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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

It's my first time sharing a fan fiction in this thread. I've written many on other couples, but Tasha have made special place inside my heart.

I hope you'll enjoy it! Its emotional-thriller-of actions...

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Uff! Teri Yeh Ada

It's story of an innocent girl who is suffering from split personality disorder. Its about her struggle in proving that she isn't insane, but pure of innocent. It's her battle against the moral of society where daughters are consider as burden on their family.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Rao Parivaar

Ganpat Rao

Father of Baji and Nakusha

Baji Ganpat Rao

Eldest son of Ganpat

Elder brother of Nakusha

Younger brother-figure for his best friend Dutta

Nakusha/Simar Rao/Shergil

An innocent girl who is suffering from spilt personality disorder. Its about her struggle in proving that she isn't insane, but pure of innocent. It's her battle against the moral of society where daughters are consider as burden on their family.

Patil Parivaar

Aayi Sahib

Mother of Kalavati, Leelavati, Dutta, Roopvati

Kalavati

Married to Kishore

Elder sibling of Leelavati, Dutta, Roopvati

Leelavati

Married to Sudarshan

Elder sibling of Dutta, Roopvati

Dutta Shree Ram Patil

Underworld Don

Everyone's laada in Patil Nivwas

Brother-Figure for Baji

Another name for death itself is Dutta Bhao

Roopvati Patil

Most pampered member of Patil Nivwas

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

I hope you'll enjoy the Introduction...

Waqt always play games with humans' and their hearts. I never believe in destine, but today my destine itself is question mark.

I never raised my voice against Baba aur Bhai in their deeds, but than why they are forcing me into something that I don't want to do. I always obey their orders but they don't understand me. My fear of violence.

What different does it make? When my entire life grew up in the arms of violence. I was nearly two days old when I lost my mother and yet Bhai fought with Baba to keep me alive. Always I will be thankful to him, but I can't marry someone who belong to world of violence.

Tiny tear escape from my eyes...

I can hear the sounds of fireworks... its becoming louder and louder like the storm entering my life. I can hear the sounds of laughter.

Its time...

They are going to take me down... right now I can do anything to stop time... even time is against me.. please stop this painful dream-breaking deal with my fear.

I cried looking at my mother's picture...

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey welcum 2 d forum!! neva seen u here b4...

n congratz on d ff... soundz interesting...do carry on n pls add me 2 ur pm list.x

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P. K. Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

Pls add me 2ur pm list to😊

Me 2 will read n comment 2mro, n congrats honey on ur ff, it sounds rly different n interesting, and will be a treat 2 read how u justify both Naku's personalities...gr8 idea darling...

Hey I read the introduction...n I must say even 4 such a short paragraph it really did hold my full attn...so I am beginin 2 wonder wot d whole story will turn out 2b...I know I tuk a while but pls do upodate soon...cz dis story really seems 2hav n outlook wid a difference...I wud really luv 2 c how u bring Naku's disorder n make it n issue amongst the Patil Niwasis lool..😉

Hope u update soon...😊

Tink😉

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Iridescence

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey hun welcome to the forum u seem new :)

nice start

continue soon

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
hey welcum 2 d forum!! neva seen u here b4...

n congratz on d ff... soundz interesting...do carry on n pls add me 2 ur pm list.x

Awe... thank you so much! I might not make a pm list but I'll keep a list of mine own so whenever I update I can pm u guys.

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Pls add me 2ur pm list to😊

Me 2 will read n comment 2mro, n congrats honey on ur ff, it sounds rly different n interesting, and will be a treat 2 read how u justify both Naku's personalities...gr8 idea darlingTink😉

Take your time...
I'll wait for your reply and thanks for the support.