi: ha for that also you need to pick on me

Surender: otherwise how do we know, you look at Rohini behan, is she tensed like you?

Suddenly Rohini paused and looked at those staring eyes

Daadi: ha, to know Rohini's real reaction you should see her face when you remind her 'the time is nearing'. Then if you call her near to her ears also she won't listen, she will stand like a statue

Mohan: I agree with that.

Rohini hide her face shyly behind Suchi

Suchi: now it is not nearing, it neared, and at any time

The family talk and tease went on downstairs, when Lechu and Rahdika went upstairs to see the recent pics of Radhika with her big tummy.

Few minutes passed

"Mom, Bro, Deedi needs you inside, deedi is not feeling well, she was trying to take the camera from"

Dev ran upstairs as lechu was continuing with her concern for Radhika...

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thanks for reading and take care

Devika.
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago

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