Great Update... Loved this one as well..
Loved ur imagination of Manav in white shirt and blue denims đł my fav combo for a guy đ
Jokes apart Archu's diary got me tears đđ and while reading the song which came to my mind was Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise, Kaise Jiya Jaye Tum Bin, Ajao Luatkar Tum Yeh dil Keh Raha Hai.
Gosh this songs suits very well for the situation.. Other song which you mentioned is also good but for me Tum Bin is perfect as it is one of my favs đł.
Manav dialogues were very well written and touched me... Rain has so much meaning in this couple's life and you have used it very well đđź
Eagerly waiting for the next update..