My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122 - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divi4u

Sabse phle thnx 4 d SMS 🤣

Awesome part Stuti👏👏👏

Juzzz loved it ❤️

Was 😍 while reading

Naitik ka Airhostess ko dekhna thn Aksh ka naraz hona?..wwwooowww😍

Naitik ka Aksh ko seat belt dalte hue kissy karna😳😳 ?.. hayyy😍 ?. Aksh ka blush blush☺️

N Naksh k saare kisses😳😳 ?. Too god👏👏??..i just wonder abhi ye haal hai toh shadi k baad kyaaa hoga 🤣 ??ye dono toh chodenge nahi ek dusre ko 🤣

Good tht u entered mera bataya hua part😛😛😛

"Akshi feels elephants jumoing in her stomach" too good hai yaar 🤣

N best part?..is our treat😳😳??jitni tareef karo utna kam hai re👏👏 ?.. yum yum 🤣

N its good tht "she is still kuwari"🤣

Overall a very very very good part👏👏👏👏

Sorry 4 d late comment?.yaar tumko tease karne mei maja aata hai😛😛😛

N sabr ka phal meetha hai k nahi😃😃

Update soon buddy👍🏼

updated my post on page # 48😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divi4u

updated my post on page # 48😉😉😉


kya maza aata hai aapko mujhe pareshan karne mein haan?? kya di.. sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.. jaanti hun aur dekh bhi,liya hai... ek hi path hamesha nai sikhana chahiye😆
elephants jumping in her stomach🤣 lolz.. i had loved that line.. glad u liked it.. abhi mujhe aap yeh batao... ki kya main sagai sip karungi toh chalega?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva


kya maza aata hai aapko mujhe pareshan karne mein haan?? kya di.. sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.. jaanti hun aur dekh bhi,liya hai... ek hi path hamesha nai sikhana chahiye😆
elephants jumping in her stomach🤣 lolz.. i had loved that line.. glad u liked it.. abhi mujhe aap yeh batao... ki kya main sagai sip karungi toh chalega?

sip ???? u mean skip...y????
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Posted: 14 years ago
divi di.. haan skip.. ill directly show mumbai after marriage... sagai mein kya dikhau?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

divi di.. haan skip.. ill directly show mumbai after marriage... sagai mein kya dikhau?

theek hai abhi skip kar do...thn after theri wedding n SR n all ... flashback mei dikha dena...jbi naksh apne old memories cherish kar rahe honge😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divi4u

theek hai abhi skip kar do...thn after theri wedding n SR n all ... flashback mei dikha dena...jbi naksh apne old memories cherish kar rahe honge😃😃

oh wow... awesome idea... aap bhi ff likhna chalu kar do di...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

oh wow... awesome idea... aap bhi ff likhna chalu kar do di...

nahi mujhe FF likhne mei koi int nahi hai... haan i like giving free advices😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divi4u

nahi mujhe FF likhne mei koi int nahi hai... haan i like giving free advices😃😃

thank you for this free free free advice! lolzzz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
stuti...jaldi update karna...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago


First of all... i wud like to give a biggg hug... to all my readers... wid ur support and love.. i have completed 50 pages of my post... 🤗 thank u'll sooo much!

-Link to Part 7-

PART 8

(i had to read the last part to remember wer had i ended 😆)

Back to MUMBAI!!!!

Naksh have got engaged recently.. but sad for them... they have been sooo busy wid their family that they have not even talked over the phone for the past 2 weeks... so.. after coming to Mumbai.. the first thing they are planning... is meeting up...

Naitik calls akshi...

N; hello...

A; hi naitik...

N; hi meri sweet heart... aap kaisi hai... mujhe miss karti hai yaa nai???

A; mein theek hun naitik.. aap kaise hai? Mein toh aapko bahut mis karti hun... aap mujhe miss karte hain yaa nai??

N; aap meri baat toh kijiye hi mat... aapne meri neend... mera chaen.. sab kuch cheen kiya hai... aapse baat kiye bina naa toh mujhe neend aati hai... aur naa mein shanty se baeth pata hun... bas.. sirf aapki yaad satati rehti hai

A; blushes... dhatt...

N; kyun.. meri mangetar ki yaad nai aa sakti mujhe?

A; kyun nai aa sakti.. aani chahiye.. nai aaegi toh kuch gadbad hogi.. starts laughing!

N; laughs back! Main aapki shakl dekhne ke liye tadab gaya hun akshara...

A; mein bhi naitik...

N; toh kal milna hai? Dinner ke liye?

A; haan.. kal chalega... lekin as usual mujhe 10 baje tak hostel pahuchna hai...

N; toh hum kal 5 baje milte hai... mein aapko pick karne aa jaunga..

A; haan... is baar Chinese khaenge right?

N; jaisi aapki marzi.. ma'am!

The next day...

Naitik's leave is still on.. and he is sitting on his bed thinking about... he had almost predicted this state and he had kept an alarm of 5.30 so that he can be ready on the correct time...

Naitik got out of his dream and went to his cupboard... he stood there for full 4 mins thinking wat to wear... he took out all his fav shirts.. and messed them up on his bed... he tried each one of them but was still unable to decide wat to wear!

Finally, he took out a red shirt.. and wore it... he applied his perfume... gelled his hair.. and got ready for his date!

Here in the hostel.. akshi had already decided to wear her red churidar set... wid simple design... yet.. she looked adorable... she held up the suit perfectly well.. wid a clutch in her hand... open silky hair... she left for her date... naitik was on time this time... or rather akshi wasn't early this time...

They sat in naitiks car... akshi fastened her seat belt... and was waiting for naitik to start driving... but.. to her surprise.. he didn't... she looked upto him... naitik was continuously staring at akshi...

Akshi blushes... with her face down.. she asks him

A; kya hua naitik?

N; shh... mujhe disturb mat karo... mein thodi der duniya ki sabse khoobsoorat ladki ko dekhna chahta hun...

A; naitik...

N; he places his finger over her lips... he stares at her...in her eyes...

Akshi stares back... eye lock...

For a minute.,. it seems as if the whole world has stopped... they are the only ones present there... but they are suddenly shaken by a loud car honk..

Naitik gets irritated... looks in the rear view mirror...

The person in the car behind them is signalling naitik to go ahead... naitik is irritated...

He drives rashly... akshi keeps her right hand over his left hand... wich is over the gear...

Naitik looks at her... akshi closes her lids and opens them again... signalling him to chill... naitik is a lil relaxed now...

Theres a haunting silence in the car... akshi breaks it

A; hum kahan jaa rahe hai naitik?

N; meri fav place par...

A; haan... wow... mujhe kabse aapki fav place dekhni thi...

N; kyun?

A; kyunki fav place dekhkar insaan k bare mein kitna kuch pata chal sakta hai..

N; so toh hai... chalo.. dkhte hain aappko mere bare mein kya kya pata chalta hai...

A; smiles...

After some time.. they reach naitiks fav place...

(i have never seen such a place in Mumbai... but have always dreamt that there shud be one)

Naitik gets her to a green garden... a big park.. covered wid greenery... there are some benches kept at distances... other than that.. theres mere greenery...

This place was near the beach.. so there was sound of waves hittin the shore... there was sooo much of peace... there was sooo much of fresh air,... the sun was setting at that time.. the light of the sun gave an usual beauty to the place... akshi was completely mesmerised by this... she kept on staring at the place... she felt as if she was brought into heaven... naitik all this while was standing behind her... seeing her soo happy... he went towards her... and hugged her... she turned and hugged him back... she held him for almost 2 mins... then they lossened each other... they went and sat on the bench...

Akshi was very happy... she broke the silence...

A; sooo beautiful naitik..

N; haan...l yeh jagah bahut sundar hai.. meri fav place hai.. yeh jagah kisi ko nai malum hai.. sirf aapko leke aaya hun mein idhar... jabhi bhi mein upset hota hun... mein akela mehsus karta hun.. mujhe shanty chahiye rehti hai.. mein idhar aata hun... yeh jagah mere andar ki saari pareshani ko khaa jati hai...

A; yeh jagah kitni sundar hai naitik... wow...

N; toh,... aapko mere bare mein kya pata chala?

A; mujhe yeh pata chala... ki aapko scenec beauty bahut pasand hai.. aapko peace.. shanti.. bahut pyaari hai.. aapko zyada shor nai pasand... aap yahan se jitni shanti milti hai.. unti kahin se bhi nai milti...

N; smiles... haan.. yeh jagah se mein bahut juda hua hun... aapko jabhi bhi mujhe doondhna ho.. aur aapko mein kahin bhi naa milu.. aapko mein idhar milunga...

A; smiles...

They spend more time in that beautiful place staring at the greenery.. at each other.. knowing each other better... then they have dinner at a restaurant.. and go to their homes.. akshi to her hostel😆

TO BE CONTINUED..

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-Link To Part 9-

Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago

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