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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


muskan aajayega preparing suprise shock for us and maan😆

ya but excitement ke maare yahan meri jaan nikali ja rahi hai😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lagta hai update kaafi bada hai 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
DOUBLE UPDATES SO PLEASE CLICK LIKE BUTTON ON BOTH..😭😭😭 PLZ...
COMMENTS ALSO... i FEEL LIKE WRITING MORE..AS I SEE ALL SUPPORT..
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Maans eyes fell out.. jaw dropped open.. a tiny miny bacha ordering around his dodo..
before he lost his head another big shock.. when he heard a male voice
amy ramy.. get inside now!!
he looked at Geet before he could conclude anything.. he reassured himself.. they might be that stupid Nt's childern.. but ..yeh kaun hain.. he wanted to be +ve.. servant hoga.. !! then thought..sachi maan..dodo ke saath rah rah ke.. u started thinking like her...sErVaNt.. !!!

before he could say any thing..amy pushed him.. away..
rany - u trespasser!! shooo
amy tried to push him again.. screaming tresspasser ...tresspasser...Maan held his hand & lifted him & carried him.. amy protested swinging his hands & legs in mid air!!! out of my house .. Maan said leaving him outside the gate
this is mine & dodo's house!! he said it sternly. Amy looked at Geet angrily..who was looking at maan's behavior in shock. She expected him to react weirdly yes!!!! but not carry a small boy & push him out the house. Amy was furious..painfully looking at Geet narrowing his brows..
rany ran to rahul..dad..dad.. dehko na..wat is he doing to amy
Geet went & immediately hugged amy.. he snapped out of her arms.. pushing her away too... waking her.. getting wild at her.. he raised his hand again to hit Geet aimlessly.. Maan immediately holds his hand..dare u touch my dodo.. ok thats it!!! here started the world war 3
amy puts up a big fight with the Maan singh Khurana.. who was easily 10 times..his size & almost 5 times his age..he put in all his strength to push his strong body that didn't even budge ... this is my dodo.. not urs.. he screamed.

Maan - meri dodo hain.. u can't call her that
amy - nahi meri..I will call her..dodo!!
Maan - meri hain..tumhari nahi
amy - nahi meriii...
Maan - meri
amy closed his ear..meriii...meriii..pressing hard on every word he said


Geet looked at Maan in shock.. wat was wrong with him..why was he so irritated & fighting with a small boy like this. Geet slowly rested her hand on maans shoulder trying calm him down..who was busy fighting with Amy..who was just a 2nd grader. Maan snapped his shoulder..
dodo.. yeh humare ghar main nahi rahenga..bus..
then he looked at rany..woh bhi nahi rahenga
then scanned the man who was now approaching them holding back rany.. how wanted to hit Maan as well.. aur yeh bhi nahi..
Geet - teehk hain..phir main bhi nahi rahoon ghi..she said it turning her lips & crossing her arms around amy rather protective manner
he was taken a back with her statement. She was leaving him for them.. amy kept hitting Maan.. with his legs & hands...wat ever could reach him..hit him.

Maan just stood numb looking at her.. she actually said that!! he wondered why he was feeling so hurt. He looked at her emotional doomed eyes. She could read his eyes... his eyes only claimed her..meri dodo.. as they could hear amy scream in the background meri dodo ..hain.. tumhari nahi.. go away!!
dodo chodo mujhe
.. he was trying to snap out of geets hands
rahul held his shoulder.. amy chodo mama ko...
maan's ears..suddenly.. turned it concentration towards rahul.. chodo MaMa ko!!
he looked at Geet...
thats when amy kicked him again..real hard.. oops!! caught him off guard. quiet close to where it shouldn't be.. he looked at Geet in disbelieve & fainted!! thud!!!!!!!!.. nothing made sense.. it was dark.. dodo..mama.. that man!! rany.. that devil.. sardar...even jr ballu

after an hr!!! he could see stars dangling in front of his eyes.. white..black..black.. ??? slowly..some spots of colors..he could hear
main ne tumhe phelen hi kaha tha we won't say in this house..the male voice said..
amy - main yanha se nahi javonga ..yeh mera ghar hain
rany - dad.. this is not fair
amy - dodo u tell him to go away

Maan slowly opened his eyes to focus on the people around.. the origin of the voices.. by now he knew that every one hated him here & that sarda kid was the worst of the lot!!!.. sadly even his dodo supports those devils!! he tried to get up.. Geet immediately held him.. yeh kya kar rahen ho genie.
Amy & ramy looked at him angrily.

Maan made a baby face.. she caressed his temple.. rahul looked away & told the boys to leave them alone for a while. Amy came & held her tight so did rany.
Maan looked at rany.. I don't like u he made a complaining face to geet & then looked at amy.. & u..
rahul was pulling them away.. amy shot a fuming look to Maan.. I know that!!! ..he said it bitting his teeth
Geet closed her eyes & looked at rahul for help. He immediately distracted them.. who is going to help me fill the pool again..
amy - me
ramy - me !!
ballu barked & joined them..

there was a complete silence in the room after the kids left.
Maan crossed his arm on his chest & made a angry face. She knew he was angry.. so many things he didn't know.. & knowing like this all of a sudden ..it would be so difficult for him.. especially he !!! oh god he is so possessive abt her. Before she could say anything..
he removed his shirt.. her eyes popped out.. she followed his hands as they unbutton each buttons..her eyes widened & she looked around. He removed his shirt & swinged around her & made her wear it angrily.. yeh kya phena hain.. she almost smiled at his possessiveness. He buttoned the shirts angrily.. not looking at her. She felt a shiver down her as his hand reached above her curve closing the button. He was so angry didn't realize ..continued closing further down.. she held his hand as he reached the button resting on her curve..reality stuck.. he pulled his hands away like he got a current shock.

She smiled blushing & looked down. He was still angry. He crossed his arms & turned his back to her.
Ummhhh...ummhh.. she cleared her throat
mujhe tum se baat nahi karni.. tum mujhe bina batya chaliayen..
mana ki main naraz tha.. I left.. lekin that was to delhi.. not NY

- BLOG maitri part 42-
Precap
Geet manavofying Maan & the boys..uff..bechari geet
-PREV PART 41 NEXT PART 43-
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ho dear..
so many puzzles...

I still think the kids are NT's.. Maan behaving like kid.. I think after years it became role reversal.. genie dodo aur dodo genie ban gaya..

I didn't like Rahul..yaar.. please clear it sooon...

I think now Maan will stay in this house only.. and his war with amy and ramy for his dodo...

Please continue soon dear..


Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sameenaas

Hmmm...!!!! Feeling sleepy...🤢 🤢 Aur kitna time lagega colour karne mein??? 😕 😕

Waiting eagerly to know what happens next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ufff!!!! Finally we got an update 😊 😊 😊
But wats this mama!!! Why is Amy calling Geet Dodo... Why do I feel that he is Maan's son... Infact.. If Geet is his mom...then Maan has to be the father... There's no other choice 😉 😆 😆

Update was awesome..worth waiting!!!!

Now I think Im getting it... Rany is Rahul n Nt's child living in Geet n Maan's house... Also May be Geet is doing all this for Nt's sake... But wat is Amy's history????

Thanx for the update Di... Cont soon

BTW I'M SECOND... YEYYY!!!! WOOOHHOOO!!! 😆
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I had to catch up with the part 41 first & now read 42 too ...Loved it ... can't wait for the next part
Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the most awaited... still dreamtic update to come ????? 😉
Muski ur raising our curiosity bar to the level of no where...
Hey Babaji Geet is the mom of those 2 kids who ,what ,how,...😕😲
literally gone crazy what is going on...
confusion every where I hope they are Naintara's children...
hhheiii
continue soon dear
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...this is becoming so interesting...plz plz plz update more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!
I'm loving it !

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