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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

me here for another 5-10 min!

nahin toh i will read later!
sorry for my irregularity on all the threads!
really messed up right now!
by the way, i am crazy over aparichit...I think its soon going to be up there on my list with TM(which you knw is my obsession!) abhi bhi its on number 2 already!
no 1 to apko pata hi hai😳
love you di!
take care!
will be back in 2 days😃
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Congo for the nee thread ...

waiting for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
me too eagerly looking forward to!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

di, how long is it gonna take?😲

me wanna read and go!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

part 38

The pain made him think.. he tried to find words to describe his feelings that abides within his soul. But it is so deep and it is so hurtful, he didn't know how this feeling came to abide, he felt it was taking over his whole life. He pulled his purse out & looked at her snap, he caressed over it softly & touched it to his forehead. I miss u dodo..I miss u so very much.

Couple of days that passed by ..just killed him.. he got really worn out & called her. Her phone came switched off!!.. he looked at the snap & kept complaining..koi aisen chodke jata hain kya? Tum tho janthi ho mujhe kitna gusa aat hain.. phir bhi humesha meri baat nahi manthi..he held the snap close to his heart & rolled over. The whole day he kept trying her number.. it came switched off!! he told adhi to call her office & connect the line, though it was beyond him.. to let anyone come between them!! but he had to!! he so desperately wanted to speak to her.

Maan took out the snap from his wallet & placed it on the table..he smiled..seeing her smile..ballu in her hand..2plats.. he kept looking at the pic..he didn't know for how long!! then the thought how did it the snap survive the fire strike him. He immediately held it closer...really close to his heart.. pressing it harder..harder..until his heart beat could feel the snap through the layers of cloths. The fear , the pain.. his heart felt heavy..he actually emptied the wallet in the fire.. all the papers that were there fell down even the wallet itself was in fire.. so how did the snap survive.. he remembered clearly that the whole house was burned down & he doesn't even know how he survived that fire.. his dad had pay a big money to the damages caused due to the fire. It took him more than a month to recover from the burns he had suffered..then how!!!


he called his daadi..this was for the first time he was calling her in last 7yrs..
Maan - daadi
she was surprised - haan beta..aap teehk ho na
Maan - who saved me from the fire accident
Daadi was drawn back to the horrible memory of past..that consumed the happiness of their family.
She replied in a heavy tone - abhi yeh sab kyun
Maan - who saved me?
His voice was getting impatient & restless
Daadi - humne nahi pata beta.. we all got a call that u r in the hospital so we rushed to see u
Maan was thinking.. trying really hard to recollect wat exactly happened..

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he remembered, himself surrounded by fire..his eyes was filled with fumes.. his consciousness doomed in alcohol.. he couldn't walk out of the flame.. he couldn't move..slowly every thing around him was on fire.. his cloths... his shoes.. everything!!..natural instinct.. the burning sensation.. he tried to snap out of the fire that had now reached skin deep. He was screaming in pain, but he couldn't move as the alcohol was too much in his blood to let him have control on him. He tried fighting, he couldn't. It was paining, hurting as each skin layer began to give way to the heat surrounding him. His lungs were filled with gases..he choked..he collapsed...he saw kavitha's snap burning.. a victorious smile teased his lips..even in that agonizing pain.
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His heart paced heavily just thinking about that moment.. but the question was unanswered how did the snap didn't burn.
Daadi - tumhari halat itni karab thi, hume use waqt kuch nahi soch raha tha
Maan - who is the dr who treated me
Daadi - dr rathode I think
he cut the call & rushed to the hospital.

He barged into the dr's cabin while he was attending to another patient.
Nurse & warden tried to stop him.
Dr excused himself from the patient he was attending knowing maan's temper.
dr. - Mr Khurana
Maan came really close to him & held his arms - who got me here
dr was bit lost ..when?
Maan - 7 saal phelen..woh fire accident
dr tried to recollect hard - nahi its been 7yrs I don't think I remember anything
Maan shook him hard - dr..I need to know.. he pulled out the snap & said I want to know who saved me & this snap..plz dr
the moment he saw the snap..he was remembering something but was still not sure..
he called the nurse & asked if she remembered anything.
Nurse - I remembered very clearly Mr. khurana..actually it was a strange incedent thats why I remeber
Maan 's whole attention was towards her
u came in rushing from the main door pushing an empty stretcher.. u had probably suffered 50-60% of burns ur dress was all torn.. u were soaked in blood.. u were screaming...dr.. dr...meri dodo..meri dodo!! every one rushed to catch u.. I checked the stretcher, it had this same snap... After u recovered I had only slipped this snap back into ur dress. It was pretty strange..actually u were burned & u were caressing the snap fearing it would have burned!! like it was someone lying on the stretcher

maan - r u sure there was no one in the stretcher
nurse nodded
dr - yes yes.. u were saying again & again.. meri dodo ko bacha lo.. I burned her.. I will never be able to forgive myself if something happens to her...
Maan sunk down ...on the chair.. thinking
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His lungs were filled with gases..he choked..he collapsed...he saw kavitha's snap burning.. a victorious smile teased his lips even in that agonizing pain...he turned towards the area where the fire was least.. when his hand fell on the snap.. he caressed..it it felt like he was caressing his dodo .. her soft skin, felt so smooth..he hugged her pulling her closer.. kissed her madly.. I miss u..I miss..u a lot.. she hugged him tighter..pulling him away from the fire..he felt her back was warm..he felt her skin sweating.. her breath was choking.. she held on to him.. genie..in pain. He lifted her at once above the surface that was burning..fuming. The legs that couldn't move.. now seemed to find its way.. the hands that were not in his control.. seemed to carry her.. his eyes that were refusing to focus now painfully seeked help to rescue his life.. that seemed to be getting lifeless every passing minute. His burn..his pain didn't mater any more..actually he couldn't even feel anything. all he could see, feel was his dodo. He kicked opened the door that was burning.. he dogged the burning log that threatened to fall on them.. he ran down the steps..trembling.. missing few steps, he was careful not to hurt her. She clung on to him lifelessly. He placed her softly at the car seat & drove crazily to the hospital.. he ran through the ramp... plat form..he opened the back door leaving the car still on ignition & carried her to the stretcher, he checked the snap!! that to him felt it was his dodo!! tears welled down continuously fearing the pain she would be bearing due to the heat.. he was going mad..
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he remembered now screaming & walking pass that door with his dodo in the stretcher..dr!!!
-BLOG maitri part 38-
PS... maan was hallucinating
Precap
Maan looking for his dodo!!
-PREV PART 37 NEXT PART 39 -
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

OMG!!!

I SANDWITCHED THE POST!
YAYYY...
ME FIRST
I am so happy to be first after sooo long!
coming to the update...I always thought that NIGHT IT WAS ACTUALLY Geet who saved him, it was Geet who took care of him, but, it seems it wasn't!!
But, i still seem to wonder what about the knowing and known sensations he gets when he goes close to her...
i mean, i still doubt that it was actually her and that the hospital staff is hising it on her request!
it might soung really crap to you
sorry!
they have spent a night together for sure!
but, me still confused by Maan😕
Love you!
thanks!
Swati
Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
I knew it!!!! I knew it!!!! U will be updating maitri now... See ab toh humare dil bhi mil gaye!!!!! Waitinggg 😉

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Yeyyy!!!!! Me second after a long time!!!!
Loved the update... But I wish it was Geet who saved him n took care of him... But its ok tasveer se bhi kaam chala lenge 😉 😉 😉

Even in such a state of sub conciousness, Maan cud not see Geet's photo burning n thought that it was actually Geet... Poor guy!!!!! Kavitha jab chod ke chali gayi tab Geet ki importance pata chali aur apni galti ka ehsaas hua... So bad of him!!!!!

Anyways... Hopefully he goes to her place n tells her how much he loves her as soon as possible...
Cont sooon!!!
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Brilliant emotional part.
loved it.

will defo comment details later.
continue soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
aww.. 💔.. he hallucinated when he saw the snap on fire?! loved the part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aakhir uski dodo ne hi usse bachaya tha

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