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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Hi!


Very nice dialogues! And again, I liked the way you described it- I could visualize the whole scene.

Waiting for next part.

Thank u sooo much🤗...glad u enjoyed this part too...next one asap...Hope u keep reading it dear...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi, very nicely written. Archana's pain could be visualized well by ur dialogues.
If manav has left archu and went not b'coz of him being in troublee like meeting with accident or some other reason then archu should stop thinking of him and sob always.. she needs to move on in life.

Waiting for next update!! good work👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww it was only a dream but non the less it was a great update😊👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Great Update... Loved this one as well..

Loved ur imagination of Manav in white shirt and blue denims 😳 my fav combo for a guy 😃
Jokes apart Archu's diary got me tears 😭😭 and while reading the song which came to my mind was Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise, Kaise Jiya Jaye Tum Bin, Ajao Luatkar Tum Yeh dil Keh Raha Hai.
Gosh this songs suits very well for the situation.. Other song which you mentioned is also good but for me Tum Bin is perfect as it is one of my favs 😳.
Manav dialogues were very well written and touched me... Rain has so much meaning in this couple's life and you have used it very well 👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArManFan1

Great Update... Loved this one as well..

Loved ur imagination of Manav in white shirt and blue denims 😳 my fav combo for a guy 😃
Jokes apart Archu's diary got me tears 😭😭 and while reading the song which came to my mind was Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise, Kaise Jiya Jaye Tum Bin, Ajao Luatkar Tum Yeh dil Keh Raha Hai.
Gosh this songs suits very well for the situation.. Other song which you mentioned is also good but for me Tum Bin is perfect as it is one of my favs 😳.
Manav dialogues were very well written and touched me... Rain has so much meaning in this couple's life and you have used it very well 👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for the next update..

Hi dear glad u liked this song choice too...Yup mine fav is tum bin too...😳...exactlyyy that 's why i picked up rain...soo glad u liked it...next one asap,.,...hope u keep reading...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: deepa101

Awww it was only a dream but non the less it was a great update😊👏

Yaa dream glad u enjoyed it...Next part asap dear..hope u keep reading it...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ankifan

Hi, very nicely written. Archana's pain could be visualized well by ur dialogues.

If manav has left archu and went not b'coz of him being in troublee like meeting with accident or some other reason then archu should stop thinking of him and sob always.. she needs to move on in life.

Waiting for next update!! good work👍🏼

Hi dear sooo glad that once again u could feel all that i tried to put into wordss...yaa she has to move on but hey.wait till next part u will know why she hasn't moved on...😉Hope u enjoy the track...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal

Hi dear glad u liked this song choice too...Yup mine fav is tum bin too...😳...exactlyyy that 's why i picked up rain...soo glad u liked it...next one asap,.,...hope u keep reading...

Offcourse I will read and comment as well 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Throughly enjoyed reading your latest update 😃

Archana's words on her diary are heartfelt,could feel her pain 👍🏼 And your dream dialogue was just perfect,I can picture the whole scene whilst I'm reading,gosh it felt so real!Absolutely loved it!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shootingstar27

Throughly enjoyed reading your latest update 😃

Archana's words on her diary are heartfelt,could feel her pain 👍🏼 And your dream dialogue was just perfect,I can picture the whole scene whilst I'm reading,gosh it felt so real!Absolutely loved it!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part 😛

Hi dear...sooo glad u could feel all things i tried to pendown...Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it...😳

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