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Posted: 14 years ago

Dear God,
Please help our sweet frnd arti in completing her chapter 3 as soon as possible,we r dying to read that...we will be very thankful to u for helping her...thanku God...amen...!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krea


Dear God,
Please help our sweet frnd arti in completing her chapter 3 as soon as possible,we r dying to read that...we will be very thankful to u for helping her...thanku God...amen...!!!!!!

Cute.. dont worry we will get to read CH - 3 tomorrow..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Tomorrow...oh no i cant wait but i will try...!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗arti such a sweet n nyc FF u ve wrote,,,,,but sad i ws nt aware of it!!!!!
oh MODI's such a familiar surname u ve given to ths family!!!!😉😆
chapter 1...
awsome start gal...😳
luvd d way u ve sketched d scene b/w kes-gul!!!!!kesuda throwing gulaal on gullu before any 1 else,,,,☺️ "yeh sindoor kanha se lagva liya "😍
chapter 2...
ohhh kesar is a rockstar!!!!!😳
hw u try to put gulaal's feeling during dat song is simply commendable...both wer connecting to each other sum how!!!!☺️
all in all both chapters wer awsome...cont soon,,,,,i luv ur simple writing style!!!!!😳
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Chapter 3

Gulaal is in the hospital she is attending patients but she is singing piyu maari ..this song has realy stucked her mind and she kept wondering who sung this song

Vasant leaves for hospital and forgets the important file.in his way he remember he has left the file at home and calls kesar

Kesar " ji vasantbha "

Vasant "Kesar mein ek file ghar par bhul aya hu plz modi hospital laake de dena "

Kesar " thek hai vasantbha "

Vasant reaches hospital but doesn't find gulaal anywhere he inquires a nurse and nurse informs him she is in OT

Vasant deides to meet her after sometime

Meanwhile kesar arrives at hospital and gives vasantbha file

Vasant thanks him

Gulaal comes out of the OT she heads towards trustee cabin thinking vasant might have come

Kesar and gulaal are in corridor and they passes without seeing each other kesar walks away and in joyous mood whistles piya maari o piyaari tune

Gulaal who was walking away heards the whistles and turn back to see kesar

Kesar is whisteling and gulaal runs to find him. But cant find him as he has already entered the lift she stands there quietly

Vasant comes there and put hands in her shoulder gulaal turns back and gives a cold smile as she is still thinking she has missed the person whose voice has stucked in her thought in her heart

Vasant said " kya baat hai gulaal tum kuch soch rahi ho "

Gulaal said "nahi abhi ek ladka ek dhun whistle kar raha that bas wahi soch rahi hun

Vasant said " hmm .."

Gulaal said vasant "humari shaadi k baat "

Vasant" haa gulaal aaj mein shaadi k baat karunga"

Gulaal comes home and informs her room partner that she has met the guy who sing that song

Mirya asked "kab"

Gulaal "aaj subah par uska chehra nahi dekh paayi nahi to usko pakad kar seedhe tammy k samne kar deti hai kyu tammy"

Tammy said koi fayda nahi uski ek witch kind of grlfrn.woh kisko uske pass aane nahi degi

Gulaal laughed "to yeh lovestory bhi banane se pehle khatam ho gayi bechari tum "

Mirya "chodo tammy ko usko to kisi se bhi pyaar ho jaata hai tum hume apni lovestroy batao hamesha bach jaate ho aaj baatani padgi "

Gulaal "kya batau vasant hospital mein trustee hai dhedh saal pehle hum mile he was a nice man perfect gentleman we were good frn ek din usne kaha tum mujhe achi lagti ho I think I love u aur meine bhi haan kardi naa karne ka koi reason nahi tha"

Mirya bus itna hi"

Gulaal "haan aur kya"

Mirya " matlab no nokjhok no nafrat koi rejection koi nakhre kuch bhi nahi"

Gulaal" nahi"

Mirya "kitne boring lovestroy hai lovestory to tab great hoti hai jab thodi nokjhok ho zid ho paagalpan ho denial obseesion ho passion ho ?har ladki k great lovestory to hone hi chahiye right tammy"

Tammy" right"

Gulaal" i m not interested"

Here vasant had decided to talk panba about his marry issue he goes to panba room kesar is lying on panba lap carelessly and panba is lecturing him to become a good responsible man like vasntbha and kesar as usual is not listening instead he is busy chatting through his cell and he is nodding his head at every pause..vasant enters panba room kesar gets up..

Vasant says " panba mujhe aapse bahut jaruri baat karni hai"

Panba say" haan bolo"

Vasant hesitatley" baa aap meri shaddi karwana chahti hai"

Kesar and panba smiles

Panba "haan par tu hi mana kar raha hai par ab agar tu tayyar hai to mein abhi Jamuna aur diaba aur meri saare aas pass k friends se kah dungi tujhe lakho mein ek ladki laakar de denge"

Vasant" par baa mujhe who lakho mein ek ladki mil gayi hai"

Kesar roll his eyes in disbelief "what"

Panba gives a confused look" kaun hai who"

Vasant baa "doctor hai mere hospital mein 1..1/2 years se janta hun use bahut achi hai ghar bahar dono kaam bahut ache se kar leti hai"

Panba "aur"

Vasant "aur bado ka samman karma jante hai parivaar saath lekar chalegi"

Panba "aur"

Vasant "Bengali hain"

Panba is shocked to hear that

Kesar happily says vasantbha "ap intercaste marriage karoge"

Panba looks at kesar

Kesar change his look pretending to be angry" kya vasantbha ap intercaste marriage karma chahto ho"

Panba" kesar tu chup kar vasant tu kya kah raha hai who Bengali hai non vegetarian hum shudh shakahari hai mere ghar mein non vegeterain ladki kaise aa sakti hai"

Vasant "don't worry baa who ghar mein bilkul non vegeterain nahi banyegi who to vegetarian bana chahiti thi par meine mana kar diya "

Panba "par vasant tune intercaste ladki hi kyu chuni ab mein jamunakaki aur diaba se kya kahungi ??"

Vasant was expecting this attitude as he knew his mother was traditional though he knew she wont mind she was upset about the taunt she will get from diaba and jamuna kaki and from her frn circle

Vasant said "baa I love her"

Panba said angrily "mujhe hamesha lagta tha kesar hi aisa kuchh kar sakta hai par tu"

Panba and vasant were upset kesar saw both of them and thought to handle the situation in his own way

He intevens "panba aapne mujhse asi ummeed kaise ki apne mere perspective ko itna narrow kaise kar diya"

Panba rolled her eyes and said "what narrow prespective"

Kesar naughtly said "haan mein kyu apne ap ko India mein restrict karu whole world is mine saare dunoya meri hai baa"

Panba said" matlab"

Kesar baa "meinbhi aapko apni brazilian grlfrn se milwana chahta tha ab jab vasantbha apni pyaar k bare mein bata rahe hain to mujhe bhi honsetly apne pyaar k bare mein batana chahiye"

Panba said "kya"

Kesar "haan baa bahut cute hai mujhe achi lagti hai

Panba "tu sach kah raha hai"

Kesar "haa baa ekdum sach

Vasant was surprised and decided kesar to handle the situation

Kesar "ghabraiye nahi woh bhi poke beef venison apke kitchen mein nahi banayegi hum log uske liye alag se kitchen build kar denge aur woh sharab bilkul chod degi bas kabhi kabhi wine pee legi"

aur baa mini skirt to pehen hi legi..shayad??.. bus aap haan kar do"

Panba who lost all her control started yelling at kesar" mujhe pata tha yeh ladka kuch naa kuch bevkufi jarur karega ab tu mujhe is ghar mein ek mini skirt aur wine peene waali bahu lane ko kah raha hai seekh apne vasant se char jhapad padenge saara pyaar nikal jayege"

Kesar" par baa"

Panba "nahi abhi mawari k samne kasam khani hogi is ghar me tu sirf Indian girl leke aayega"

Vasant interrupts "baa gulaal"

Panba replies "beta gulaal k parents se kah do hum kal unse milne aa rahe hain"

Kesar and vasant secretly shares smiles

Panba looks at kesar and pull his ears "tu kyu has raha hai chal abhi mawari k samne kasam kha "

and she takes him to pooja ghar

Kesar "baa jor se mat pakdo nahi to foreign to kya talsagra se bhi koi nahi aayegi aapke bete k liye"

He looks back at vasant and winks his eyes

Vasant sees kesar give him a flying kiss

Vasant immediately wants to inform gulaal .he calls gulaal and share this great news

Gulaal is highly exited "sach vasant panba maan gayi"

Vasant "manana hi pada kesar hai naa usne manva k hi choda panba ko"

Vasant "ab tum mummy papa ko jaldi bula lo"

Gulaal says "haan abhi call karke bula leti hun"

Vasant "aur haan kal saffron color k saari pehehna"

Gulaal "haan pata hai tumhari maa ko yeh color bahut pasand hai aur tumhe bhi aur tabhi tum logo k ne apne chote bhai k naam kesar rakha hai 50 baar yeh baat sun chuki hun mein but mujhe yeh rang bilkul pasand nahi"

Vasant" to phir pasand karne lago aur agar nahi karogi to kesar haina who tumhe apne rang se pyaar karma seekha hi dega and he says I love u and I will wait for tomorrow"

Gulaal puts the phone down is extremely happy

Kesr enters in vasant room

Kesar vasantbha "aapne bahut cheating ki hai mujhse saari secret baatein sun lete hai aur mujhe apke pyaar k bare mein kuch nahi bataya"

Vasant "toh loser kaun hua tumhe dhedh saal tak nahi pata chala loser aur khud ko cool dude kehte ho"

Kesar" not fair vasantbha abhi milwaao"

Vasant" nahi abhi so jao aur kal shaam char baje tayyar rehna bhulna nahi "

Kesar thek hai and retires to bed

Next day gulaal greets poonam and revji her parents and everyone is busy with the preparation

Poonam "gulaal tum khush hona"

Gulaal "haan maa aapne to vasant ko dekha hai aap to unhe pasand karti hai"

Poonam "haa woh bahut acha ladka hai bus ab uski family bhi achi ho"

At 4 clock vasant panba rewa sudha raman and their 8 year old son sunny arrives at gulaal residence

Gulaal comes in saffron saari and greets panba

Panba see gulaal and all her doubts and suspicion disappears she was the perfect bride for vasant the bride she always wanted for her son

Poonam and revji greeted other family members and offered them tea and snacks

Then panba said "hume aapki ladki bahut pasand hai hum jald se jald use apne ghar k bahu banana chahete hain"

Gulaal shyly walks in and elder member in the family discuss about the engagement ceremony

Vasant comes behind her and talk in private" toh madam ab aap jald se jald humare paas aa rahi hai"

Gulaal haan

Then gulaal asks "kesar kanha hai tum to kah rahe the who bhi aayega"

Vasant "kesar aisa hi hai kah to nikla tha time par pahunch jauga par kanhi apne frns k saath baatein kar raha hoga ??..aane do batata hun use"

Gulaal smiled

Here kesar was playing squash with Vicky kesar won and said" tu hamesha mujhse haarne k liye kyu khelta hai"

Vicky "oye jyada uchal mat time time k baat hai aaj tera time hai kal mera hoga"

Kesar suddenly remembered he is suppose to be at gulaal'house he said "time ???Vicky time kya hua hai"

Vicky "6.15 "

Kesar " damm it we are getting late hume vasant bha k sath jaana tha I hate u idiot tune yaad kyu nahi dilaya"

Vicky "oye mein kaise yaad dilate"

Kesar and Vicky were in hurry and they were fighting in the car "rehne de beer pene k yaad rehti udhar mangne k yaad rehti hai aur vasantbha k saath jaana hai yeh yaad nahi dila sakta hai idiot ab agar late hue to vasantbha k jute akele mein nahi khauga tujhe bhi khane padege"

Vicky "haan par drive slowly yaar kanhi jaldi k chakkar mein name k aage late naa lag jaaye"

Kesar" tu chupkar time nahi hai"?and he was driving really fast and carelessly

Meanwhile vasant family take leave and say we will tell u about the engagement ceremony in day or two and then poonam and revji decides to go for shopping ?

..mirya comes and congrats gulaal and say "I want a treat lets go to pizza hut "

Gulaal say" but car mom dad le gaye hai"

Mirya" koi baat nahi hum tammy k bike se jayenge"

Mirya drive the bike and gulaal sits behind

In the corner of the road mirya accidentally takes a wrong turn and gets hit by kesar's car and kesar was also driving very fast ??gulaal and mirya fell down from the bike and mirya gets a injury in legs and hands

Kesar comes out of the car and see his headlight is broken he knows its not his fault and in frustration he picks fight with gulaal and mirya

He says "oh damm u broke my headlight ?..u know how costly it is aur tum ladkiyon ko licence kaun de deta hai"

Gulaal who didn't knew it was mirya fault saw mirya injured and kesar fighting with her lost her temper

She came near and slapped kesar really hard and said " tum bade baap k bigadi hui ladke apne aap ko samjhte kya ho ek to uska khoon bah raha hai maafi mangna to door ulta chila rahe ho u ppl are disgusting"

Kesar is shocked and gets adamant he said angrily " how dare u hit me u don't know who I am"

Gulaal " koi saukh nahi hai mujhe yeh janane ka tum kaun ho or kya ho"

Traffic constable who watched whole incident came near and say " madam kya hua yeh ladka tang kar raha hai"

Gulaal says" ji isne jaanbhuj k humse accident kiya hai"

Kesar say" jhoot bol rahi "

Traffic constable said "aye tum mere saath chalo madam aap apni frn ko le kar jaiye and he calls a auto gulaal and mirya sit in auto and kesar and gulaal looks at each other angrily and gulaal goes away

After that traffic constable say "kyu re bahut hero ban raha tha chal licence dikha

Kesar shows the licence

Traffic constable "abhi sirf 20 saal ka hai "

Kesar "shaadi karne nahi jaa raha drive kar raha hun driving licence 18 years mein mil jaata hai"

Traffic constable "jyada shyna nahi banana ka"

Kesar par "galti meri nahi hai wo wrong direction se aa rahe the"

Traffic constable " yeh kisne kaha"

Kesar khud hi dekh lijeye " wo right hand side se drive kar rahe the yeh America ya switzerland thodha na hai"

Traffic constable nahi " India hai yanha right ho ya left madam log hamesha right hoti hai samjha cha lab challan bhar"

Vicky intervenes and bribes constable

Kesar is really frustrated and is boling in anger

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks eveyone for ur support and appreciation ...it means alot😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arti..Arti..loved each n every bit...love u..n u added squash..hahaha..n finally JK is back...n everything is just beautiful n enjoyable love u..Arti..mujhe apne fans ke list mein jama karlo..
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOL...😆...I love ur FF dear...

Kesar and gulaal are in corridor and they passes without seeing each other kesar walks away and in joyous mood whistles piya maari o piyaari tune: this scene reminds me Dilwale dulhaniya lejayenge...

"kitne boring lovestroy hai lovestory to tab great hoti hai jab thodi nokjhok ho zid ho paagalpan ho denial obseesion ho passion ho …har ladki k great lovestory to hone hi chahiye right tammy"... :😆You got it...Haa yaar it was a boring love story(Vasant & Gulaal)😆


Kesar "ghabraiye nahi woh bhi poke beef venison apke kitchen mein nahi banayegi hum log uske liye alag se kitchen build kar denge aur woh sharab bilkul chod degi bas kabhi kabhi wine pee legi"

aur baa mini skirt to pehen hi legi …..shayad…….. bus aap haan kar do"___________: WOW I totally love this scene...soo funny...hahaha Brazilian girl friend..."Bahut cute hai".🤣 🤣


She came near and slapped kesar really hard and said " tum bade baap k bigadi hui ladke apne aap ko samjhte kya ho ek to uska khoon bah raha hai maafi mangna to door ulta chila rahe ho u ppl are disgusting" : Yehh...first slap...🥳...Now tell me how many slaps are waiting for Kesar...🤢

I can't wait for ur next chapter......OMG i'm addicted to read ur ff...😍

Thanks Arti...


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Originally posted by: chweetu

Arti..Arti..loved each n every bit...love u..n u added squash..hahaha..n finally JK is back...n everything is just beautiful n enjoyable love u..Arti..mujhe apne fans ke list mein jama karlo..

oye i m your fan ab tumhare emoticons ko dekh kar lagta hai apne chapters mein add karlu...😉
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Originally posted by: chweetu

Arti..Arti..loved each n every bit...love u..n u added squash..hahaha..n finally JK is back...n everything is just beautiful n enjoyable love u..Arti..mujhe apne fans ke list mein jama karlo..


Yeahhh Our JK z back.....Count me in ur fans list...

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