My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#431

imagine anvi reporting this...

im being questioned.. are u excited..

Stuts: um... yea yea... ofcourse.. i mean its just 8 small parts and i reached 58 pages.. that so exciting.. i never expected.. umm.. u noe.. such a wonderful response.. umm... im very glad u noe... i mean its a fab experience.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva
imagine anvi reporting this...

im being questioned.. are u excited..

Stuts: um... yea yea... ofcourse.. i mean its just 8 small parts and i reached 58 pages.. that so exciting.. i never expected.. umm.. u noe.. such a wonderful response.. umm... im very glad u noe... i mean its a fab experience.

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i noo and then i come and say the best ff award goes to Sh

and then anvi once again asks you.. What would you like to say on receiving this award???

LOL

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: sejal719

i noo and then i come and say the best ff award goes to Sh
and then anvi once again asks you.. What would you like to say on receiving this award???

LOL

🤣🤣🤣

umm... i would first of thank all my readers.. and loyal followers of pyar hua chupke se.. who supported me... voted for me... and specially seju... my beft frnd.. who increaded my trp.. and made me win this award! ermm... wat else.. after all my work🤣🤣🤣 lolzzz... joking haan(last line was a joke.. no offence)

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

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umm... i would first of thank all my readers.. and loyal followers of pyar hua chupke se.. who supported me... voted for me... and specially seju... my beft frnd.. who increaded my trp.. and made me win this award! ermm... wat else.. after all my work🤣🤣🤣 lolzzz... joking haan(last line was a joke.. no offence)

im happy MY name is in there yaya :D... and yes ur my best friend as well... when u reach a 100 pgs we will have a party and when i reach 150 for my THIS is LIFE we will also have a party :D

and i was not offended lol ;p

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#435

sure sure.. now we'll stop spaming!

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#436

oh my thats all the trps u wanted tsk tsk and ok meet u in cc :D

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Stuti

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#437

-Link To Part 8-

PART 9

Its Saturday.. and its the day akshi works in the call centre at night..

Akshi is on her duty.. attendin calls and helping ppl..

Here, naitik is lying on his bed.. not knowing wat to do.. he is continuosly thinking of akshi.. their first meeting.. their first date... their first drive.. their first touch.. their first kiss... and their engagement...

Naitik knows that akshi works in a call centre.. he decides to call her..

Widout wasting time.. he picks up his phone.. and dials the no. By wich he could contact that call centre...

For the first 4 times he tries... someone else picks up the line.. but luck is wid him the next time.. the 5^th time he calls... akshi picks up the phone...

A;hello, tring tring communications, i hope u had a good day, would u like to invest in...

N; (cuts her off) hello...

A; recognises his voice instantly...

N; hello.. u der akshara

A; (jerks but whispers) naitik??? (shocked)

N; kyun.. mujhe kuch kaam tha.. mein aapse kaam ki baat karne waala tha.. aapne kya socha?

A; yes sir.. tell me.. wat do u want?

N; i just wanted the no.s of some nice Chinese hotels in the Mumbai suburban area...

A; (blushes) wat?

N; i said i wanted the no.s of some Chinese restaurants in Mumbai suburban area.. can i plz have them?

A; fumbles.. y-y-yes s-sir i w-wu-wud just sms them to u..

N; dnt u need my no. For it?

A; 982__ _____

N; kisiko mera no. Byheart hai..

A; u have called from this no. Sir...

N; im sure ur eyes are closed right now...

A; opens her eyes.. n-n-no.. d-dey are-are open...

N; shhh... i know u r nervous... i noe ur eyes were closed... akshara...

A; naitik...(filled wid emotions)
N; kya kal hum Chinese khaane bahar chale... in mein se kisi achchi hotel mein?

A; sure sir...

N; (happy) aap blue dress pehenna..

A; alright sir...

N; kal.. 7 pm.. same place as always..

A; perfect sir..

N; i love you..

A; (heart misses a beat) same to u sir..

N; bi.. gud nite.. take care.. miss me..

A; thank you for calling sir!

Akshi has mixed emotions.. shes happy... shes shocked... shes tensed.. shes surprised... shes emotional..

Both akshi and naitik cant pull off each others thots from their minds!

They both are very happy.. MADLY in love...

Next day.. morning...

Naitik sms's akshi...

N; gud morning sh..

A; whats sh?

N; sh means my sweet heart ❤️

A; blushes

N; smiles

(these are conveyed through smileys)

A; smiles back

N; aaj ka intezaar hai

A; mujhe bhi

N; chalo.. baadmein baat karte hai.. mein naha ke aata hun..

A; haan.. bi...

After sometime..

N; aaj time beet hi nai raha..

A; mera bhi vahi haal hai... time pass nai ho raha..

N; aaj mein aapse milne k liye kitna utsuk hun...

A; mein hamesha hoti hun.. aap sirf aaj hai?

N; mera woh matlab nai tha..

A; toh aap apna matlab samjhaiye na..

N; mera matlab tha.. ki aaj Sunday hai na.. time itna slow jaa raha hai.. kya batau aapko... dusre din kaam hota hai toh time pass ho jaata hai.. aaj ek ek second bhaari pad raha hai

A; haan naitik.. soo toh hai.. mujhe bhi eke k second kaatna mushkil ho raha hai...

N; kyun na hum apni mushkil aasaan kar de?

A; confused.. matlab?

Naitik takes some time to reply.. akshi is looking at the phone every other second.. waitin for his reply.. after 2 mins he replies..

N; lunch saath karte hai.. movie k liye jaate hai,.. thoda time pass karte hai.. dinner karte hai..

A; umm.. ok.. jaldi milte hai..

N; itni utaavli ho rahi hai aap..

A; dhatt..

N; smiles... 1 ghante mein aap tayyar ho jaeye!

A; hmm... c u soon!

TO BE CONTINUED...

Plz leave longer comments...

Firstly.. plz comment (divi di.. yeh aapke liye tha)

Plz press like button

Sorry if i forget to pm any1

hope ull like the part!

p.s. hows the promo?😆😉

-Link To Part 10-

Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago

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aastha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#438

me 1st again...😉

jst want 2 say u r gr8 ⭐️⭐️⭐️,,,,very nyc part👏👏👏,,,,naksh romance😍😍😍 is goin very gud,,,,nw make them marry soon toh we will be gettin nyc SMP also...😆😆😆

continue soon...😉😃

Edited by .aastha. - 14 years ago

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saru

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Posted: 14 years ago

#439

chotu... awesome part... I loved their call center conversation... it was soo sweet n cute... I loved that so much... so nxt part we r going to have naksh romantic date... waiting for that... please continue soon...

Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#440

RES

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SH u mean hearted person i tell u when i update but u cant :(

im so sad now 😭

😭

ok i lied im very surprised

but i will read this and make a new post :D

SO here is the LONG letter/ comment I promised you about 😃.. Happy reading 😳

Dear, Sh❤️

so 1st im was very confused in the fact that if i should open a new post and comment or continue in this one after a long long long battle i decided that i will just edit this one its better you know cause this will be the longest letter/comment ever and so ppl should know that you deserve more then just Nice part lol ...

ok so here goes my letter i hope its long enough if its not im very very very sorry😛... ok so lets talk about the Part first. i loved the part the best part i liked was the phone call in the call office it was soo cute.. and how akki kept saying yes sir 😆 so cute loved it.. and i thought she would really say i love you back to Natik but i guess i forgot that she was at work and when you work in call centers the phone calls get recoreded half the times.. but it was just so cute.. i love how akki is so independent and a strong character in this ff keep her like that dont make her weak and afraid of the in-laws 😆.i also like the usage of the word SH😉 i wonder where you got that from.. and talking bout that reminds me where is my credit for the promo/part.. i swear you said you would give me credit 😆 jking.. i loved the part and i cant wait for the next part cause i know it will be love filled and lots and lots of cute moments between Naksh...

Now i will talk about how to increase the TRP ( which is doing fine by the way) but it can always go better right... so umm what i do is i put my parts in installments ( cause there so long 😆😳) and i put up promos after every 5 parts i write and i post of notes asking for advice or asking readers what they want more in the story.. and i always get bunch of comments for that and then i respond to all those comments lol ( which i still have to do for both my ff and OS's LMAO😆).. ye so i guess if you follow those steps you will be in 2nd thread in no time and of course there's me spamming all over your ff so thats just epically awesome.

The letter is still not long enough so i shell continue lol i guess i will talk to you about how i feel about our friendship ( IN THE MOST CLEANEST WAY POSSIBLE 😆) yes so well we met on CCKP CC and at first i just came and said hi cause shi told me to join so im like ok... and i guess at first i didnt feel comfortable talking to ppl on IF thats why i had such low posts even tho im on IF from the past 4 yrs lol... but ye i went and talked to u ppl and i was like hmm there just like me. .and then i started to talk to you and i really liked it cause you would get all my double meaning jokes and it was just awesome.. and then i found out ur also a jugu and i guess thats where we hit it off right?... then it just became a routine to come on cc and just talk all day and night 😊.. and then u invited me to the yrkkh cc as well and i made good friends there and i was like im loving IF hehehehe... so yep i really do appreciate all the love and appreciation you guys shower me with.. and i dont know if this is a good thing but i swear you guys are becoming to be one of my best friends i have 3 but now you guys are also on that list.. and i find it that it is much easier to share my problems with you guys then my other friends and thats a very good thing so im so glad i came on cc and met all of you😳. but one thing i MUST tell is that even after cckp finishes we all have to still chat on IF maybe on the CC forum or on the cckp forum ( if they dont lock it). but yes we all have to remain friends forever 😳.

alright so now i think this is a good place to end my letter i have talked bout ur ff the suggestions and OH i forgot what i want to see next in the FF lol.. well im sure you know this but i want to see lots of love between Naksh and very very happy moments i dont want drama to soon 😆. ok so now i have talked bout ur ff and gave you suggestions and i have also said what i feel bout our friendship.. so im done the letter.. i want to write more but i need to respond to more then 50 comments lol so i better get on the job and read 1 more ff.. i have to start that from part 1 the ff already has 9 parts i hope there not long or else i will die lol.. and i have to figure out my uni things... so i must leave to do all that thus i must end this letter on a short note😭.. but i will be back to write another letter some day 😆...

and you best be reading all of this cause i will want a response to my letter lol 😛. i put my heart out for you to see 🤣 and who ever sees or reads this post 😆. alright Sh i will talk to u later tonight im going to go and do the outstanding work i listed above so be there on cc tonight and we will talk 🤗 by for now miss me 😳 love you and take care 🤗 ❤️...

Ps: I hope this is longer then you part or else your going to kill me 😆. and im going to change the font and all to make the letter look pretty 😃😳

Pss: oh i forgot sry one more thing.. if theres any mistake in the letter then my bad im to lazy to proof read it so if something is confusing then just ask me kay?

alright bye bye for now see you soon🤗

Psss: plz update soon i cant wait for the next part😆 ( forgot the most important part 😆)

Lots of Love,

Sejal<3

Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago