~Krishna's OS Gallery~ Young Love (7/21) - Page 3

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

only the most awesomest and bestest!

Yes, you are the bestest and awesomest! We were grocery shopping today; sometime before Thursday, I hope. :) Azi, I wish you would write something! Pretty please with all your favorite candies, desserts, actors in top!!

Originally posted by: amita5

do continue...please pm me

will do :)

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Yes, you are the bestest and awesomest! We were grocery shopping today; sometime before Thursday, I hope. :) Azi, I wish you would write something! Pretty please with all your favorite candies, desserts, actors in top!!

lol! Oh how I wish I could write! You think I would hide such talent! But I'm not creative AT ALL! If I was to "think" of a story ..it would be a copy of something I read or a movie I watched ..unintentionally of course!
Maybe it will come on its own..when I least expect ..like a dream or something😉

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

lol! Oh how I wish I could write! You think I would hide such talent! But I'm not creative AT ALL! If I was to "think" of a story ..it would be a copy of something I read or a movie I watched ..unintentionally of course!
Maybe it will come on its own..when I least expect ..like a dream or something😉

You are forgetting you have given you inputs ur additionals in my FF...Kheer Chatai...remember?😉

It will come on its own...and copy is not something bad...Copy is not something bad but how you present it. Thats what Minal told me and it made home in my head...

Originally posted by: Newdime

You are forgetting you have given you inputs ur additionals in my FF...Kheer Chatai...remember?😉

It will come on its own...and copy is not something bad...Copy is not something bad but how you present it. Thats what Minal told me and it made home in my head...

lol ..the kheer chatai came because I already had the kheer chatai scene in my head! .. but actually writing an OS or an FF ..that requires a beginning and an end!

Young Love-Part 1

Maan was a junior at Smartie School. After school, he worked part-time at Chick-Fil-A as a cashier. He loved his family, friends, and school.

Geet was the perfect daughter. She and her family moved to the small town of Limeazishah. She was going to be starting school at Smartie School this fall.

Maan was about to close up for the night when a girl made her way to the counter. "Hey, can I please get a piece of cheesecake?" spoke the girl. Maan rang up her purchase and handed her the change back. After grabbing the takeout bag and change, the girl turned to leave. "Watch your step!"warned Maan. But it was too late, the girl, in her hurry, slipped and started to fall. *slow mo!* Maan rushed out from behind the counter and caught the girl before she could fall. *Nahi!* (lol) After helping the girl regain her balance, Maan let go of her waist and stepped away. "Uh, the floor was wet. Sorry about that." said Maan, with a sheepish grin. "That's okay. I'm Geet, Geet Handa by the way," said the girl a.k.a. Geet. "And I'm Maan, Maan Singh Khurana," replied Maan, catching the James Bond reference. Breaking away from Maan's gaze, Geet looked at the time. "Oh no, it's 10:30! I have to go, see yah!" After saying that, Geet left; leaving Maan to close the store.

After that night, Maan and Geet saw each other frequently. After all in a small town like Limeazishah, everyone knew everyone. Wal*Mart was the hangout, and Chick-Fil-A was the place to get food and chillax, since most of the employees were teens. Soon summer vacation was over, and it was time to get back to school.

August 15. It was the first day of school as a junior for Maan, and the first day of school at a new school for Geet. As she drove in and parked next to the Honda Accord, she prayed to her Babaji to help her through this first day. Geet and her brother, Dev, walked into the school and went straight to the office. On the way to the office, they (well, Geet) bumped into someone. Before Geet could fall, her brother reached over and grabbed her arm. Maan was shocked to see Geet and some guy there. "Hey Maan! I didn't know you went to school here! I'm so glad I know at least one person here! Oh, I almost forgot! This is my brother, Dev. Dev, this is Maan." Maan interrupted Geet before she could start again, asking her if she needed any help. After showing Geet to the office, Maan started walking to his class when Miss Ahesha asked him to show Geet and Dev to their classes. On the way to their classes,
Geet, Maan, and Dev made small talk. After showing Dev to his classroom, Maan and Geet walked to their first class if the day, English.

To Be Continued...

P.S. I know it's short, but it's better than nothing, right?

Res its not spamming for cry out loud..

Wow girl looks like hoshiyar pur express is in full speed...do you think there will be a stop on the way?

Good start...Miss geet is super fast dude...and looks like Sir MSK is serious case...hummm

Dev ko sidha bhai bana dia...kiya kehne...

Next part jaldi jaldi...👏

Chick-Fil-A ..lol Im glad I know the places you're writing about ;)
Limeazishah... 😆 .. I read it .. and I'm thinking to my self.. that place/word seems weird.. then looked over it ..and I saw Minal's IF name- Limerance.. and then Azizah and Shaheda.. very clever!
The NAHIII ... I could almost imagine it in my head ..hehehehe ..
instead of haasi toh pahsi, it should be pislee to pahsi ;)
Interesting start!!

I hope you gave yourself a deadline for the next chapter😛..can't wait!!
Thanks Krishna!

oh shoot ..I should have reserved first.. didn't know Shaheda baji would come here first!!!

Originally posted by: Newdime

Res its not spamming for cry out loud..

Wow girl looks like hoshiyar pur express is in full speed...do you think there will be a stop on the way?

Good start...Miss geet is super fast dude...and looks like Sir MSK is serious case...hummm

Dev ko sidha bhai bana dia...kiya kehne...

Next part jaldi jaldi...👏

Thank you *takes a bow*