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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay so I spent about 20 mins to think of this last episode.

I would really like to see some positive mood in the last episode after years of negativity.

Part 1: Damini enters Bundela house with a gift and sees Sanchi helping Mai and Dadda ji decorate the place and viewers find out that it is Chanda's remarriage with some guy. And the family has arranged it now that their views have changed. Damini asks Mai (Reformed Mai) where is Chandni 😳(Ichha's daughter) Mai call's her lovingly to meet her nani and is shown that Icchha's daughter is everybody's darling.

Part 2: Satya, Veer and Ichha coming out of a meeting in their office and Satya congratulating Ichha on a certain plan that she had just shown. (indicating Satya has reconciled with Bundelas and Ichha has joined their business and a big part of its groW*H 😎)

Veer Ichha leave and Satya smilingly gets a flashback.....(his mom was a servant in Bundela house and was accused of a theft and the entire family was thrown out of the house on that rainy day. His mother goes to get some food for them and meets with an accident. (Okay I have copied this idea from numerous hindi films😃) He takes care of his younger sister somehow. Later on it is revealed that the necklace was lying beneath the bed and Daddaji and family feels sad for throwing them out but cant find them now but finds out that the mother died that night. So Daddaji earnestly tries to search for the kids but cant find them. Daaddaji then (I am trying to redeem his character now😆) starts a charity in the name of the dead servant.(I could only come up with this😔). Satya doesnt know about it till Ichha tells him about the charity being run for years in the name of a loyal servant named "RADHA" Satya's mom😉. Satya has a change of heart. (Okay I am not doing justice to his role but somebody else please come up with a better plot here😒)

Part 3 At Jogi's house Raghu arrives with his son (Tappu and Raghu's) and meets Jogi and Divya cordially. A nice and sweet scene without any sadness. Jogi smiles and thinks he could have been this happy years before if Nani had not come in Tapasya's life. Then a scene is shown where Nani and Pushkar are living in a village and Nani telling Pushakr to get a job. Pushkar ...kuch toh kar.. The scene gets over and Jogi asks Raghu about Tappu. He tells her she is very happy these days,

Last Part (now dont kill me but as much as I hate Tapasya I would like to see her genuinely reformed. It is the last episode after all)

Tapasya teaching kids at Damini Pathshala and teaching them moral values (No pun intended 😉) and genuinely caring for those poor kids. She gets a flashback of how she had served a jail term for five years after she turned herself in admitting to her various crimes. She actually gets out reformed after all those years and decides to carry on Damini pathshala and show right path to those basti kids.

Okay I tried to incorporate all the characters here and also wanted to show that Veera and Ichha have started a new project in memory of Vansh.
Edited by spatty123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
ITS JUST FOR FUN😆
In my story i turn all the negative character into good
On seeing tapu child every one in the family is happy.veer is very emotional and the entire family is happy so i am not interested in destroying their happiness .IN REAL LIFE VEER loves tapu it also came in reel life . when they come to the home with tapu's child they notice that ichha leave the house tapu is happy first but after she getting veer's care she feels for ichha she realize the sacrifice of ichha and she went to jogi house and bring ichha back to bundela house and give ichha to veer. veer and ichha hug each other. after that they all live in Bundela house togather. now the season change tapu's child enjoy everyone's love in the Bundela family.ichha is now not happy she wants a child and she get it even though tapu's child is everyone's best so she hate her now tapu changes into ichha and ichha changes into tapu the serial goes longer and longer until veer become grandpa
Edited by ramalaks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Hi everybody,

This is the rest of the story of Uttaran which I have written.
Veer comes home and finds out that Ichcha has left. When he is wondering, where she has gone, there comes Mr. Rathod to claim that the baby is his. Mai, daddaji, and Veer are shocked.
Veer decides to go for a DNA test. That night, he accidentally sees the old medical reports and the prescription written by Dr. Soni and feels that Ichcha was right. Then he sees Ichcha's letter, reads it and gets emotional and breaks down. He feels that Tapasya has cheated everybody this time also. The next day, he goes for a DNA test and the result shows Rathod to be the father of the baby. Veer is totally devastated. Veer starts to search for Ichcha but in vain. He tries to contact her mobile but it is switched off.

Tapasya is finally exposed in front of all the family. In the presence of mai, daddaji, Umed, chanda, and kasakaka, and nani, Veer asks Tapasya why she lied to everyone as the baby is not his. Mai and daddaji are shattered. Umed tells that he always knew in his heart that Ichcha will never lie but couldn't help because evidences were against her that time. Veer shows them the old reports which Ichcha has hidden and tells them that Ichcha was right and she did not lie.

Mai faints on hearing that the baby is not Veer's. Daddaji bashes Tapasya and Nani and they are thrown out of Bundela's house. Tapni leave for Jogi Thakur's house along with the baby.

In the mean time, Ichcha along with her mother Damini goes to basti and stays there with anjum nani and her old friends. With her friends' help, she goes out of the area and opens a school again and works hard for the welfare of poor children but soon she finds out that she is pregnant which is a pleasant surprise for her and Damini. However, this time, she realises that she should not hide things and even though she has come out of Bundela's house, it is her responsibility to inform her husband Veer about her pregnancy. So she calls Veer from a public booth and tells him that she is pregnant with his child but cannot come back as his trust is already broken and she cant bear that.
Meanwhile, Tapasya feels guilty and regrets for what she has done. She thinks about Rathod and his love and realises that the little baby needs her real dad's love and decides that she should not deprive the tiny one from getting her father's love and remembers
how she had enjoyed her father's love when she was young. So she decides to return to
Rathod because the Bundelas will also never accept her. They were heart broken as this was a blow to them who were eagerly waiting for their Waaris.

Meanwhile, Jogi Thakur returns and comes to know everything from Divya. He calls up Rathod
and goes to meet him and gets to know the truth about Tapasya's relationship with him.
Daima who is also there has a talk with Jogi Thakur and they decide that they should
bring Rathod and Tapasya together. In a simple ceremony, Tapasya Thakur marries Rathod.
Nani returns to live with her son and bahu.
Veer's efforts to try Ichcha were in vain. Mai and daddaji feel bad for illtreating Ichcha and believing Tapasya.
One year later... Mai falls ill and is hospitalised and in the same hospital, Veer meets Ichcha and Damini both of them carrying babies in their hands. Of course, Ichcha had given
birth to a boy and a girl (Mai's Vansh and Veer's chotisi beti) and had come there for the babies' vaccination. Veer hugs the little ones and cries. He asks Ichcha to forgive him as she had already punished him by living away separately from him for one year. He takes them to Mai's room and mai who has already realised her folly and apologises to Ichcha. Ichcha too remembers her past when she used to long for her father's love when she was a small girl and decides to go back with Veer so that the kids can grow with the love and affection of both their parents' love.

Veer takes Ichcha and the babies home. Veecha's reunion was romantic and even more thrilling and it was so lovely to see them together. Veecha lived happily with their kids. This time, neither Mai nor daddaji insulted Ichcha She was given due respect as the bahu of the house. Damini went to live in basti with Anjum nani and she has got her own savings to lead her own respectful life.

Tapasya calls Ichcha and apologises to her for causing her all the troubles in life.
And this time, her apology was sincere. Her union with Rathod has changed her into a positive
character. And this way, Uttaran should end.

Edited by JJPJ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: JJPJ

Hi everybody,

This is the rest of the story of Uttaran which I have written.
Veer comes home and finds out that Ichcha has left. When he is wondering, where she has gone, there comes Mr. Rathod to claim that the baby is his. Mai, daddaji, and Veer are shocked.
Veer decides to go for a DNA test. That night, he accidentally sees the old medical reports and the prescription written by Dr. Soni and feels that Ichcha was right. Then he sees Ichcha's letter, reads it and gets emotional and breaks down. He feels that Tapasya has cheated everybody this time also. The next day, he goes for a DNA test and the result shows Rathod to be the father of the baby. Veer is totally devastated. Veer starts to search for Ichcha but in vain. He tries to contact her mobile but it is switched off.

Tapasya is finally exposed in front of all the family. In the presence of mai, daddaji, Umed, chanda, and kasakaka, and nani, Veer asks Tapasya why she lied to everyone as the baby is not his. Mai and daddaji are shattered. Umed tells that he always knew in his heart that Ichcha will never lie but couldn't help because evidences were against her that time. Veer shows them the old reports which Ichcha has hidden and tells them that Ichcha was right and she did not lie.

Mai faints on hearing that the baby is not Veer's. Daddaji bashes Tapasya and Nani and they are thrown out of Bundela's house. Tapni leave for Jogi Thakur's house along with the baby.

In the mean time, Ichcha along with her mother Damini goes to basti and stays there with anjum nani and her old friends. With her friends' help, she goes out of the area and opens a school again and works hard for the welfare of poor children but soon she finds out that she is pregnant which is a pleasant surprise for her and Damini. However, this time, she realises that she should not hide things and even though she has come out of Bundela's house, it is her responsibility to inform her husband Veer about her pregnancy. So she calls Veer from a public booth and tells him that she is pregnant with his child but cannot come back as his trust is already broken and she cant bear that.
Meanwhile, Tapasya feels guilty and regrets for what she has done. She thinks about Rathod and his love and realises that the little baby needs her real dad's love and decides that she should not deprive the tiny one from getting her father's love and remembers
how she had enjoyed her father's love when she was young. So she decides to return to
Rathod because the Bundelas will also never accept her. They were heart broken as this was a blow to them who were eagerly waiting for their Waaris.

Meanwhile, Jogi Thakur returns and comes to know everything from Divya. He calls up Rathod
and goes to meet him and gets to know the truth about Tapasya's relationship with him.
Daima who is also there has a talk with Jogi Thakur and they decide that they should
bring Rathod and Tapasya together. In a simple ceremony, Tapasya Thakur marries Rathod.
Nani returns to live with her son and bahu.
Veer's efforts to try Ichcha were in vain. Mai and daddaji feel bad for illtreating Ichcha and believing Tapasya.
One year later... Mai falls ill and is hospitalised and in the same hospital, Veer meets Ichcha and Damini both of them carrying babies in their hands. Of course, Ichcha had given
birth to a boy and a girl (Mai's Vansh and Veer's chotisi beti) and had come there for the babies' vaccination. Veer hugs the little ones and cries. He asks Ichcha to forgive him as she had already punished him by living away separately from him for one year. He takes them to Mai's room and mai who has already realised her folly and apologises to Ichcha. Ichcha too remembers her past when she used to long for her father's love when she was a small girl and decides to go back with Veer so that the kids can grow with the love and affection of both their parents' love.

Veer takes Ichcha and the babies home. Veecha's reunion was romantic and even more thrilling and it was so lovely to see them together. Veecha lived happily with their kids. This time, neither Mai nor daddaji insulted Ichcha She was given due respect as the bahu of the house. Damini went to live in basti with Anjum nani and she has got her own savings to lead her own respectful life.

Tapasya calls Ichcha and apologises to her for causing her all the troubles in life.
And this time, her apology was sincere. Her union with Rathod has changed her into a positive
character. And this way, Uttaran should end.


good work 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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my version...

they all come frm hospital...veer wants to give kangan to mai so she can give it to tappu as it belongs to her but when he was serching it his reports falls over..he was so shocked and remembers ichhya..then he goes chupke se for DNA cos he knew if tappu knew what he was up to then nani and tappu will do anything..DNA reports proves he is not a dad..he exposed her and i really want to see mai and dadaji' faces after that..😛😛 tapsya cries and nani will ask "tappu beta tumne hamse ye bat kyun chupai..mai ise bhi fix kar deti..jarur isme bhi usi chuhiya hi koi chal hai...drugs wagairah diya hoga😳. becouse of the small baby they don't throw her out like last time but ask her to leave ...she goes to jogi's house and lives there..rathod comes there to meet baby ( even they say sid's daughter I want this some kind of dream...it should be rathod's baby) and mum..and he says i am going to wait for you when you are ready...finnaly she fall's for his love and all the support in past time..tappu alwayes wanted to be loved..and realised her daughter's happiness with her dad (rathoud) is the most important thing.but i want some TRAP's nok-jhonk scene. if some can handel iss belagam ki ghodi it's only rathud.
in b-house everybody is so emmbressed..they remember everythig she done for house even she risked her life..they all go to basti asked for forgiveness ...ichchya being ichchya... she forgives them but wants to continiue her damini pathshala..damini is doing her catering work which is very succesfull but money goes towards pathsala and poor kids..
ichchya gives birth to twins one's name is vansh and another is girl..after that dadaji, mai and baba all go to tirthayatra..
vechya AND TRAP all become friends and they show tappu and ichya's daughter's playing together like they used to..
Edited by nep3 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Uttaran should end Icha, starting her own business and make it successful that she become more richer then Thakurs and bundelas, so any one could not dare to see Damini as a poor lady... All will get jealous inclusing pushkar nani, damini, maie and daddaji... Tapasya should come and work in Ichas office as a kaam wali bae.


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