~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 5 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
I was thinking that Geet might have reached there and have saved him.. but Maan trying to save the photograph.. that scene was awesome.. I was laughing and crying at the same time..

I want Maneet to be togather sooon.. hope Maan will be able to find that the mysterious man in his dod's life is her genie only..

Please continue soon dear..


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part..
so maan was hallucinating..
real or hallucination dodo saved genie..
loved stretcher and photo part..
if he is so much in love with her then y he is not admitting it..
missed dodo in this update..
thanks for PM..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Emotional kar ditta tussi ne Mussi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on new thread dear...
Edited by spvd - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 38
wow...
Maan was actually hallucinating that Geet was also in the fire...
he had even rushed to the hospital like that...
if u could write more about this my confusion will be cleared...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
even in that alcoholic state...all he could think of was DODO...

wow... it was so magical Muskan...

lovely update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
woow muskaan eagerly looking forward for the update now!
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Posted: 14 years ago
~maitri~
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He opened the back door of the car, carried her to the stretcher, he checked the snap!! that to him felt it was his dodo!! tears welled down continuously fearing the pain she would be bearing due to the heat.. he was going mad..
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he remembered now screaming & walking pass that door with his dodo in the stretcher..dr!!!
he kept looking at her snap!! he was imagining her presence all the while. he actually imagined her..& saved his own life...irony..

He knew she was his best friend, he would do anything for her.. it is not now ..it was like this ever since.. wat is this he was feeling now. She is the only person who knew him inside out..except his naughtiness..bit..he smiled sadly, but that was because she was unaware of such things.. she was too nave..he chuckled thinking about closest encounter of getting caught by her!!!
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it had passed mid night & he was watching a KS movie in his dvd. It was getting really hot in the room.. he was at the verge of...(u all know wat muskan am talking about..wink wink 😉😉) breathing heavily sweating.. the scene on the screen was the making out seen of the raja & maya. It was the perfect evening he was so excited about watching this movie ever since it had hit the theaters..especially the unedited version, finally he had got the pirated version... he had managed to finish his dinner early & made sure dodo & ballu had gone to sleep. He waited to be 100% sure..he laughed at his plight!! he probably was never so scared even in his house back home in delhi to be caught by his parents..but then they would never barge in his room like his dodo does!!

Getting caught was not an issue...then giving an explanation IS !!! he chuckled with the thought. He was really having fun.. his pants were slightly off.. his hand was were it shouldn't be.. when dodo came in cutely .. he immediately took the pillow & mounted on his arousal that was throbbing ..he gulped hard..looking at her & then at the screen were the scene was raja & maya's hitting their climax...he gulped again
Geet - kya dehk raha ho?
He was painting heavily.. & frustrated to the core. He couldn't say anything especially knowing anything he does or says will lead to him explaining her something he can't. He cleared his throat nervously..he thanked his stars the volume was in mute. She came closer..he immediately turned it off. She wiped his sweat..he snapped his face...kya kar rahi hain dodo
she laughed..
his heart skipped a beat..did she make out something.. or she saw..he immediately checked himself. He sighed in relief he looked ok !! with the pillow covering his act!!
Geet - u were watching a horror movie na
she said teasingly .& giggled.
He rolled his eyes
she pulled his cheek..
😡😡😡GGGRRR.. the last thing he wanted at that time is her touching him
for god sake he was so..dam aroused!!!
tu ja mujhe piture dehkne de..he said it in a rude tone
she thought for a moment.. horror movie hain!!!
He thought!! ..he better..say yes..knowing she is darpok kind & won't insist to watch with him.. Oh no.. watch with him.. babaji!!!..he looked up
Geet - u turned off the volume so that u don't scared
she laughed teasingly again
he was getting irritated now..dodo..javoo
she turned but then plunked herself next to him.. mujhe bhi dehkna hain
wat he was fearing all this while..his heart fell low.. his arousal was long forgotten
he tried to play safe..knowing her...dodo bahut darwani hain
she stuck closer to him.. unknowingly holding his arms.. genie.. volume off hain na
he was enjoying her plight..without even seeing the movie..she was already dead scared.
Lagavoon..jada kuch nahi hain.. ek bhootni hain.. jo raja ko.. his thought back to the scene
Lagavoon .. he asked pointing the remote at the TV again..
nahi...she ran out..screaming
he fell backward laughing...KS..horror movie!! he laughed..
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smile broke on his teary face as he sat outside the dr's cabin. She meant the world to him.. all this uncontrollable attraction he was feeling around her was just outburst of his inner hidden..buried feeling that he never knew even existed.


He stared at her snap at the features that was so deep carved in him. Something was driving him forward, pushing him to deepen their relation... still wondering could it get deeper than it already was. He closed his eyes & kissed the forehead of the snap.. he could feel her skins warmth underneath his.. was he feeling the first stirrings of love!!!! or was he merely trying to convince himself that he was capable of experiencing that emotion truly. Finally nothing mattered ..but just her!!! the emotion she filled him with..the beautiful gift..she gave him.. she made him live again..fall in love with self again..but with it all came with a grave responsibility. Her happiness!!!his brows knotted... reminded of R.I.P..she said the other day.

He sighed reassuring self..he would do anything to see her happy. Her happiness had become inextricably intertwined with his. They were no longer two separate people he knew it now. They had a relationship that even time couldn't evanescent. His focus went to the phone that kept ringing


he looked at the screen it was adhi, he anxiously answered expecting some news about his love!! his life!! his world..
adhi - sir Geet mam has not come to office today.
Maan really got worried wat happened to her.. he had to be there to see her right now.. he took the next available flight to pune.

New York Airport

Geet finished her immigration procedure & moved to collect her baggage. She switched on her US number..immediately her phone rang. She almost jumped back..
haan baba land kar diya..baggage counter pain hoon
did u meet him
Geet was quiet
no point hiding I can make out, just hearing the happiness in ur voice all the while
she was embarrassed.
Tumhe kya laga..I will mind it
she bit her lips
common yaar I am happy for u.. nothing more than seeing u happy
paka na
aacha usen kaha
main kaisen
uff ho!!!
ok.. I have to rush now.. tum jaldi ghar punhcho.. please pick up the boys from school na
umm

- BLOG maitri part 39-

Precap
Maan in for a trouble!!
-PREV PART 38 NEXT PART 40-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski...not able to get, Geet in US and whom is meeting ah!
Edited by zaara2212 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab update::
Haha loved maans trick of scaring geet away from watching the movie
Wonder hu geet was talking to
Cont soon Xx...

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