New FF *If Tomorrow Comes*...EK PAL..pG 4...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI EVERYONE🤗...WELL😛...its my first FF for this wonderful forum and infact my first post too...I have been a silent reader but aaj bas yun hii mann kiya to pendown something😊...Hope u all like...😳

Part 1...pg 1...

Part 2...Tum bin pg 2...

pART 3...eK PAL...PG 4...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lokking forward to reading your FF 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its begins from the scene where archana meets manav in her dream and he tells her that she wil have to learn to live without him.. THREE YEARS LATER...


ITS a scene in chawl..u see archana..dressed in an off white saree..with no vermillion or mangalsutra..moving around the house with aarti ki thali in one hand and spreading the fragrance of dhoop with her other hand..after giving prasad to aayi who comes out after morning bath and to baba who is reading the newspaper..⭐️

the two bless her and smiling she goes to the bed to wake up little sachin..he stirs and puts back the chaadar but archu walks back to the bed again and this time she picks up the little one in her arms..and carries him to the washroom saying-mera sachu taiyar hokar jaldi jaldi school jayega...(u see her making him ready in uniform after bathing him and says combing his wet hair)...aur achchi tarah se padhega phir hum shaam ko kheleinge...😛




Sachin says innocently-aur aapko phir hara doonga aayi...he smiles and soo does archu...all these years sachin was archana's beloved..she liked spending most of her time with him..his smiles made her day and his tears troubled her...and she showered unconditional love and care on him..sachin too had grown fond of her..


aayi watches archana make breakfast for everyone and tears well up in her eyes as she realised how mechanical and lifeless archana had become...she cursed fate wondering why destiny had to put archana's kind heart throuh inconsolable pain and loss..😭

the memories of the day were still fresh in aayi's mind...when the police had called them to tell about how they had found manav's wrist watch and wallet along and empty road and in a pool of blood...everyone was in shock and archana was shattered...over the years archana had put the pieces of her destroyed life..findin peace in serving them and happiness io bringing up sachin!...hiding her pain behind a smile she always wore...archana was leading a life without manav but not living it!...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi...
welcome to this forums...😊
nice update...😊
plzzz update soon waitng for nxt prt...😊
'''AND ONCE A AGAIN WELCOME TO PR LAND'''🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Enjoyed reading your FF,the Archana in your story sounds like a strong person.

Do update more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice beginning, liked the portrayal of Archana-Sachu relationship... do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey First of all Welcome to the forum...
I liked the beginning... Your version is Archu is very strong and liked the relation between Archu and Sachu...
Hope to read the next part soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi swiss_leo thanks for such a warm welcome to the forum*big hug* next part asap hope u keep reading dear and wow love ur profilepic *blushing*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi shootingstar27 soo glad u lyked the first part and archu's charecterisation..next part asap hope u keep reading dear :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi nikitagmc soo glad that u lyk the first part and strong archana next part asap hope u keep enjoying it dear :)

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