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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krea

Arti...awsome job yaar...i luved it so much...fab,so sweet n beautiful chapiii...!!!!!!
I cant stop my laugh...when i was reading..."toh kya karu tum dono ko utha kar phake do"n"agar beer pini hai to aa jao"...hehehehe...
In mehandi...kesar in white n Gulaal in green...what a beautiful combination yaar...i luved it as GReen n WHite r my fav...!!!!!!!
On saadi day when gulaal sisters take the mojari of kesar instead of vasanth n ran away n kesar after them saying its mine n enters in gulaal room n saw the gulaal n their eyes r like kho gaye hai ek dusre me...i felt like that mai bhi kho gayi hu es chappiii me...
N after that kesar wears the mojri of vasanth...n these all indiates that KESAR n GULAAL r made for each other...!!!!!!!
Superb yaar Arti...I love u...!!!!!
Thanku so much for such a beautiful[Gulaal],sweet,hot n cute[Kesar]'s story...!!!!!!
N lastly we need the bonus chapiii...!!!!!!!!

thanks dear i will try 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Ohhh...I loved it...the chappie had so many high points. Some of the romantic scenes were sooo gud...u had me imagining the whole thing...Gulaal being caught by Kesar and Gulaal turning to see Kesar first...WOWIE! Some dialogues really cracked me- "Tum dono ko uthakar phenkdun" and "beer peena hai toh aa jao" 🤣

I am so xcited...aagey kya hoga...jaan ne ke liye karte rahiye Arti ka intezaar.

thanks dear u sure naa its not boring !
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeah 5th chapter....

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Sonu is frustrated "arey to kya kar raha hai yaar patthar kyu phekh raha hai"

Kesar" to kya karu tum dono ko uthaa kar phek du"

😆 Your Kesar is soo funny yaar...😉


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Gulaal starts dancing and soon she is lost in her dance she dance really fast suddenly she slip and falls in arm of kesar who has recently entered her house Kesar and gulaal looked at each other and then kesar saw his white shirt…its imprinted with gulaal mehendi…he can see the two hand imprints in his shirt gulaal saw the imprint and then looked at her menhendi its completely ruined she is disappointed ...and kesar is disgusted...I love this scene...☺️
one of the elder woman said yeh to bahut bura hua mehendi ko bigadana nahi chahiye...Is this our JK??????
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At night gulaal is looking at her mehendi that is completely spoilt and vasant name is erased from her hand....ohhh poor Vasant
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Jamuna kaki says in between "par humare khandan mein kabhi prem vivaah nahi hua humare yanha bado k kehna mana janta hai....yeahhh JK's first dialogue...
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Kesar said "to pehle batana tha na mein slipper pehen k aata ab mein kya karu"...

Rewa reply " teri mojiri nahi idiot vasantbha ki ……gulaal bhabhi k sister chura sakti hain…… rasm hoti hai"...

Rest of the girl goes to steal vasant mojiri and in confusion picks kesar mojiri….

Kesar looks at his mojiri and runs after the girl saying" yeh meri mojiri hai "

This scene was really funny yaar...


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Poonam replied "kyunki ab tumhara chehra sabse pehle tumhara dulha dekhega"...

Suddenly door open with a bang

Gulaal uncover her face……….truns around and see kesar is standing ….

Kesar has come there in search of his mojiri he stares gulaal and both are uneasy to see each other...

OMG...Now I feel like......I love ur 5th chapter...

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We want 6th chapter



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

kiran geesh siree shallu updated... come and face the tomatoes😳😳😳 u know u ppl are behind it

Now tell me who is throwing tomatoes??...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I do not words to express how beautiful is your FF APSMRD, Can not wait for 6th chapter. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

updated piyu for u made our gulaal bengali 😳and dont worry i will put all the scene u demanded😉(sooner or later)
p.s. i m not bengali isliye plz bear my ignorance about the rituals

OMG Arti😳...Thanks..lucky me😉..well Bannerjees are supposed to be bengali brahmins with lots of bengali rituals as a part of their daily life..Also I loved chapter5 awesome girl...I don't believe you have so much knowledge about Bengali rituals everything was spot on...CHEERS ARTI MADE MY DAY...⭐️

Hey just one interesting thing post marriage the dulha dulhan in a bengali wedding sit together the whole night before the vidai...and the groom and bride's family sit with them and there is a kind of competion onm both sides with songs and poems and lots of teasing occurs..THIS IS KNOWN AS BASHOR GHOR..and the bride's sister then demands money from the groom's side to allow them to get up from that place...and proceed for the vidai...even the bride and groom are supposed to sing songs😳

Well wickedians Time to start our nxt campaign

ARTI NE KIYA kESAR GULAAL JODI KA ITNA INTERESTING REMIX

HAMARE SABRA KA INTEHAN MAT LO...JALDI SE UPDATE KARO CHAPTER NO SIX👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
Arti..Arti..loved ur story telling...n d suspense n d tension between kes-gul..Arre..yaar..thu ne tho chun chun ke kesar ko do different moods mein dikha..rahi..hai...that was just awesome n brilliant..abhi shadi..nahin huyi...n usse pehele...deeyarvatoo..ka symptoms...loved it..Aarti..n d perfect..use of d comic sense...just great dear..ur FF is crossing d heights...chapie..by chapie..dear..loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

kiran geesh siree shallu updated... come and face the tomatoes😳😳😳 u know u ppl are behind it



Now..who is there to throw tamatars...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Now..who are there to throw tamatars...

siree😊 ...loved the emoticon.👏...Kisme itni himmat k hamare hote huye Arti pe tamatar pheken.😉..Yaarv ARTI KO KYA HO GAYA HAI😲...She has done a fabulous job⭐️...can't stop reading this FF😳..chapter six ..jaldi lao.😃..we want chapter 6...SIREE KEEP SPAMMING😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

siree😊 ...loved the emoticon.👏...Kisme itni himmat k hamare hote huye Arti pe tamatar pheken.😉..Yaarv ARTI KO KYA HO GAYA HAI😲...She has done a fabulous job⭐️...can't stop reading this FF😳..chapter six ..jaldi lao.😃..we want chapter 6...SIREE KEEP SPAMMING😆


Piu...🤗...thanks yaar..arti..ne kahana..dekhno ko..tho kaise mana kar sathi hoon..mein...😳😳..n yeah..arti..is seriously doing fab...but really..she is giving us a really great treat na...😆😆..n yes..arti..jaldi..akar..chapter 6 publish karo..we want chapter 6..we want chapter 6...
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