~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 5 - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
Arey status updating! An update coming or u 4got to remove it from d title?
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Subah subah Double treat. WoW. Waiting.
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ah! feeling dizzy, I don't think Geet is married, but the kids and rahul 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am waiting too 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg muskan phir se jhatka dhena shuru kar diya...
cant wait for the shock now...
i dont think so she wud hv married...
even if she is then i think she did the right thing...
the status showing updating r u gonna update more?
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Posted: 14 years ago
DOUBLE UPDATES SO PLEASE CLICK LIKE BUTTON ON BOTH..😭😭😭 PLZ...
COMMENTS ALSO... i FEEL LIKE WRITING MORE..AS I SEE ALL SUPPORT..
SACHI
MUCHI
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he moment Maan turned the car.. amy broke the bottle on the road giving a naughty look to ramy.
They immediately ran through the gate Amy took some mud & wiped it over Maan's name on the right side of the gate.. that had engraved Geet - Maan in it ever since.
Rany & amy ran to the basement & carried the iron nails from there to the main gate & emptied the whole box there. the made a victorious celbration of their plan. then they continued play with ballu jr at the pool in the garden after locking the gate.

Maan continued to drive for next 10miles & couldn't find any Mc Donalds. He checked the GPS again & realized he was heading away from the house. He got really pissed off . He followed the GPS.. & drove back.. finally he reached the same place. He looked around, the boys were not seen.. he wondered why Geet choose to stay in such place..thats when he saw the house !! & realized it was the same place he brought for them!!! he saw their name engraved on the right side.. his heart missed a beat.. it meant different now to him.. to see Geet written next to his name.

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he was drawn back to the memories when they sat & selected the font for this name plate. It was almost after one month of the night he had spend in her room after the break up with Simran. How much he had to manavofy her saying that he truly meant to buy this house for them together..no chalak lomdi stuff. ..UFF

He was looking at naming the place he suggested names like Handa mansion..
she fought back saying dehka.. u r putting the whole blame on my family
he rolled his eyes.. ok.. Khurana mansion
she twisted her lips. I thought.. we were partners.. she murmured..
Maan hugged her.. ok decided..
she lifted her one brows & looked at him.. from corner of her eyes
maaneet
yeh kaisen naam hain..

she gave a disappointed look
dodo..maan ka maan & geet ka eet..maaneet
nahi.. mera naam phele hona chahiyen..aur mera naam ka g knaha hain..
dodo
tumhara naam full hain tho mera naam bhi full hoga na!!!
she pushed his hands that was around her & turned her face..took ballu in her hand & whispered in his ears.. lair!!.. jutha chalak lomdhi!!! main bol rahi hoon ballu we shouldn't be trusting him & taking him along with us!!!
dodo main ne kaha na..it is not chalak lomdhi stuff nahi hain
she again twisted her lips..
dodo!! he turned her arms in anger.. she immediately made a baby face... don't touch me & waked his hand. He gave up yet again.. aacha kya naam rahk na hain tum hi bolo
she had a major discussion session with ballu & then said ..Geet - ballu - Maan
Maan wondered she held such a big conference with ballu to decide this name
actually I was confused ki.. ballu ka naam kanha add karenge
Maan looked at her in shock...
tumhare naam ke baad yah pehlen
he shouted.. I am not having ballu's name in our house's names
Geet immediately closed ballu's ears.. & locked ballu in the room carefully
she came back in anger pacing .. furiously.
Tum aisen kaisen bol sakten ho.. how hurt he will feel
Maan blinked..ballu will feel hurt!!
u r hurting his feelings
u r mean ...selfish..umm..woh..umm..
she was thinking hard for more worse words.. sweet Maan offered..she blindly ..
said sweet....& then hit him..again..nahi..u r like those ganda kala wala ticks!!!
his eyes popped out.. ticks!!
woh jo ballu ko bite kiya tha na first yr main!! ballu was so upset because of that...u...u actually worse than that kala tick!!
ichy tick!!
he made a yucky face..yuck!!
yah!! yuck tick
she repeated..
dodo.. he warned
tick!!
tick!!
tick!!
tick!tick!!
tick!tick!!
tick!
Yucky tick!!
ok.. the name will be Geet - Maan..I have decided
& he send the mail
Oh god.. she had cried so much for that!!
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he laughed..looking at the name & driving straight threw those nails..& crashing threw the gate!!!
his car went out of control with the flat bursted tyres & landed straight on to their pool. Ballu barked at him.. as the water was drawn out by the impact..while amy & rany threw the toys at him.. he helplessly screamed dodo!!!
dodo!!!
dodo!!

she came out running. Hearing his voice!! wat on earth was he doing here..she thought.
She came out wearing her shorts & sleeveless top...amy..ramy..ballu.. stop!! just stop it
Maan ran towards her & stood blank looking at her like that. She was first shocked.. seeing him actually there... fully wet ..almost crashing ..actually crashed the car through the gate & then kids pool.. wat was he doing!! then his eyes.. they way they were looking at him.. she almost lost track. She suddenly felt cool breeze touching all her exposed skin. She chuckled a bit.. & crossed her arms around her blushing ...his gaze traveled from her red crimson cheeks to her legs. He tried so hard to stop himself from gaping so openly .. but .. then his eyes were not anymore in his control.. he looked guiltily at her face that was sharam se pani pani types ..he smiled a bit & again looked down.. but this time.. amy stood there between him & his dodo..crossed his arms on his chest & looking at him with a disapproving look.
Dodo.. yeh shyataan!!
amy - dodo u go inside..
ramy - aap andhar javoo we will handle this trespasser
Maans eyes fell out.. jaw dropped open.. a tiny miny bacha ordering around his dodo..
before he lost his head another big shock.. when he heard a male voice..commanding
amy ramy.. get inside now!!..maan tried to cool himself.. ok.. yeh shayataan bachen might be NT's but ..yeh kaun hain.. he wanted to be +ve.. servant hoga.. !! then thought..sachi maan..dodo ke saath rah rah ke.. u started thinking like her

-BLOG maitri part 41-

Precap
shock pe shock bechara maan

-PREV PART 40 NEXT PART 42-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Again me first... πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
Yipppeee... I get up early in the morning and get a double Maitri treat...
Thank u sooo much Muski...
Love u loads...
Well now commenting on both the parts...

Part 40:
Nahiii... Maan k alawa koi aur Geet ko dodo nhi bula sakta...
and I dont like this Rahul... Ye picture mein kahan se aa gaya... Isse bhagao yahan se...
and Amy and Ramy cute hain but Geet ko Didi kyun nhi bolte idiot... I dont like them...
Jokes apart... Cute kids hain.. Now the story taking a new turn... But please Rahul naam ki mystery ko jaldi kholo... Kiska hubby hai... Please make him related to NT... I dont want Geet to be living with someone aiwai types... Ye sirf Maan ka right hai... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Part 41:
Loved their naming of the house part...
They were indeed cute couple and now they r sizzling hot... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
But kahani mein kuch naaye kirdaaron k aane se thodi problem badh gayi hain but koi nhi Maanji... Ye aiwai time pass log hain... Aap apni dodo ko manao aur apne saath le jaao India...
Poor Maan has now so many names... I cant even count them on fingers now... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I am sure even he cant... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Maan now sees a new side of his dodo... I am sure he is in a big shock...
Poor Maan first is away frm Geet... Now he meets such naughty kids... and then the male voice frm "their" house... I am thinking abt how will be survive more shocks...
Waise Geet was shy frm Maan but wo uss Rahul k saamne aise hi rehti hai... Kya yaar Maan se zyada to mujhe bura lag rha hai... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Now preparing myself for more shocks...

Thank u sooo much for the double treat today...
Waiting for u to post the next parts..
Love u loads
Sakshi

PS: Ye to actually mein bahut long comment ho gaya... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Edited by zaqxsw - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet n shadi krli kya.nahiii agar aisa hota to uske prnts ko pata hota n wo ldka ni dikhate usko.plz di update soon n batao k mystery kya h.no way geet is married
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Posted: 14 years ago
amy & ramy ...is too smart ...lovely

wonderful update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
muahhh di luv u...aaj to hum sabki lottery lagi haiπŸ˜†...awesome update but mujhe ek baat batao...yeh bache geet ko dodo kyun bol rhe hain dodo to usse sirf maan bolta hai naπŸ˜•

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