Ajab Leher Hai Meri Padosi l Harshiya Karanika l

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Hii guys!I'm back with my third FF!


Link to the FF's facebook page - http://www.facebook.com/pages/Ajab-Leher-Hai-Meri-Padosi-FF/135935259818885


Links to my previous FFs:

Ek Anokhi Ladki Ki Anokhi Zindagi
Part 1 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1649649
Part 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1650321
Part 3 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1650377

Girls V Boys
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1699724


This FF is about Harshiya and Karanika. I will be doing the Character Sketch and Intro later :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay!!! Noori, can't w8!!! xxx
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CHARACTER SKETCH


Kalpana Kaushik
Kalpana is really into fashion and style. She lives a luxurious life in New Delhi. She loves her sister and mother very much. She has her own fashion studio named Kaushik Fashion Studios.


Kangana Kaushik
Kangana isn't much of a fashionista , she lives a normal life in Old Delhi as a typical Indian girl. She loves her sister and her step - mother very much , though her step mother doesn't love her. She is older than Kalpana by just a year, they have the same father but different mothers. Kangana's mother died when Kangana was born, so Kangana's dad remarried Kalpana's mother. Kangana works as a journalist. She is scared of her step-mother.


Amrita Kaushik
Amrita is Kalpana 's mother and Kangana's step mother. She is really sweet towards Kalpana but she is mean towards Kangana. She is always planning ruses against Kangana.


Rajeev Khanna
Rajeev is a business tycoon of New Delhi. The whole city knows him. He is very arrogant and he wants everyone to lead a happy life. He runs a fashion studio which is called Neelu Fashion Studios. The Kaushiks are their business rivals.


Ranveer Khanna
Ranveer spends most of his time in Old Delhi, because it's a nice place to play in. He is struggling for a job and always goes for interviews, but he is never appointed.


Neelu Khanna
Neelu is Ranveer and Rajeev's mom. She loves them both dearly and can do anything for their happiness . She owns the fashion studios.



INTRO


This is a story about two families which live in a strange place. One side of their houses face Old Delhi, and one side faces New Delhi. The Khanna's have recently moved in. Rajeev and Ranveer will meet Kangana and Kalpana and fall in love. This story is about how opposites attract.


*ATTENTION*
If any new characters enter the story then I will give a photo and description of them. :)

Edited by -Noorii- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊😊Super awesome... i mean i loved it Noorie!!! its like wonderful!!! hmmm... must say... ur' a good director n producer!! awesome..n nice name for d show! ALHMP! :)😊
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EPISODE 1

It's 6am in the morning.
Kangana had to do a night shift so she just came home. When Kangana was walking towards her house, Amrita came and grabbed her by her arm.

Amrita : To ab kahan gayi thi tum?
Kangana: Maa , mera night shift tha isiliye main ab aayi hoon. Please mujhe chhoriye , mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai.
Amrita: No no no. Aaj to main tumhe nahi chhorungi.

Suddenly, Rajeev came. He stood in front of Kangana. He removed her arm from Amrita's hand.

Amrita: Tum kaun ho? Tumhara naam kya hai?
Rajeev: Mera naam jan kar kya karlengi?
Amrita: Bahut arrogance hai tum mein, right?
Rajeev: Arrogance ho ya na ho , mujhe bas ek baat kehni hai. Aap is ladki ko chhor dijiye. Ladkiyon ko taqleef pauhanchana bahut achha kaam nahi hai.
Amrita: Kahin tum wo Khanna ke bete to nahi?
Rajeev: Haan. Kher , mujhe aur bahut kaam hai , bye.

Rajeev leaves and Kangana and Amrita go inside. Kangana thinks of Rajeev. She finds him special. Rajeev also thinks about her.

Kalpana is in her office. She needs a male model since one model is ill and he was supposed to wear the special sherwani. Kalpana decides to see the boys in Old Delhi.

There's a long line of boys. Kalpana sees a fat boy in the line and she tells him to get out. She sees a boy with goofy teeth and tells him to leave too. Ranveer is returning from his interview and Kalpana sees him. She gives him a contract. He goes home and Neelu reads it. She rips it and tells him to find a job himself. And he should not work in Khanna Fashion Studios or Kaushik Fashion Studios. Ranveer agrees and goes upstairs. He sees Kalpana through the window of his bedroom. They gaze
into each other's eyes.






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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oooh. Loved the CS n the Intro!!! Feel sorry for Arohi!!! Update soon!!! 😊
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EPISODE 2

Kalpana is in her office. It's already 12pm and Ranveer has not come til yet. Kalpana asks her assistant to call him. When she calls him , Neelu picks up the phone.

Neelu: Hello. Neelu Khanna. Who's this?
Assistant: I'm Nimisha Shah. Is Mr.Ranveer there?
Neelu: Who are you? Tell me first.
Assistant: I work at Kaushik Fashion studios. Mr. Ranveer was supposed to come at 9am. But he's not here and it's 12pm.
Neelu: He is not going to work at Kaushik Fashion Studios!

Neelu puts the phone down. Nimisha tells Kalpana that Ranveer isn't going to work. Kalpana decides to go to his house.

Kangana is writing a report , when she gets told that she has to interview Rajeev Khanna. She heads to his house.

Kangana is about to ring the doorbell , when Kalpana comes and stands beside her.

Kalpana: Tum? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Tum to aaj report likhne wali thi na?
Kangana: Haan. Ab to likh li hai. Mujhe Rajeev Khanna ka interview lena hai. Tum batao, tum kyun ho yaha?
Kalpana: Mujhe Ranveer se milna hai.
Kangana: Kyun? Wo to kaam nahi karta.
Kalpana: Yeah , know. Par mujhe usse milna hai. Ab khare khare mere face kyun dekh rahi ho? Doorbell bajao.

Kangana rings the doorbell. A servant opens the door. Neelu , Ranveer and Rajeev are sitting on the sofa.

Neelu: Hello. Who are you?
Kalpana: I'm Kalpana. Kalpana Kaushik.
Kangana: And I'm Kangana. Kangana Kaushik.
Neelu: The Kaushik sisters... owners of Kaushik Fashion Studios?
Kalpana: I am. But Kangana is a journalist.
Neelu: What brings you two here?
Kalpana: I need to talk to Ranveer.
Kangana: I have to interview Mr.Rajeev.

Rajeev and Ranveer glance at the girls.

Kalpana: Oh Ranveer! There you are! Oops.. May I come in, Aunty?
Neelu: Yes. Come in.
Kalpana: Chalo Kangana.
Kangana: (gasps) Aap yaha? Mr.Rajeev? Aapne to mujhe uss din meri maa se bachaya tha...
Rajeev: Haan. Mai hoon. Wohi hoon. Andar aao.
Ranveer: Kalpana , tum bhi aao.

Kalpana and Kangana enter the house. Neelu is angry inside but she is not showing it. She is confused as to how come the boys and girls know each other already.
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EPISODE 3

Neelu asks Rajeev to take Kangana outside to interview him. Rajeev takes her outside.

Kangana: Well.. umm..
Rajeev: Ye kaise sawaal hai?
They both start laughing.

Kangana: Aapne apna career kab start kiya tha?
Rajeev: Aap? Call me tum. Hum aaj se friends hain.
Kangana: Okay.
Rajeev: Maine apna career tab shuru kiya tha, jab meri zindagi sai maiyne mein shuru hui thi. Jis din meri 13th birthday aayi, uss din mujhe saari zimedaariyan dedi thi. Mere papa London chale gaye the. Koi urgent kaam tha. Aaj bhi unki kami hai meri zindagi mein.
Kangana: Oh. I see.


Kalpana and Ranveer are in the living room.

Kalpana: Tum aaj kaam par kyun nahi aaye?
Ranveer: Wo main Khanna hoon, to mom ne rok diya.
Kalpana: Oh acha. Waise, ek baat batao. Agar tum kaam par nahi aaoge , to hum kis rishta ke liye milenge?
Ranveer: Dosti ke rishtey ke liye. Aur vaise bhi, hum to padosi hain. Vaise tum new neighbors se mili ho? Kuch ladkiyan hai, shayad main ja kar unke saath flirt karun.
Kalpana: Aise kaise flirt karoge? Meri best friends hai wo ab. Aur vaise bhi, tum to mere liye ho.
Ranveer: Kya? Tumhare liye? Matlab?
Kalpana: umm.. matlab... Tum mere friend ho na! Isiliye.


Kangana and Rajeev go in the living room. The girls leave. The boys escort them til' outside. They wave at each other.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Noori...

Wow. U write amazingly well for a 10 yr old.

Awww, they all no each other. Why is Neelu angry???

Update soon.

Nahi

xxx
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Originally posted by: -Nahi-

Noori...


Wow. U write amazingly well for a 10 yr old.

Awww, they all no each other. Why is Neelu angry???

Update soon.

Nahi

xxx



Thanks Nahi. I'm discontinuing for a while, starting a new ff with TaAnu, Premeer, Abhiya and Arhi and Arjuhi

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