FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice

waiting to know her answer
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Posted: 14 years ago
good job piya . love you. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
In love with ur part

thnx 4 pm


update soon waiting for more

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks a ton dear friends. I really love reading ur comments. It was nice to see that each one of u were guessing what would b happening in the next part. Please continue to do so. It really encourages me.

Love- Piya

PART 24

Maan: Geet I love U. kya tum mujhe apni zindagi mein shaamil karogi?

Geet: (hugs maan) I love you too Maan. I love U too

Geet: Main ye tho nahi jaanti k insaan ko ek se zyaada zindagi milthe hain ya nahi aur agar milthe hain tho aane wali har ek zindagi main tumhare saath guzaarna chahungi . ( I don't know whether we get more than one life to live but if this is a reality I would like to share each of my life with u)

Maan smiles and tightens the hug

Geet: Thank you Maan. Thank you for making me feel so special. Duniya ki har ek ladki kahi na kahi yahi chahti hain k jab kabhi bhi usse koi propose kare toh wo proposal kuch aisa ho jisse k wo zindagi bhar yaad kare and Maan tumne wakai mein ye din mere liye kuch extra special bana diya hai. (Every girl in this world always dreams that whenever her Mr. Right will propose her he should make that day the most beautiful phase of her life n u have done exactly that)

Maan: Thank you toh mujhe kehna chahiye Geet. Tumne meri problem yun chutki bajakar solve kar di (Geet I should bthankful to u coz u solved my dilemma very easily)

Geet: (smiles) Kaisi problem Maan?

Maan: Ofho geet jaankar bhi anjaan kyun ban rahi ho?

Geet breaks the hug

Geet looks lovingly at Maan

Geet: Maan yun paheliyon mein baat karna bannd kardo aur mujhe saaf saaf batau (Maan pls speak clearly)

Maan: jaise k tum kuch jaanti hi nahi' khair agar tum phir bhi sunna chahti ho tho main keh deta hoon (As if u r totally unaware but still if u insist I will tell u)

Geet: (thinking) Tum yahi kehna chahte ho na k tumhe ye darr tha k main kahi tumhara proposal reject na kar du' ofho maan tumna bahut hi cute ho'ab jald hi ye baat keh dho phir main bhi tumse ye baat keh dungi k tum mujhe chahte ho ye tho mujhe pehle se hi pata tha kyunki maine tumhara cassette sun liya tha' ( I know u were thinking whether I will except ur proposal or not ' maan how could I reject ur proposal when I was already aware of it)

Maan: (understands what geet might b thinking) Geet kaha kho gayi

Geet: haan kuch nahi tum kuch keh rahe the na?

Maan: Haan' Main ye keh raha tha k tumne meri problem bade aasani se solve kardi' jaanti ho main kal raat se kitna confused tha'k main khwab se apne dil ki baat kaise kahu' u know na mujhe inn cheezo ka koi experience nahi hai' ( U know what geet I was so tensed k how would I tell my feelings to khwab'I don't hv any experience of proposing a girl)

Maan: Aur waise bhi khwab bahut hi sensitive ladki hai main nahi chahta tha k meri baat usse buri lage'lekin ab jab tumne haan kar di iska matlab hain k khwab bhi haan kardegi (Khwab is a very sensitive girl I didn't want to hurt her but now if u hv accepted the proposal then I m sure she will also agree)

Geet: Kya? Tho tumne jo kuch bhi abhi kaha wo sab khwab k liye tha?

Maan: Haan' tho tumhe kya laga?

Geet was trying to control her tears

Geet did not say anything

Maan goes and hugs Geet

Maan: Thanks Geet tum wakai mein meri sabse achhi friend ho(u r my best friend geet)

Geet: (thinking) Maan sirf friend mujhe toh laga tha k' ( only a friend maan I thought I was')

Maan breaks the hug

Maan: Toh kaho geet kaisa laga mera confession kya lagta hain khwab impress hogi ya nahi (So tell me did u like my confession n what do u think would b her reply)

Geet (tries to smile) khwab k jagah agar koi aur bhi hoti na toh wo bhi impress ho jaati maan (Any girl would say yes maan)

Maan: Okay Geet I need another favour from you

Geet: Haan tell

Maan: Geet mujhe lagta hain k khwab par Indian dresses kafi suit karenge aur issliye main uske liye kuch Indian attires kharedna chahta hoon' along with some jewellary ( I feel that Indian dresses will look really very good on khwab I want to purchase some attires for her)

Geet is completely lost

Maan: Geet tum sun rahi ho naa ( u r listening na)

Geet: Haan Maan

Maan: Toh main chahta hoon k meri life partner k liye jewellary n clothes select karne k liye tum meri madat karo ( so I want u to help me in this)

Geet: (sad) Main madat karu

Maan: Haan tum

Maan: Toh ye tai raha k hum kal shopping ko jaa rahe hai ( so it is a deal we r going for shopping tomorrow)

Geet: Hmm'

Maan: Tumhe bhook lagi hogina chalo kisi hotel mein jaakar khana khate hain (u must b hungry right come let's go n hv dinner)

Geet: Tumne abhi jo kuch bhi kaha usse mera peth bhar gaya hain

Maan: Kya matlab?

Geet: Mera matlab hain mujhe bhook nahi lag rahi main ghar jaana chahti hoon (I m nt hungry I want to go home)

Maan: okay as u wish

Maan drops Geet at her residence

Geet enters her house. She is very sad

Maan: Khahi ye zyaada toh nahi ho gaya' nahi geet tumhe apne pyar par bharosa hona chahiye 'aur main tumhe apne pyar pe bharosa karne pe majboor kar dunga ( Did I crossed my limits today'no geet even if this is the case u should hv complete faith n trust in ur love )

Maan: Tum thik kehti ho geet jis din main apne pyar ka izhaar tumse karunga wo din tum kabhi bhi bhool nahi paaogi' jo maine aaj tumse kaha ye toh bahut hi kum hain main tumhe tumhari zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat din gift karunga geet (u r right geet the day when actually I would b proposing u I will ensure to make it the most memorable moment of ur life)

Maan: Lekin usse pehle tumhe apni mohabbat par bharosa hona chahiye' tumhe ye vishwas hona chahiye k chaahe kitni bhi badi aandhi ya toofan humare darmiyaan kyun naa aaye lekin wo hume ek dusare se kabhi bhi judaa nahi kar paayegi ( but b4 that u will have to trust our relationship )

Maan: Main tumse ye vaada karta hoon geet k main tumhe iss baat ka yakin dilaunga k sachi mohabbat ko koi bhi kisi se dur nahi kar saktha aur jis din tumhe ye yakeen ho gaya main daave se keh saktha hoon k tum khud mujhse ye kahogi k maan main aapse pyar karti hoon (I m sure once u start trusting our relation u yourself will tell me about your feelings)

Maan: aur jis din tumne mujhse ye baat keh di main tumhe tumhari life ka ek aisa surprise dunga jise tum umr bhar apne palko pe sajaaye rakhogi'. ( as soon as u confess ur feelings I will give u the biggest surprise of ur life)

Maan: Bus kuch din aur geet' (it is a matter of few days)

Maan leaves

Geet enters her room and takes the cassette in which Maan had recorded his confession

She plays the cassette

She takes out one photograph of Maan and looks at it lovingly

With every word that was coming out from the tape tears were flowing down her cheeks

The tape stops

Geet: Ye kya ho gaya babaji' kal tak toh maan pe sirf aur sirf mera haqh tha toh phir aaj ye haqh kisi aur ka kaise ho gaya' maan toh sirf geet k liye bane hain naa toh phir aaj aap unhe mujhse kyun cheen rahe hain

Geet: (looks at his photo) Kya isi pyar ke dave aap karte the maan 'aap ko uss khwab ka pyar nazar aa gaya magar apni geet ka pyar nazar nahi aaya'aap toh dave karte the na k aap meri aakhon ko khuli kitab ki tarah pad sakthe hain kya aapke saare bathe jhoothe the?

Geet just couldn't control any longer she hugs his photo and falls on the bed and continuously goes on crying' Slowly she goes off to sleep

Next day

Geet gets up and sees a message from Maan on her mobile

Msg: Geet taiyar rehna aaj hum shopping k liye ja rahe hain' main tumhe pick karne aa raha hoon (b ready we r going for shopping I m coming to pick u up)

Geet: Nahi Maan mera pyar itna kamzoor nahi' agar tum mujhse sachi mohabbat karte ho tho duniya ki koi takaat tumhe mujhse cheen nahi sakthi ( no maan my love is not that fragile if u truly love me then no one can separate u from me)

Geet: Main tumhare saath shopping k liye zaroor aaungi' aur tumhari life partner k liye dresses select karne mein tumhari madat bhi karungi' agar humara pyar sachha hain tho hume koi bhi judaa nahi kar saktha ( I will surely cm with u n I will also help to select outfits for your life partner '.if our love is true then we will always b together)

Geet: Main tumhara intezaar karungi Maan' (I will wait for u maan)

Geet gets ready to go for shopping

Precap: Jism se ruh tak hain tumhare nishaan ban gaye tum meri zindagi'jabse tum ho mile jaanodil hain khile tum se baabastha hain har khushi'tum ho mera pyar tumse hain karaar tumkohi basaya maine aakhon mein tumse hain nasha tumse hain khuma tumko hi sajaaya maine khwabo mein 😳😳😳

NOTE: ok guys now b4 anyone of u start thinking that there would be a misunderstanding between maneet let me make it clear k aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga' Adaa dear u were asking na k why geet will confess first she is a girl and u have not heard a girl confessing first . Adaa if u look carefully then Maan has already confessed his feelings through the cassette it was geet who was playing games with him she should have immediately confessed her feelings as well but she did not do so another thing "khwab" was an imagination of geet n not maan hence she should b confident that there is no one else between them n maan is just playing a prank but somewhere or the other she has lost this faith. I m just creating situations which will make her trust her love again n then as soon as she realizes this she will confess

After 2 parts u will see Geet confessing n immediately in the next part Maan will give her the most special day of her life. So guys just chill maneet will always b together

Love -Piya

Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippee me the first one...
awesome part...
love it...
maan is making her jealous...
hope meera and yash will clear their misunderstanding...
precap looks interesting...😳😳
cont soon...

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome!!!!
awww poor geet... cant wait for geet's confession...
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesme part kya twist tha oh feeling sad for geet but its intresting
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Posted: 14 years ago
oww dat was really sad...
but it was an awesome udpate...
thanks for the PM...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update...👏
Eagerly waiting for geet confession😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...

loved that geet has full trust on their love...'

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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