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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 178

Only with him did she find understanding !!! the karmic bond eternal she thought ..but all she got in return was pain. seeking his love, cravings his touch..all she got in return was his doubt. His misunderstanding..his ignorance.
Mother - thank god in IPS training center Hyderabad family was allowed. It was almost 1 and half year training.
He couldn't even imagine how Geet managed the tough training schedule with maansi being just six months.
Mother looked at the nun.. maansi was 6months then right
nun - yah almost 7 when they left.. remember her first word...
mother - oh !! I have it recorded ' wait i will play it for u
he wanted to listen .. off course he wanted to .. the nun ran down the hall way then to mothers office to get the cassette & the player. He was so impatiently waiting.. he paced restlessly twisting his fist..
mother - u won't believe wat was her first word
nun - actually only word until she turned 1 I guess.. that wat Geet said when she called us from Hydrabad.
It was the word he wanted to always hear her say ... but now only he realized why she couldn't .. his heart stopped.. when he heard his princesses first word so sweetly... cute sweet voice ..daddy..daddy..followed by geets voice.. daddy..mother she said daddy!!!
he played it 100 million times to hear it again & again & every time a tear fell from his eyes.
Mother - sab ko daddy..she used to say only daddy ..almost for six whole months.. Geet also never bother to change it... she loved it so much to hear that .. khabhi khabhi tho..she will just say ..daddy daddy ...daddy daddy ..daddy daddy ..daddy daddy ..
he hugged the tape closer to his heart as it played the voice of his little princesses..sweet... evry time he heard it... it felt like a spear has hit his chest, like he was bleeding from every part of his body, pain was ripping him up, tearing him apart, stinging his heart like a poisoned dart. Drowning him so deep in a well full of grief..reomorse.

He left from there to Hydrabad since the mother said she had some personal contacts. He called dev & made arrangements to fund the church. He called Daadi & cried.. he played the tape ..crying like a baby.. Daadi her first word was daddy!!! see she spoke so fluently.. she didn't stutter .. not even once.. there was a feel of proud & pain in his voice..
Daadi she stutters because of me!! he voice ached.. Daadi kyun Daadi!! he screamed in grief why me!!! failing yet again miserably to conceal his pain. Now he realizing the words of geet when she had told him she never stutters.. maansi was so overwhelmed to see him tht even the first word she ever spoke.. couldn't e fluent enough... wat on earth he has gone & done...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4OjXEhq_hEo[/YOUTUBE]
song suggested by swati
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He reached Hydrabad training center. He needed special permission to enter the premises. He discovered how well Geet performed. She was a record setter in every thing. Her name was listed in the best ever passed out candidates. How proud he felt standing in the hall of fame where her name was on top. . he met the dean of the school.
Dean - Gk!!! she was the best officer we had. Though she took her leniency in private life but she made it up by breaking the records on every field. U know something, every one had a breaking point..but she ..she didn't had nun!!!
Maan curiously looked at him.
Dean - while training we make groups ok.. & then the group members are kept in isolated rooms & tortured to give out their peers name. Some one broke in a day..someone in 2..but she.. u just couldn't break her.. the more pain & torture u give her.. she seemed happier.. like she associated pain with something pleasant. She smiled more at the end of the 72hr without food..water..isolation.. pata nahi..aisen kya khushi paa li thi usne..
he knew it was him she thought about... it was him she associated with pain.. wat else had she given her... pain..just pain.. still why did she cherish him.. why !! he shed anguished tears, so strong & unbearable that he wished he was dead.
Dean - Its a big loss to the nation.
Those were really big words coming from such a big officer. Gk was dead for every one.
Maan dipped his head & walked out.
He saw the first play school his little princesses attented. She could have been 2 then. Oh!!! my baby's first day in school!! he had the album with him.. that Geet had created for Mk.. it had him carrying her & dropping her.. her cheeks were all red..crying.. nose was red too.. big big tears dropping.. she didn't want to go!! how he wished he was their, he would have never let his little princesses go.. he would have done anything to stop those tears from dropping.. just anything. But guess Geet had to put her in play school so that she was not left alone at home, while she was in the training. He had no clue how on earth he was going to undo all this.

He had spend good 2months visiting each & every city Geet had lived in. each & every school maansi ever studied. All the achievements of Geet as Gk.. all the longings of maansi. How things were getting complicated as maansi grew older. All about her double promotions, her rudeness, her dynamism, her smartness, her anger, her temper that the whole force that worked under her feared.. the glimpse of it Maan had seen but the stories he heard was far more strange to relate to his angel. All the lies she told maansi.. one thing he realized.. that was not his Geet.. it was his Geet...in grief.. in pain.. in anger..in anguish..scarred .. with life to have departed them.. but .. his Geet !!! who was now waiting for him.. with his angel some where.. on the pretext of punishing him.. will not be anywhere here.. !! it was so simple.. he was such an idiot he thought!!! his daughter was true..the king didn't try hard enough!!!

OUR happy memories and dreams for the future''

The day I met you, I felt alive,
There was just happiness in my life.
You filled my life with colours plenty,
Being with you made me fell happy.

Your smile was infectious, it was beautiful,
My life was perfect, it was joyful'.
Your innocence, your care, made my heart beat,
With you around I felt complete'..

The day began with your voice,
It ended a similar way'
You are a drug to me'
How could I stay away??

I know I have a terrible temper'
But, you always managed to have your way.
Hours of restlessness, a day full of anger,
A moment with you washed it all away!

Never ever your trust wavered,
But, your possessiveness could get anyone slaughtered!
Sherni for the world, a delicate princess within..
The depth of your love, could make oceans seem grim'..

Maan Singh khurana was bachhan for you,
You loved your bachhan, never put any questions too'
Impressed by MSK, but still loyal your Bachhan'
Each moment you made me fall for you all over again!!!

These memories are my life,
Won't think of the pain'
The past tense I have used,
Will make it present again!!

You know I love you, as you do to me'
The love that we share can never lose its sheen..
That Bachhan was your slave, MSK is a biggder one..
With my cute, innocent sherni I want my life to be fun!!!

I say MY LIFE'coz I want you happy'
MY LIFE is yours'so I will make you happy!!!

POEM BY SWATI
PRESS LIKE BUTTON & COMMENT MOTIVATES ME😳

Precap
was it so simple!!! or was it truly magical!!!
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hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan



Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was awesome Muskan..
The first word spoken by Maansi..Daddy.. its very heart touching...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭


So finally Mann understood where she is... So they will meet... 😊

Okk. let me guess.. Geet in London's flat????????

Pls continue soon... Dying for reunion...
Edited by PoojaMishty - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it to the core
the way u wrote is out of d world
plz plz continue soon
cant wait to see how they meet
thanks for d update
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Posted: 14 years ago
me i'm out of words
to express how
i feel
simply flawless
& beautiful
the precap sounds
interesting
pls cont soonnn
thnak yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
i don't have words to describe my feelings now, am speechless officialy 😭 😭 😭 😭 whats with the precap 😲 hope its optimistic 😕
Edited by -memorable- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
why i'm having some notions that it's going to end that also a sad one.
hey please no sad ending. please please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice..very well written Muskaan...hmm where can Geet be...their home...Looks like London might be calling Maan ..at least I hope it is...the light at the end of the painful path...
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Posted: 14 years ago
sad update...again cried reading it...i cant tell u how good u r in writing in words...thanx for giving us such nice updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
You made me cry 😭... yet again.. it is awesome... i always read but rarely comment.. this part made me comment... you are an amazing writer who can make so many people cry, laugh and feel happy...
I have to admit in front of everyone that i have read your FF's many times and i am sure i will continue to do the same...
Thank you for such lovely FF's
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Posted: 14 years ago
Quick comment -- unbearably heartbreaking and heart lifting at the same time! What an incredibly journey and so beautifully told. No other FF can hold a candle to your writing -- the emotions you manage to wring out of your fictional characters; it is easy to forget that they are just that. Please give us many, many, many, many magical Geet-MSK-MK moments after their reunion. After what you have put us through, we need and deserve extensive therapy through your updates. So please NO hurried epilogue and end of story!!!!!!!!

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