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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Nehu dont need to cut in short not cutting it short, dun worry..
we want a longgg, super longgg update dun worry ji.. faria, i was typing it this whole week during my breaks, and with 2 irritating tests/exams and assignments in the middle (i hate exams😡).. and i've reached 8+ pages in microsoft word but still not completed the part..😆 ur surely gonna enjoy this...
waiting for ur update like i said... i'm waiting to post it, and waiting for u all to read.😆
pls try to post it asap promise, promise... will post it up by the end of today... i'm working fast, typing fast to do it asap.

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u too.. luv ya btw.😃😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

you can post the long update. we dont mind long updates.



i know u guys luv long updates na?😆 well, ur gonna love me more after this update...😆😆 its super long, and has a super-exciting climax 😉😉 (**wink wink) 😆😆😆
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next part COMING UP in about an hour 😆
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Recap: The gang settles into Bui's home. Bui takes an instant liking to everyone, but especially Mayank. The whole day is just rest and relaxation for the whole gang. But, as the day goes by, so does Mayank's attitude towards and feelings for Nupur further change.


Part 10A: Iqraar By Chance

The next day begins warm and bright for the whole gang. Fresh and full of energy, they decide to head to Water Kingdom first, and then Essel World the next day. Even Mayank seems pretty excited for once, his mood having been uplifted by his eavesdropping on Bui and Nupur's conversation in the kitchen the previous night.

This surprises the gang, as they never expected Mayank to enjoy going out and actually having fun this much, than they have previously seen him go to the library. Everyone wonders what the real reason of Mayank's change in attitude is. And even though no one can guess much, though Mayank is still yet unaware of his true, changing feelings, Bui being the real smart one, can see through it all.

The gang sets off for, and soon reaches Water Kingdom. They decide to spend the first few hours of their time there on the more adventurous rides, choosing "What A Coaster" as the first ride to go on.


Reaching the top, Uday gets scared of the height and declares that he won't go.

Uday: Oh no..!! No, no, no, no, no, no..!! No ways!! Main is slide pe to nahin jaaoonga.

Diya: Dodo! Tumhe jaana hi hoga. Dekho na, hum sab bhi jaayenge.

Uday: Tum log jaao. Main sidiyon se vapis neeche utar raha hoon.

Samrat: What yaar Uday..?! Come on. Uday: No ways!!

Mayank: Haan Uday, tumhare bina mazaa nahin aayega.

Nupur: Mayank theek keh raha hai Uday.

Mayank looks over at Nupur, surprisingly shocked and happy of course, to hear her agree with him. He looks over at her and gives her a sweet smile, and then silently thanks god that no one else saw or suspected anything.

Uday: But Nupur!! Please.

Gunjan: No please Uday. Aapko is slide se hi neeche jaana hoga.

Benji: Aur agar tu nahi gaya na Uday, toh humari tu' Dost, dost na raha. Pyar pyar na raha'

Diya : Benji !!!!!!

Benji : Sorry babes.. !

Nupur, who has been silent for some time suddenly gets an idea. She looks over at Mayank and winks at him, trying to indicate that she knows how to get Uday to go down the slide. At first, Mayank thinks she is winking at him and gets shocked and starts blushing. But when Nupur mouths "Uday", he understands she is trying to tell something about Uday, then the redness of his cheeks dies down a little.

Finally having understood Nupur's plan, Mayank moves near to Uday, as does Nupur, who then starts talking and puts her plan into action.

Nupur: Theek hai Uday, agar tum nahi jaana chahte toh mat jaao. Lekin humein toh jaane do. Neeche ek ladki hai, lagta hai koi ussey ched raha hai. Hum slide pe jaayenge toh zyada fast pahunchenge, ussey bachaane ke liye.

The gang, understanding Nupur's plan, winks at her and each other, and start to chip in convincing Uday to go ahead on the slide.

Benji: Haan. Mujhe bhi who ladki dikhayi deh rahi hai. Bechari'

Samrat: On no, poor girl.

Gunjan: Chalo, hum sab ko kuch karna padhega. Abhi slide se hi neeche jaate hai.

Diya : Ab ek ladka ussey ghasitke le jaa raha hai. Uday, do something !!

But Uday turns his head around and catches Diya grinning at Samrat, and asks Nupur to prove that the girl is really there. In the end, Uday is the one left poor as he ends up falling for the prank.

Uday: Agar sach mein ladki hai, toh mujhe dikhayi kyun nahi de rahi hai?

Nupur: Uday, tumko is mat par letna hoga ussey dekhne ke liye, jis angle pe tum ho.

Nupur points to the mat, on which people are supposed to lie, stomachs down, in order to slide down the "What A Coaster" water slide. Uday, being the gullible person that he is, does lie down. But then the gang inches up on him, and gives him a hard push, sending him sliding down screaming like a little girl.

Everyone then gets their own mats and slide down at the same time, on the six different slides. They "woohoo" in fun. Meeting up with Uday at the bottom of the slide-coaster, he mock-scolds them, though not really meaning it since his fear went away much before he was even half-way down the slide.

Uday: Tum log na' Bilkul khiske ho. Aur alag bhi. Lekin duniya ke sabse achche dost bhi.

(*Imagine this song playing in the background, for the gang and their fun time at Water Kingdom' Its from the movie Rok Sako To Rok Lo'the lyrics are in red, while the actions of the gang is in bold black' read the part with 2 more songs later on also based on the same concept, i.e. the words in bold is what is happening on in the story with the gang, while the song in red letters is playing in the background)

The guys are all laughing, and enjoying kicking each others' floats in the Elephant Safari attraction.

Thode se alag
Hain thode khiske se hain hum
Jee chaahe jahaan ruk jaaye manmoji kadam

On the other hand, the girls who are feeling less energetic than the guys, especially since its hot and noon time, take a ride in the Drifting River. http://www.esselworld.com/wk_pics/24.-Drifting-River.jpg

Thode se alag
Hain thode khiske se hain hum
Jee chaahe jahaan ruk jaaye manmoji kadam
Aawara phirein ya chaahein choome aasmaan
Ache ya burein jo bhi hain aise hi hain hum

The whole gang enjoys, talking and having fun as they eat their lunch at Tai Pan, a restaurant at Water Kingdom.

Thode se alagHain thode khiske se hain hum
Jee chaahe jahaan ruk jaaye manmoji kadam
Aawara phirein ya chaahein choome aasmaan
Ache ya burein jo bhi hain aise hi hain hum
Rok sako to rok lo, rok sako to rok lo
Rok sako to rok lo, rok sako to rok lo

Late in the afternoon, when it gets too hot to be out in the open, the gang retreats to a shaded attraction ' in particular, the Jacuzzi called Mama Miya for a relaxing few minutes before they catch the last few water-rides and then go back to Bui's home.


Uparwala jab banane baitha tha humein
Shayed ache mood mein tha fursad thi use
Uparwala jab banane baitha tha humein
Shayed ache mood mein tha fursad thi use

It's the evening now, and the gang decides to have some last minute fun before Water Kingdom closes for the day. They enjoy themselves as simulated waves nearly throw them off their floats. The guys and the girls also jostle each other in fun, splashing water at the opposite gender to get back.


Dil banaya ek bada sa bhardi mastiyaan
Bola jaoon khol do ab saari kashtiyaan
Thode se alagHain thode khiske se hain hum
Jee chaahe jahaan ruk jaaye manmoji kadam
Aawara phirein ya chaahein choome aasmaan
Ache ya burein jo bhi hain aise hi hain hum
Rok sako to rok lo (rok lo rok lo), rok sako to rok lo
Rok sako to rok lo (haan haan rok lo), rok sako to rok lo

At one point, Mayank comes so close to Nupur that he is nearly hugging her. Nupur doesn't notice Mayank's cheeks going red, as he turns his head away from her. Time stops for a few moments for Mayank, as he hears only his heart beating faster. He wonders why is that, but then dismisses it once again.



Humse zyada kyon humari duniya ko fikar
Tenting wenting sab karayi lekin be asar
Humse zyada kyon humari duniya ko fikar
Tenting wenting sab karayi lekin be asar

Samrat-Gunjan, Diya-Benji, and Mayank-Nupur are all playing and enjoying among themselves. Poor Uday is being left out because he doesn't have a partner to have fun with in the water. Almost cursing his bad kismet, he decides to get out of the pool and dry himself before he wrinkles, but just as he turns, he sees this cute girl staring at him. Uday smiles at her, and she smiles back. He then starts flirting with his "pool-neighbour".

Kismet apni jeb mein hai dikhlado inhe
Manzil apni hai padosi milwado inhein
Thode se alag
Hain thode khiske se hain hum
Jee chaahe jahaan ruk jaaye manmoji kadam

After a few more minutes, the gang decides to finally get out of the water and head home, all feeling really tired. As they head home in the jeep though, their energy is still intact, mostly in anticipation for the next day of fun.

Bui welcomes them home, and serves them a scrumptious dinner, which they all deeply appreciate. What wonders her is that after a full day of adventure and fun in the water, which is bound to be tiring, they still seem so energetic.

Bui: Teenagers these days..! Bilkul pagal hote hain. Aur ye bacche toh na, bohot hi alag hai, thode khiske bhi.

Thode se alag
Hain thode khiske se hain hum
Jee chaahe jahaan ruk jaaye manmoji kadam
Aawara phirein ya chaahein choome aasmaan
Ache ya burein jo bhi hain aise hi hain hum
Rok sako to rok lo (rok lo rok lo), rok sako to rok lo
Rok sako to rok lo (haan haan rok lo), rok sako to rok lo

Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Part 10B: Iqraar By Chance

The next day begins with as much anticipation as the previous day both started and ended. The gang gets up super early despite being tired from the fun-filled activities the previous day. While Diya, Benji and Uday help water Bui's numerous plants and flowers, Samrat and Gunjan to to the nearby market to get groceries for the next few days. Mayank and Nupur on the other hand, have a little bonding session in the kitchen, with Bui keeping a watchful eye on them, and at the same time thinking of new schemes to get them together.

Breakfast is soon ready, as everyone settles at the table, and Mayank and Nupur help bring it out. Bui looks mighty pleased with all the effort the kids put in and thanks them, especially Mayank, who blushes slightly. Filling their stomachs, the gang decides to head to Essel World late morning.

Reaching there, the gang goes on the family rides first. The "Aqua Dive" is their first choice, and they thoroughly enjoy it. The whole gang sits in one cart. Diya and Benji are in the front, and Uday is between them purposely. Samrat and Gunjan are sitting in the 2nd row of the cart, and talking as the ride progresses. Mayank and Nupur are at the back.

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Aqua%20dive.jpg

Mayank is most happy with this arrangement, as he can smile at Nupur and think about her without the rest of the gang noticing since they are all in the front. Best of all, he won't be caught staring at her, as she is too busy looking elsewhere and enjoying the ride.

As the ride completes, with the cart going splash into the water, the gang reaches their hands out into the air.

Don't stop yourself, come on and reach out,
Now This is your chance, come on and reach out

Don't stop yourself, come on and reach out,
Now This is your chance, come on and reach out

Mayank thinks about his heart, which he can feel beating faster, not because of the exhilarating ride, but because he can start to feel Nupur unknowingly pull the strings of his heart, as if it's a guitar. Mayank wonders why this is, and what is it he feels for Nupur, but can make head or tail of it. Finally dismissing it as the excitement which is making him lost consciousness and think about Nupur in a different way, he shakes his head and moves on walking to the next ride, with the gang.

Bin chede hi , baje jhan jhana jhan
Dil mein sau guitar
Ude ude hosh khoya khoya dil
Aur dikhte , ek ke char

Samrat: Aah!! That was such a fun ride. Kitna mazaa aaya na?

Gunjan: Haan, bilkul. It was fun..! Ab kya karein? Kaunse ride pe jaaye?

Benji: Koi ride nahin. Lunch se pehle hum thoda aur exercise karte hain. Let's play cricket.

Nupur: Cricket, no ways..! Hum yahan Essel World ke rides pe jaane ke liye aaye hain. Naa hi cricket khelne ke liye.

Diya: Haan. Nupur bilkul theek keh rahi hai. Let's enjoy the rides, guys. Hum cricket toh kabhi bhi khel sakte hain.

Uday: Yeah right! Tum ladkiyaan yeh kyun nahi keh deti ki tumhein cricket khelna nahi aata.

Gunjan: Kaun kehta hai ki hum ladkiyon ko cricket nahi aata?

Nupur: Haan..! Infact, hum girls tumse better khel sakte hain.

Samrat: Ho hi nahi sakta!

Nupur: Kyun, Samrat? Tum humein challenge kar rahe ho?

Benji: Of course! Infact, hum shart lagaate hain. You girls will lose to us.

Nupur: Never. Hum jeet jaayenge. Aur tab hum jo kahenge, woh tumhein karna padhega.

Samrat: Aur agar tum haar gaye, toh tumhein humari har baat sunni hogi. Manzoor?

Nupur: Haan, manzoor.

Mayank is the only one who has not talked during the last five minutes. Mayank, doesn't want to challenge the girls, especially Nupur, because he knows that the way his heart is behaving these days, it will either slip and get distracted, letting Nupur and the girls win the game, or if the girls are on the losing end at first, it will take pity and tell him to lose the game purposely, which he will do. Plus, he finds the whole argument quite stupid actually.


Peeke coffee nasha chadhe aur popcorn maare kick
Aur stupid si in batoon mein ,baba dil doondhe logic

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Cricket%20Zone.jpg

The gang heads out to the cricket zone, and starts their game of girls versus boys. They decide to play 5 overs each gender, and make Mayank the umpire, since he is always fair in things like this.

The gang does have lots of fun, especially after the boys, who are batting first, finish their play. They feel they girls cannot beat their run score, and get happy. But they celebrate a bit too early, because in the end, the girls end up winning the game. And this is all thanks to Nupur, who was the cricket champion in school days back in Morena.

The girls jump around in joy, and decide on their punishment for the boys, which they will tell at the end of the day. After the game, the gang heads over to Domino's Pizza for their lunch.

As they eat their pizzas, they talk and laugh and enjoy themselves. However, at one point, Diya gets irritated with Benji as he is on his iPhone, updating his Facebook and Twitter account statuses. Diya gets angry and snatches his iPhone out of his hands, switching it off. To pacify Diya, Benji flirts with her and feeds her pizza. All is happy again..! And the gang continue their lunch in merriment.

Internet par ho ek Tic Talk Tic,Talk har roz Subah Shaam
Facebook, Twitter, Orkut shorkut Lage Zaroori Kaam
Chalte Firte aa jaye Ik roz kisi ka mail
Aur Seedhi simple si life yeh ban jaaye fairy tale

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

After lunch, the gang queues up to enjoy the rest of the rides, enjoying "Hoola Loop", "Thunder", "Zyclone", "Enterprise" and "Senior Dodgem" the most.

Hoola Loop ~

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Hoola%20Loop.jpg

Thunder ~

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Thunder.jpg

Zyclone ~

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/ZYCLONE.jpg

Enterprise ~

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Enterprise.jpg

Senior Dodgem ~

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Senior%20Dodgem.jpg

They decide to finish off their rides with the "Crazy Cups" attraction. Diya decides to sit with Gunjan on this ride, and Samrat wants to discuss something with Benji (i.e. his feelings for Gunjan), so Mayank has no choice but to go with Nupur who insists on company on this ride.

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/Crazy%20Cups.jpg

During the ride, Nupur takes hold of the wheel in the middle of the cup and spins fast just to irritating Mayank. She doesn't notice it, but Mayank is not irritating but happy and surprisingly perplexed (with his happiness) at the same time.

When Nupur spins hard at one moment, she is thrown against Mayank due to the force. This closeness stuns Mayank, and he holds his breath. The rest of the ride seems like an eternal dream in Mayank's eyes, as he is mesmerized by Nupur, her laughter, her beauty, basically, her-everything. Time seems to have stopped for Mayank, who dreams of Nupur, without yet realising that he is in love with her.

Crazy Sapno se ho aakhen full on up-to-date
Plot moon pe lena hai, zara pata lagana Rate
Koi Samjhe ya na Samjhe Apni Dhun mein hi Doobe
Dil mein ik baar jo aa jaye kar jaaye Ajoobe

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Isi umar mein, isi umar mein

Since it is late in evening, the gang decides to skip "Riki's Rocking Bowling Alley" and head straight to the "Dance Floor", before Essel World closes for the day. It's pretty crowded inside, so the gang decides to stay close to each other and dance.

http://www.esselworld.com/ew_pics/dance-floor-1.jpg

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Mayank is still battling over his feelings for Nupur, and is more so confused over them, especially considering the past few days. Meanwhile, Samrat, who has spoken to Nupur and Benji several times before, and even that day, finally realises he has feelings for Gunjan, and decides to confess to her.

Samrat decides to bring out his feelings for Gunjan in front of everyone by dedicating a song to her. While the rest of the gang and everyone else on "Dance Floor" is busy dancing and enjoying themselves, Samrat goes up to the DJ and speaks something in secret to him, before taking the mike. Everyone present there turns their attention to Samrat.

Samrat: Attention ladies and gentlemen'! Maaf karma ki maine aapko is tarah se disturb kiya, lekin mujhe yahaan kisise kuch kehna hai. Bohot baar main confused raha ki main kya mehsoos kar raha hoon, lekin aaj jaake mujhe finally apne feelings samajh mein aaye. Main hoon ek awara lekin harmless flirt, jissey pyaar ki baton mein yakeen nahi tha. Lekin ek din ek ladki meri zindagi mein aayi aur usne mujhe pyaar mein vishwaas dilaya. Woh ladki pehle mujhe zyaada pasand nahi thi, lekin baad mein woh meri dost bani, sabse acchi dost. Main ussey kuch bhi share kar sakta hoon, lekin na jaane kyun, apni feelins share karne mein thoda darta tha, thoda sa isiliye bhi kyunki abhi tak main khud apne feelings ko confirm nahi kar saka. Lekin aaj main apne feelings apne best friend aur aap sab ko batana chahta hoon. Woh best friend jisne mujhe pyaar karma sikhaya, wohi best friend jissey main aaj pyaar karta hoon aur zindagi bhar pyaar karta rahoonga. Chashmish, I Love You'!! Aur haan, agla gaana main tumhein hi dedicate karna chaahunga.

Gunjan, who has stood still the entire time, listening in shock, finally comes out of her trance as everyone starts clapping after Samrat finishes his confession. She too has loved Samrat all this while, but was afraid to confess. However, hearing Samrat's confession in front of everyone, including a handful of strangers, has built up her courage.

Gunjan lets go of all her inhibitions and runs to Samrat, hugging him. As Samrat kisses her on top of her head and hugs her even tighter, the claps grow even lowder. The song Kitni Narmi (from Dil Jo Bhi Kahey) starts playing in the sound system. The DJ gives Samrat a thumbs up and Samrat smiles back in appreciation.

O Ho O ..
Kitni Narmi Se Kitne Dheere Se - 2
Dil Mein Aati Hain - 2
Dabe Paav Mohabbat Aur Phir
Dhadkano Mein Chupke Yeh Phir Dolti Hain
Rang Sa Zindagi Mein Gholti Hain
Aankho Ankho Mein Jaise Bolti Hain - 2
Haule Se Dheere Se
Kitni Narmi Se Kitne Dheere Se

All couples start dancing with each other. Diya and Benji slow-dance in a cuddle and Gunjan rests her head on Samrat's chest and takes in all that happened in the past few minutes. Even Uday finds some random girl and starts flirting with her, finally getting the first slow-dance of his life. On the other hand, Nupur deciding not to mix with any of the weird guys giving the girls on the dance floor weird looks, convinces Mayank to slow-dance with her.

Thinking over Samrat's confession, and his current closeness to Nupur, Mayank begins to wonder about his feelings for Nupur. He goes into his dreamland. In reality, he is dancing with Nupur on this crowded dance floor, but in his imagination, he and Nupur are in a magical place, dancing as slow as a dew drop falling off a flower petal.


Phool Par Os Jaise Girti Hain
Lehar Saahil Se Jaise Milti Hain
Khusbu Jaise Fiza Mein Chaati Hain
Dil Mein Aaise Mohabbat Aati Hain
Dhadkano Mein Yeh Chupke Dolti Hain
Rang Sa Zindagi Mein Gholti Hain
Aankho Ankho Mein Jaise Bolti Hain - 2
Haule Se Dheere Se
Kitni Narmi Se Kitne Dheer Se

As the song ends in "Dance Floor", Mayank is brought out of his trance. Struck by what he just imagined, Mayank blindly follows the rest of the gang out of Essel World, as it reaches the end of its operatin hours for the day. The ride back to Bui's home is done in silence ' Uday and Nupur sleeping as they tired, Samrat-Gunjan and Diya-Benji are hugging while sitting next to each other and thinking of their love, and Mayank is pondering over his feelings.

They soon reach Bui's home, and get out of their cars. The gang enters and heads straight up to their respective rooms, feeling extremely tired to the day's energy-consuming but all-the-more fun activities. Mayank is the last one to enter the house, but as soon as he does, Bui understands that the look in his eyes is not of tiredness, but rather one of confused-feelings of love. Bui decides to have a little talk with Mayank.

Bui: Mayank, zaraa ruko. Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

Mayank: Ji, Bui.

Bui: Haan, toh Mayank' Maine tumhein closely observe kiya hai, jab se tumne mere ghar mein kadam rakha. Maine dekha hai, jis tarah se tum Nupur ko dekhte ho.

Mayank : Lekin, Bui'

Bui : Lekin-vekin kuch nahin. Mujhe sab pata hai, aur tum bhi mana karne ki koshish mat karma. Main sab samajhti hoon. Sirf haan aur naa mein jawab dena, ok.

Mayank: Theek hai.

Bui: Tumhare dil mein kuch kuch ho raha hai, lekin tum nahin jaanti kya, correct?

Mayank: Bilkul correct Bui.

Bui: Pehle tum Nupur ko nafrat karte the, lekin ab nahin.

Mayank: Haan.

Bui: Tumhare Nupur ke liye feelings bohot jald hi badal rahey hain, aur tumhein dar lagta hai.

Mayank: Haan.

Bui: Tumhein pyaar ho gaya hai, Mayank. Nupur se tum pyaar karte ho.

Mayank : Lekin, Bui. Main aur pyaar ' kaise ? Main toh sirf padhaayi mein dhyaan deta hoon. Apne kitaabon mein subah shaam uljha rehta hoon, aur mujhe itna waqt mila pyaar karne ke liye? Nahin, mujhe Nupur se pyaar ho hi nahin sakta.

Bui: Mayank beta, pyaar karne ke liye waqt ki nahin balki sirf ek lamhe ki zaroorat hoti hai. Main dekha hai, jab tum Nupur ke paas hote ho toh tumhari aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak hoti hai. Jab tum Nupur ke paas hote ho toh chori-chori chupke se tumhari aankhen ussey dhoondhti rehti hai. Achaanak se Nupur ke khayaalat tumhare dimaag mein aatey hain. Na chaate huye phir bhi tumhare sapnon mein Nupur hi aati hai.

Mayank : Haan, Bui yeh sab sach hai. Lekin, pyaar'?

Bui: Mayank, yeh sab hi toh pyaar hai. Tum jaao aur so jaao ab. Subah main tumse baat karoongi. Lekin sone se pehle zaroor apni aankhen band karke apne future ke baare mein sochna. Apne future mein tumhein kya dikhta hai, kaun log dikhte hain. Pehle tumhein sab dhundhla sa dikhega, lekin agar ant mein tumhein sirf Nupur dikhayi di na, toh samjho aur maan bhi lo ki tumhein pyaar ho gaya.

Mayank goes up to his room, and as he is lying down on the bed, thinking of his future, he sees his mom, a successful career, a great home, even more wonderful friends. But all that is still a little hazy. At the end of it all, Nupur appears. Her image is clear and sharp. Her beauty strikes Mayank's heart with cupid's arrow, and he opens his eyes with a start.

Mayank: Toh kya Bui sach keh rahi thi? Mujhe sach mein Nupur se pyaar ho gaya hai'

O Ho O ..
Kitne Rangin Nazaare Lagte Hain
Jitne Mausam Hain Pyare Lagte Hain
Yeh Hai Toh Duniya Khoobsurat Hain
Hai Kya Hiz Yeh Mohabbat Hain
Dhadkano Mein Yeh Chupke Dolti Hain
Rang Sa Zindagi Mein Gholti Hain
Aankho Ankho Mein Jaise Bolti Hain - 2
Haule Se Dheere Se
Kitni Narmi Se Kitne Dheer Se - 2
Dil Mein Aati Hain - 2
Dabe Paav Mohabbat Aur Phir
Dhadkano Mein Chupke Yeh Phir Dolti Hain
Rang Sa Zindagi Mein Gholti Hain
Aankho Ankho Mein Jaise Bolti Hain - 2
Haule Se Dheere Se
Kitni Narmi Se Kitne Dheer Se

As Mayank sleeps, he dreams of Nupur, and a colorful future with her. He has a happy life, a happies family, a wonderful home with his and Nupur's little kids running around. He has everything.



Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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OKAY GUYYS... this html thing is quite irritating.. when i first posted the part, the words came out all weird coz of html coding.. but anyways, though it took me some time, i finally posted the part up... IF forum codes disables me from posting the longgg part in one post so i had to post it in 2... but u guys wanted a longgg part, so i did it... now i expect longgg comments from u all😆😆 joking, but do try to comment like u guys always do, or at least click on the like button...

i included pics for u guys, but again forum codes prevented me from posting the pics, so i just posted the link... the only pic actually seen is arjun's hot-shot.. hahaha😉

other than the pics which i sourced, i also added 3 songs, fun-filled moments with the whole gang, samrat-gunjan confession and finally...mayank's realization...!!!

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hope u guys liked/loved it 😆
do not forget to comment..


ps. those of u who read it before me pm-ing u then sorry i was not able to pm u... infact, this post is being typed long before i even pm-ed u.. so i apologize in advance 😆 this part has taken me a lot of time and effort and i dun hav time to pm everyone, hav to get back to studying for abt 30+mins more before i go to sleep... maybe tmr i will pm as i'm having lunch or smth... till then, take care ppl.. love ya guys... muahhh!!!😆
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
you kept your promise and thats a very long part. and mayank is in love! wow!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice and long part...really nice neha...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

you kept your promise and thats a very long part. and mayank is in love! wow!



hey... i did keep the promise, sorta😆 anyways, glad to hear u liked it.. and ya, mayu finally realised he's in love... wheee!! lol😆
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Originally posted by: arjun-forever

nice and long part...really nice neha...



thanks for ur comment... glad to hear u liked the part...

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