~Krishna's OS Gallery~ Young Love (7/21)

Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#1
Hey folks!
My name is Krishna.
After reading some amazing FF/SS/OSs by some amazing writers, I have been forced [Well, not really😆] to start writing by my amazing friends, Shaheda di[Newdime], Azi[arabianpaki] Minal[Limerance],and pushpi, mainly.


This is going to be my OS Gallery, hopefully. I love Maan and Geet, so I will be writing about Maaneet.

If you want PMs, please like the post for "PM List." Do not send me buddy requests please.

And that's about all from my side.

😊

Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

53

Views

6.8k

Users

12

Likes

90

Frequent Posters

Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#2
~INDEX~
One Summer Day With Geet - Scroll Down
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago
Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#3
One Summer Day With Geet

She woke up on the twenty-first of June, she smiled remembering the past year of her life. On this day June 21, she and her best friend had gotten married. Maan Singh Khurana her best friend since high school, was lying next to her. "Wait a minute… where is he?" Geet wondered as she looked around at their empty room. So she got up and made her way towards the kitchen. There he was, her handsome hubby, making breakfast for them. "What are you doing?" she asked. "Making my beautiful wife breakfast," he answered as he reached for her with a bottle of syrup in his hand. "Oh, no you don't!!! I'm going to take a shower!," Geet yelled as she ran away from him and his bottle of syrup. After Geet finished taking her shower, she hurried to get into her, well, Maan's favorite sari, a beautiful plum-colored sari with silver work on it with a hot blouse. As she made her way downstairs, she made sure to bring her hair to the front over her shoulder so that her hubby could see her back, that was covered only by a thin strap. "Now where is he?" As Geet walked into the kitchen she saw her breakfast on the island, but no Maan. She was about to leave the kitchen when she saw a note tucked underneath the plate with an orchid.

Meri Mishti,

You are looking beautiful in that sari. I want to make today special, but for that I have to leave you for a bit. Be back in a while. Miss me.

With all my heart and love,

Tumhara Maan

As she read the note, she became misty-eyed. Me never failed to amaze her. Even after a year of marriage, he came up with the best surprises. For example on her birthday, April 5, he had booked a yacht and took her out for a midnight swim; afterwards, they had gotten on the boat and after that …

Well, if her husband was the king of surprises then she was the queen. She had a surprise for him that was sure to make this day ever more special. Now all she had to do was wait for tonight.

It was nine o'clock, and she was still waiting for Maan. His "while" had turned into twelve hours of waiting. She was starting to get worried. Maan never went anywhere without telling her; not because she wanted to know, but because he couldn't stay away from her. As she thought of him, a smile appeared on her face. Slowly that smile turned into laughter as she felt him trying to creep up on her. As she turned around to face him, he put his hands over her…eyes, silly. "Maan, yeh kya kar rahe ho?" she said as a blindfold replaced his hands.

He carried her to his car and gently lowered her onto the passenger's seat. He came around, got in the car, and started driving. "Maan, where are we going?" "You'll know when we get there" replied Maan, finally stopping the car. Before she could say anything, Maan came around and picked her up and started walking again. While Maan was carrying Geet towards "Destination Unknown," Geet was worrying about… [Don't worry, you'll find out soon enough]. Maan started slowing down his steps; and Geet could hear the roar of the ocean, and smell the sea air.

Maan finally opened her blindfold, and led her towards the white canopy set up on the beach.

"Happy Anniversary!" "I'm pregnant." They exclaimed at the same time…

A beautiful end to a long day.



*Note*

This is a condensed version. I may write the longer version later.

Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#4
Young Love- Prologue

Maan Khurana is a typical 17 year old boy. The most important things in his life were: his family, school, and work. Maan worked at a local restaurant after school.

-

Geet Handa is an ordinary 17 year old girl, a simple girl whose life revolved around her parents, Anushka and Mayank, her brother, Naren, and school.


What will happen when the high school heartthrob and the new girl meet? Stay tuned to find out!

abinash079 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago
#5
read the os it is awesome
Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: abinash079

read the os it is awesome

Thank you! :)
abinash079 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago
#7
plz send pm whenever u update
Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: abinash079

plz send pm whenever u update

Will do!



[CODE]<embed src="http://sound15.mp3pk.com/indian/delhi6/delhi610(www.songs.pk).mp3" autostart="true" loop="true" hidden="true"></embed>[/CODE]
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago
arabianpaki thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#9

^^That's my happy dance!

I'm proud of you girl! You're finally writing...

p.s: add me to the pm list... but even if you don't, you know I would stalk this thread anyways!😉
p.p.s: I see someone becoming a Dazzler in the near future!😆

Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: arabianpaki


^^That's my happy dance!

I'm proud of you girl! You're finally writing...

p.s: add me to the pm list... but even if you don't, you know I would stalk this thread anyways!😉
p.p.s: I see someone becoming a Dazzler in the near future!😆



I love Tigger and Piglet! Happy Dance! Thank you so much! I could never have done it without you! Of course you're in my PM list! Haha, I took Shaheda di's advice.

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 months ago

MG-Twisted Love/pt12-pg20- 2 aug

Twisted Love This story i written for OS contest, in sort version, today i thought of sharing the story in little, long version This is the...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

4 years ago

Mg FF Destined to love you Part 55 on 97 Page 24/6/25

Prologue London.It’s a hot day and Geet, in white wedding dress, watched her dear fiance kissing with her sister whose mother had already...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Maaneet FF- Love Echoes Beyond Dimensions -Chapter 2 Pg 10 Jun 25

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 years ago

Love Ke Liye Sala Kuch Bhi Karega/PT 16/pg59- 12 jan

Love Ke Liye Sala Kuch Bhi Karega for love what you can do Kuch bhi kuch bhi yes so start the journey of love but twist without any twist ,

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My Impossible Love *Maaneet SS* 🔺UPDATED CH 24,25@PG 89 || 20th April

Author's note : Hi Addicted is completed so here I am presenting another NEW story. I will post the first one or two chapters and then based on...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".