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Originally posted by: -Srushti-

Dhoondho isko ..Pakdo peeto...
Mere Kesuda ko bana diya gheeto
Bechara...Gulaal ke pyaar ka maara...
Arti ne 'househusband' ka thamaa diya naara...
Ab mein nahi dekhungi Veer zaara
(chooory...koi aur line jaa nahi rahi thi😳)
and artibarty...my bhajiwalil..did you make him wash your bhajiya kadai and wok too
What brutal thing you are...

But I liked the dialogues..the atmo..the gharellu gharelu thing...Gullu's tears and Kesuda nears😳
Aweeesome😛

Mujhe to yeh kahani original se bhi jyaadaa pasand hai... What a flow yaar.. And I like the imagination you create in me... You should build your career on writing man... Simply mindblowing.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -Srushti-

Dhoondho isko ..Pakdo peeto...
Mere Kesuda ko bana diya gheeto
Bechara...Gulaal ke pyaar ka maara...
Arti ne 'househusband' ka thamaa diya naara...
Ab mein nahi dekhungi Veer zaara
(chooory...koi aur line jaa nahi rahi thi😳😳😳😳)
and artibarty...my bhajiwalil..did you make him wash your bhajiya kadai and wok too
What brutal thing you are...

But I liked the dialogues..the atmo..the gharellu gharelu thing...Gullu's tears and Kesuda nears😳😳😳😳
Aweeesome😛

Originally posted by: Yash141

Mujhe to yeh kahani original se bhi jyaadaa pasand hai... What a flow yaar.. And I like the imagination you create in me... You should build your career on writing man... Simply mindblowing.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -Srushti-

Dhoondho isko ..Pakdo peeto...
Mere Kesuda ko bana diya gheeto
Bechara...Gulaal ke pyaar ka maara...
Arti ne 'househusband' ka thamaa diya naara...
Ab mein nahi dekhungi Veer zaara
(chooory...koi aur line jaa nahi rahi thi😳)
and artibarty...my bhajiwalil..did you make him wash your bhajiya kadai and wok too
What brutal thing you are...

But I liked the dialogues..the atmo..the gharellu gharelu thing...Gullu's tears and Kesuda nears😳
Aweeesome😛

LOL 😆... Srush, u know what i like the most..? When u sneak in completely out of place lines to the verse coz 'koi aur line jaa nahi rahi thi' 🤣 🤣 🤣 So sweet and hillarious yaar.. I read your update on ASR waala forum y'day n I literally choked with laughter 🤣 🤣 U have done the same there too.. I thought of visiting that every wednesday jst to read your update..😳

@Arti
Beautiful chappiii yaar...!!!!!
I will come back after sometimes then i will give my comment...!!!

Me like like liiikke.. 😳 😳

Originally posted by: arti07

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<div>so sweet but my ff is liked by only 12-13 ppl next time sirf unko apna chappii pm kar dungi...😉kaun yanha post karni k mehanat kare!!!

Hey arti sweetz, maine to like kiya 😳 Aur hamesha karoongi... And I'm sure, everyone likes it a lottt... You write that much good, ppl smtimes might forget to click on that like box as they get lost in your story 😳 Dnt stop posting yaar.. Your ff and Srush's WWW NP is the only consolation we have after a Talli dose, Gulaal ki attitude dose aur SP ka stupidity dose 😡

Originally posted by: Yash141

LOL 😆... Srush, u know what i like the most..? When u sneak in completely out of place lines to the verse coz 'koi aur line jaa nahi rahi thi' 🤣 🤣 🤣 So sweet and hillarious yaar.. I read your update on ASR waala forum y'day n I literally choked with laughter 🤣 🤣 U have done the same there too.. I thought of visiting that every wednesday jst to read your update..😳

Owww...Yashu that is soo sweet of you...and here is somebody who is not liking my shayaris '*looks at bhajiyawali😡*...ya do come there...generally I just post there and dont reply to all comments..but if you come .we will have a blast😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Yash141

Hey arti sweetz, maine to like kiya 😳 Aur hamesha karoongi... And I'm sure, everyone likes it a lottt... You write that much good, ppl smtimes might forget to click on that like box as they get lost in your story 😳 Dnt stop posting yaar.. Your ff and Srush's WWW NP is the only consolation we have after a Talli dose, Gulaal ki attitude dose aur SP ka stupidity dose 😡

Hey it is not mine..it is OURs...we all are a part of it...and me soo glad you guys are so enthu about it😳