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Posted: 14 years ago
WOAH...!! Great update...👏... "KS" a horror movie...manpreet fell on floor laughing🤣
i love dodo like anything... she's such a swthrt😳

It was naintara at the end...haina??... n she was defo talking about maan... i'm dead sure... n boys r naintara's sons...
Me waiting anxiously for next update...😍
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskan, Lovely update. Maan finally realised his feelings. Geet in US? who was she talking to? Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!! Did i read it clearly.. Maan was... *ahem ahem*
But I loved his trick to get Geet out of his room.
TO whom Geet was talking too. Is it Naintara?
but wat is she doing at US. who are those boys.
I guess its Naintara's children. Just my guess.
Waiting for maan to search his Geet... plz. update sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update. the maan's realization is good. i hope he doesn't deny anymore eventhough still he is not sure. feel bad for him can't even find his own feelings. why geet left couldn't understand and who is the third person.

pls update soon. anxiously waiting. can't wait to see that maan gets hold of her or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
really luved it alot ...
do update it soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey congrats for ur 5th thread and maan is in trouble waiting for the next part do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ohk m so so sorry for commenting this late but seriously u knw m held up with exams ...done with 4 ,2 are still remaining ...

Bdw congregates on 5th thread hope its just keep growing😊

Giving big teeth showing smile 😃m commenting for parts 35 to 39

The whole part when geet was dancing with abhi nd maan jealous was fantastic 😆👏 ...poor geet unintentionally becam reason for simaran's break up ...the rage in his eyes 😍...nd the drunk maan nd night thing😳 ...*kuch kuch hota hai *😳

But how i wonder geet then nrv felt anything like that ...i loved the part of next morning when maan woke up half conscious geet started hitting him shouting *YOU FORCED ME *🤣🤣🤣...nd maan's reaction checking her nd his clothes all ON ...hilarious🤣

But maan toh bach gya tha parathe se ...😆

fire accident part was really painful nd 😭 but brilliantly depicted ...so all the while he was just imagining geet ...geet wasn't there with him ???

Ufff muskaan first I had to thingk what is KS 😆...i started thinking name of KJ'S movies 😆...noe i got it ...man ...thank u so much in maitri u have showed past maan human totally mast boy🤗 ...a true true LADKA ... bad boy ...but good by heart ...😆so now he dznt watch KS ???😆

this part made me ROFL 🤣...poor maan cuz of his dodo can't even properly enjoy the ...movie volume off karke🤣 ...ladko ko kitne disspoinment hote hai when they r disturbed while watching such thing ... it was again a hilarious part 🤣 ...if geet had switched on the TV then ...😉 mana ki toh band baj gayi hoti 🤣

was geet tokign to NT cuz she is havng two kids i guess ...😊

and ye kaunsa maan trouble me hai past vala aut present vala ...

awesom awesome great updates loved each nd every part 👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!! M jst loving it... I cant believe maan can be so naughty i mean watchin that movie. Cant stop laughing at maan plight when his dodo came into room while he was watching that movie...lol. Very curious to know who is it whom geet is talkin too. Hope maan finds his dodo. Whole update was superb gr8. Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
DOUBLE UPDATES SO PLEASE CLICK LIKE BUTTON ON BOTH..😭😭😭 PLZ...
COMMENTS ALSO... i FEEL LIKE WRITING MORE..AS I SEE ALL SUPPORT..
SACHI
MUCHI
~maitri~
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uff ho!!!
ok.. I have to rush now.. tum jaldi ghar punhcho.. please pick up the kids from school na
I will


Later in the day

Geet parked the car in front of the school waiting for the boys. As the bell rang.. two boys ran to her gave high five & missed the next one..
dodo!! teased the younger one...amy !! she complained..making a cute face.. he kissed her nose ..she smiled
where is my Indian lado's asked the elder one.. ghar main hain rany.. she said taking his school bag. She kissed them & settled then in the car.


Through out the drive they bombarded her with questions & things she got for them from India.
she gets a call...

u picked them
haan baba!!!
bus ghar punch rahi hoon..ok..bye just reaching
As the car pulled over at the the portico...she cut the call..
Rahul opened the door for the children
rahul - wat took u so long this time..gave a warm welcome hug to Geet.
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Geet - darji ka dabyat teehk nahi tha
rahul - kids were missing u
Geet - & u...
he rolled his eyes & walked in helping the kids settle
rany - dad.. we had a fight in school today
Geet looked curiously scanned both the boys..checking if they had any signs of injury
amy - dodo relax!!
Geet trying to be stern here.. - no fights kaha hain na
amy - I didn't fight
Geet immediately hugged him.. & kissed his forehead.. he snapped away in anger
rany - it was just a fight in school..not us
Geet sighed in relief..they always played this prank on her to make her tense.

Pune

Maan rushed to her flat & rang the bell continuously like he always does. He was getting restless & impatient. He pulled out his phone & tried calling her again. He was so lost that he didn't notice the lock on the door.. he kept banging the door.. until the neighbors came out & told him she is moved out for good to US.

He smiled..mockingly. His dodo can't just leave for good without telling him!! he didn't believe him. He tried to break the lock... how would u know?
I am the owner of this house
..he said it sternly calling for security now.
I rented this house to her only for few months. She was here to work on that some project ..umm...umm.. kuch ..magic.. I think..
Maan - how do u know she is gone to US
neighbor - thats wat she told me
Maan still couldn't believe she could leave without telling him. Mana ki he as angry but ..he hit the wall in frustration.
Maan - aapke pas unka US ka address hain
neighbor - I have..but I can't give it u
he rolled his eyes...it won't be that difficult for him to find that any way. He immediately called adhi & told him to book his tickets to US & also find geets address.
He just had a back bag. He really didn't care. He had to know where Geet was !! why did she leave like this ?? all this question were already driving him crazy . He tried his best to remain calm least could he. He reached NY next day. He rented a car & drew to the address given to him by adhi. He entered the address in the GPS & followed the direction. How bad it could be..he thought!!

he drove for quiet a distance & finally reached the street. But now got confused with the location. He was so frustrated..long journey then.. this drive was not as smooth as he expected... he thought he was cool when he decided to ask someone direction of the house. He looked around..one side was all odd numbers .. & the number he was looking was even.. he gave up.. saw few foreigners.. then decided to ask indians.. he spotted two boys playing foot ball. .. actually soccer.. he stopped the car close to them.. they cutely stopped playing & moved away from the way.. the younger one took his bottle to sip water while the elder one wiping his sweat..

Maan lowered the tinted window glass to look at boys closely.. he was never good with kids any way!! but still he had to be nice.. he was the one in need. He cleared his throat & asked them for the house number. The two boys looked at each other... & then looked at him. The younger one frowned & immediately directed him to the left opposite.. u need to take a left & drive for until u see a Mc donalds


ramy - held his hand
amy snapped his hand & nicely smiled.. to Maan
Maan smiled back pleasantly.. & thanked them

the moment Maan turned the car.. amy broke the bottle on the road giving a naughty look to ramy

ramy...laughed..as they stood right at the address

- BLOG maitri part 40-
Precap
Maan in for a shock
-PREV PART 39 NEXT PART 41-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omggg... she's married!! i can feel it!!!! wait i don't know... but i feel like she's married but she loves maan... and her husband? is supporting her?? hmmm... interesting cliffhanger... and there's kids involved!! please continue soon!!!


Wait!! I'm the first one! First time.. yay!!! love u muskan <3333
Edited by summikhan - 14 years ago

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